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The Most Distant Course (Final)
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“Is that Bette Porter? Mayor of LA?”
“Who’s the woman in front of her?”
“She must be the woman Bette Porter mentioned on the show. God, she’s astonishing…”
The gossips emerge wherever the couple walkthrough, after seeing the true color of the mystery woman the mayor was talking about, those who’re trying to pursue Bette suddenly pale in comparison. In a flash, Tina’s beauty and graciousness throw all of them into the shade, her elegance and tenderness conceal the high intelligence, introversion, and bashfulness showing nothing weak but humble, refined on the outside but independent and strong in the inside…This woman is incomparable.
The brunette also, enjoying Tina declaring the sovereignty of her woman, the erotic chemistry between her and Tina grow and shift, so powerful and satisfying.
Since they’ve appeared, the stage somehow starting to blur, whoever surrounds them are like a mist, disappear into nowhere, spotlights center on the couple, capturing all the attention in the club.
Bette and Tina’s bodies follow the rhythm of the song softly swinging, their foreheads touching one another, arms softly caressing their lover’s skin, simply enjoying the company with the love of their life…Every move is so natural, so real, the love, the chemistry between them is so strong, filling up the entire dance floor.
At that moment, two souls turn into one, they look perfect.
We could light a bunch of candles
And dance around the kitchen, baby
Pictures of when we were young would hang on the wall
We would sit on the stoop
I’ll sing love songs to you when we’re eighty
See, I finally got you now, honey, I won’t let you fall
The gang sits in the VIP box, chatting and drinking happily, they haven’t noticed the changing of the song, not until Shane sees what her wife is looking at, then she realizes Bette and Tina have been missing.
“I can imagine them together.” Says Tasha, she’s been watching those two for so long.
Finally, after being through so many ups and downs, they are finally together, holding each other in the public, as any other couples do…
Hearing the brunette, everyone in the box turns their head to the direction, seeing
“Those two?” Alice asks. “Yeah, they belong together.”
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Author note:
It’s been for more a year since this story came out, thank you for all of your support, feedback, and comments, it’s truly been a long while. I wasn’t expecting I could continue for this long, there had been ups and downs, especially for my lack of experience of writing and the poor language did annoy some readers, but still, all your replies and messages gave me hope and courage to continue.
And now the new show is starting, though Laurel wasn’t in it I believe she will want us to support the new show, even though it cannot compare with the original.
Special thanks to Bibi28, SassyGran, and especially proteonomics, who gave a lot of advice for the story and the grammar checking, thank you for the special contribution for this story.
Last but not least, I will try to keep writing another new story, but there’s a bunch of ideas I want to write but the time is the issue, if you still want to read my story, please don’t hesitate to tell me, I would really like to know what genre you would like to read.
Again, thank you so much.
Love Laurel.
CJ
Hello CJ. You took us on an amazing journey with this story. It’s one of the most creative and intriguing plots I’ve ever read. Thoroughly enjoyed it, and hope you will entertain us with another story soon. Any genre you choose is fine as long as it’s Tibette. It’s funny because I don’t usually read teenage Tibette stories and that is what I expected this one to be, so I almost missed it. Glad I decided to give it a try. Thank you for sharing your talent. The finale was perfect. I like that you incorporated some of the new show making Bette the Major. I agree even though Laurel is doing her art and hasn’t returned to acting she would want us to support the next generation and iteration of the L Word. Take care. Happy Holidays, and come back soon.
Hi CJ:
A wonderful ending of this beautiful story, Bette and Tina together, giving us hopes that a lesbian relationship can thrive no matter how bad the dark and negative forces around want to smash their bond because if you have love in your life you have the strength to face the world and make the difference.
Very touching the remembrance of their youth when they were in high school, well I stop this or I’ll get emotional.
Yes, it’s hard to end a story, especially the ones where there are adventures, hard and sweet moments, drama and romance, it feels like you are leaving part of you, and this is something that readers hardly can totally understand; as a writer, I’d say that it’s like you are saying goodbye to something very close to you, something that is part of you, and even if all those stories have different meaning for each writer, on each of that, we put a significant part of us in them.
I hope you start posting your new story soon, I’ll be following you, my friend.
Thank you very much for this.
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Hi CJ,
What a beautiful end to this story!
I loved that you refered to the show that is on tv now and other lines you used from the original The L Word.
It was quite a journey you took us readers and our favourite couple Tibette.
But at the end they are finally the family they wanted to be.
So glad that Shane is alive and back in Tina’s life after so many years apart.
The songs you used and the poem, just amazing and so fitting!
I really hope you will find the time to write another story, the one we already talked about in private!
Thank you for sharing this story with us!!!
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A very beautiful ending for a very beautiful story. I have been enjoying this story from the very beginning. Thank you for sharing this story with all of us. I will definitely follow your other stories. Keep on writing Crystal.
Hola Cj me encantó el final de esta historia no quería que diera fin pero gracias esperando también que subas otras historias me encantaria
I enjoyed this story and appreciate the beautiful ending. I have read many stories and I find that large numbers are simply incomplete. People either do not have desire to complete their, or they run into a brick wall with their story line or life just gets in way. In the words of most everyone I know – it happens. Thank you for taking the time to write and complete this story. I hope you will continue to write and make contributions to this website. I want to keep Bette and Tina alive as long as we can. I look forward to whatever you publish in the future. My best wishes for your future.
Thank you so much for this amazing story.
There were times at the beginning that were difficult for me to read
as I am very much against people doing drugs, So I would skim over
some pages but I am glad I was able to stick with your story.
I am looking forward to reading your next story. hopefully it will be filled
with love, fun and adventure.
Thanks CJ for this amazing story. I enjoyed every twist and turn of the the plot and read with great satisfaction when the pieces fell into place. Your ending was a perfect one for our beloved Tibette. It is how it should be, Bette as the mayor, Tina by her side as her wife, raising their children together.
I look forward to reading your next story. I love Tibette stories and you write them so well.
Hi CJ!
Congratulations on finishing your story and thank you again for sharing it with us. I agree your writing is at times a bit unorthodox but you do write beautifully. You are an amazing writer and storyteller. Thank you for bringing this story to a close and happy ending for our favorite couple. I’m planning on reading this story again, because I enjoyed it so thoroughly. It’s just such a beautiful love story…. they lost each other several times but finally got together at the end. Loved the poem to end it. Thank you so much and please keep writing! I look forward to seeing a new story from you.
Thank you for finishing this story and for the way you finished it.
I look forward to a new Story and will look forward to reading it so long as it features TiBette!
SG
Hi CJ,
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I am a silent reader, had been following this story when you first post a year ago. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I love reading this story. You are really amazing in your writing. Feel happy that it’s a good ending for our favourite couple. I hope you will come back soon for another great story.
Merry Christmas and have a great festive season!