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    The Most Distant Course

    Story written on March 30, 2019 by Crystal J.H.
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    “They found the girl’s sore spot, using it against her. Due to the highest power in town, the people in that place banished the little girl out, left her nowhere to go to rot by the time she was seventeen years old. The little girl lost everything that meant to her, a dead-alive person, to

    “They found the girl’s sore spot, using it against her. Due to the highest power in town, the people in that place banished the little girl out, left her nowhere to go to rot by the time she was seventeen years old. The little girl lost everything that meant to her, a dead-alive person, to be more specific, dying is the only thing she’s craving for.” Tina closes her eyes. “By a quirk of fate, the girl’s father found her after all the bad things she’d been through, before that, she had been taken, tricked, forced, even harassed. The worst nightmare she had ever been through…but you know what, everything happened for a reason.”

    Tina’s hazel eyes turn dark, the warm and gentle are no longer appear in those pupils.

    “While she’s in the dark, she overheard that some girl’s talking about a huge entertainment brothel that used to be located in the suburb, they all wish that this kind of place can be rebuilt so they could work in a nicer place. That brothel was famous once, lots of famous people presence, they spent money without stint, girls could earn a lot in one night, it’s like a paradise for the prostitutes… But there was a story about this place, although the heavenly alike brothel continued to apply for girls, people never saw any of them came out from that place. Even it’s been years, there were still rumors spread across the prostitutes that some girls never appeared after they got in… isn’t the story seems familiar to you, chief police?”

    The chief of police starts to sweat, many doubts seem to be getting clearer.

    “Yes, how could you forget? You are the one who handled this brothel fire case, you did remember something, didn’t you? The number of the burnt dead body seems not to meet the number on the prostitute list, looks like lots of girls had been missing. But what did you do? Nothing. You just closed the case by claiming that this was just an accident. Correct me, if I was wrong.”

    The chief police’s face is now puffing, his breathing becomes rapid, his teeth bite tightly almost can feel his mouth shaking.

    “And what did it have anything to do with the former story I told? Everything. The girl understood she needed to seek revenge herself, so she joined her father, rebuilt her power, using her intelligence to find a way to climb up to the highest throne. At the same time, making use of the information that she got from the worst experience. One by one, she decided to take down those who have done awful things to me.”

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      • Hi Zhenya:

        Thanks for the comment, I’m afraid not, I think it will be too obvious that someone is against them if the next target is Adele. Just for warning, the chapters later on won’t be easy to read.

    2. Hi CJ,

      Sorry to hear you had a tough month! I will ???? april brings you much joy and positive things!

      Impressing how Tina handled the chief!!! He is down and played his card.

      I think they are going back to town and visit her aunts grave.

      Marveleous story!!!

      • Hi Bibi28:

        Thank you, I hope so too, I really need some positive thoughts now, lots of things happened in March.

        I’m happy for Tina that she finally put Adele’s father in jail, which means the story is already halfway left to go.

        Just like I’ve said before, the story later on will be hard to read, welcome to give me any opinion if you have.

        Thanks for the comment! Bibi28!

        CJ

    3. Hi CJ:

      Wow, that was very interesting and very good. So Tina is taking revenge and I don’t think it is only personal, I think she is making justice, that chief police is the worse that could happen to the Law enforcement, a corrupted, chauvinist, criminal, he and the others deserve the punishment, as they say, karma is a bitch.

      The question is who is going to take his place in Cooper’s organization? Tina only has Shane, I don’t think she could trust Sam.

      I hope your hard time will end soon, and we could enjoy more of this story.
      I will be waiting eagerly for the update.

      Thanks for the chapter, it is excellent.

      P

      • Hi proteonomics:

        Tina is not a heartless person, I believe she won’t kill anyone without any reason. Sending Adele’s father into prison was what she does to revenge, which is the best way to punish him and let him taste the consequences of what he’s done.

        I think Tina has no choice, she has to trust Sam, she’s reliable, talented and smart, despite the fact that she dislikes Bette, I think she will be Tina’s best and only choice.

        Thank you for the support and comments, my friend, I hope the following days will be better.

        CJ

    4. Thank you for the chapter!

      I like how Tina doing her revenge, but where she going to find so many loyalty to her people, to replace syndicate heads?

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