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The Most Distant Course (Final)
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“Not at all…look like our little girl is going to be healthy and strong, huh?” Bette smirks, kissing her wife again. “How’s my daughter doing? Did she behave well?”
“She does miss her mama.”
“Oh…Isn’t that sweet?”
The LA Mayor gives a kiss on her wife’s belly, gently touches the ball alike stomach, careful not to make any harm on her vulnerable wife.
“Taking very good care of your mama, would ya?” The Mayor whispers to the belly. “Don’t hurt her…”
Tina chuckles at the silliness of Bette, how she loves this woman.
“Where’s Noah?” Bette asks.
“He’s doing his homework, he insisted he’s going to wait for you to come back for dinner.”
“Nice…” The brunette gives one last peck on her lover’s lips, then she walks to the stairs and yells out. “Noah! I’m home!”
Rapid footsteps appear, a boy runs out of stares in a flash.
“Be careful, honey, you might trip.”
Bette watches her son ran down from his room, not even reaching the ground, he opens his arms and offers a big hug for his mother. Bette of course, scooping her son up with all her strength, unlike years ago, the boy has grown taller, even heavier than before.
“Mama B, you are late!”
“I’m sorry, honey, I got a late-night show to catch.”
“Not again,” Noah rolls his eyes and groans. “I’m going to complain to aunt Alice, didn’t she know that her show is so boring?”
“You better not say that in front of her,” The pregnant woman yelled from the kitchen. “She will go crazy and start to talk non-stop.”
“But Mama T, it’s true, you also say so.” The boy protests.
Bette raises her eyebrows high up, holding Noah in her arms, she walks back to her wife who is now busy preparing dinner.
“Boring, huh?”
Bette smirks, she turns and looks at the television, which is now broadcasting the late-night show with a particular blonde standing in the middle of the camera.
“Thank you for watching the late-night show, Ladies, and Gentlemen, don’t forget, every Friday night, every fun day night, I’m Alice Pieszecki, see you next time!”
Tina Kennard walks out of the kitchen with three plates of food on it, seeing the smug on Bette’s face, she rolls her eyes.
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Author note:
It’s been for more a year since this story came out, thank you for all of your support, feedback, and comments, it’s truly been a long while. I wasn’t expecting I could continue for this long, there had been ups and downs, especially for my lack of experience of writing and the poor language did annoy some readers, but still, all your replies and messages gave me hope and courage to continue.
And now the new show is starting, though Laurel wasn’t in it I believe she will want us to support the new show, even though it cannot compare with the original.
Special thanks to Bibi28, SassyGran, and especially proteonomics, who gave a lot of advice for the story and the grammar checking, thank you for the special contribution for this story.
Last but not least, I will try to keep writing another new story, but there’s a bunch of ideas I want to write but the time is the issue, if you still want to read my story, please don’t hesitate to tell me, I would really like to know what genre you would like to read.
Again, thank you so much.
Love Laurel.
CJ
Hello CJ. You took us on an amazing journey with this story. It’s one of the most creative and intriguing plots I’ve ever read. Thoroughly enjoyed it, and hope you will entertain us with another story soon. Any genre you choose is fine as long as it’s Tibette. It’s funny because I don’t usually read teenage Tibette stories and that is what I expected this one to be, so I almost missed it. Glad I decided to give it a try. Thank you for sharing your talent. The finale was perfect. I like that you incorporated some of the new show making Bette the Major. I agree even though Laurel is doing her art and hasn’t returned to acting she would want us to support the next generation and iteration of the L Word. Take care. Happy Holidays, and come back soon.
Hi CJ:
A wonderful ending of this beautiful story, Bette and Tina together, giving us hopes that a lesbian relationship can thrive no matter how bad the dark and negative forces around want to smash their bond because if you have love in your life you have the strength to face the world and make the difference.
Very touching the remembrance of their youth when they were in high school, well I stop this or I’ll get emotional.
Yes, it’s hard to end a story, especially the ones where there are adventures, hard and sweet moments, drama and romance, it feels like you are leaving part of you, and this is something that readers hardly can totally understand; as a writer, I’d say that it’s like you are saying goodbye to something very close to you, something that is part of you, and even if all those stories have different meaning for each writer, on each of that, we put a significant part of us in them.
I hope you start posting your new story soon, I’ll be following you, my friend.
Thank you very much for this.
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Hi CJ,
What a beautiful end to this story!
I loved that you refered to the show that is on tv now and other lines you used from the original The L Word.
It was quite a journey you took us readers and our favourite couple Tibette.
But at the end they are finally the family they wanted to be.
So glad that Shane is alive and back in Tina’s life after so many years apart.
The songs you used and the poem, just amazing and so fitting!
I really hope you will find the time to write another story, the one we already talked about in private!
Thank you for sharing this story with us!!!
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A very beautiful ending for a very beautiful story. I have been enjoying this story from the very beginning. Thank you for sharing this story with all of us. I will definitely follow your other stories. Keep on writing Crystal.
Hola Cj me encantó el final de esta historia no quería que diera fin pero gracias esperando también que subas otras historias me encantaria
I enjoyed this story and appreciate the beautiful ending. I have read many stories and I find that large numbers are simply incomplete. People either do not have desire to complete their, or they run into a brick wall with their story line or life just gets in way. In the words of most everyone I know – it happens. Thank you for taking the time to write and complete this story. I hope you will continue to write and make contributions to this website. I want to keep Bette and Tina alive as long as we can. I look forward to whatever you publish in the future. My best wishes for your future.
Thank you so much for this amazing story.
There were times at the beginning that were difficult for me to read
as I am very much against people doing drugs, So I would skim over
some pages but I am glad I was able to stick with your story.
I am looking forward to reading your next story. hopefully it will be filled
with love, fun and adventure.
Thanks CJ for this amazing story. I enjoyed every twist and turn of the the plot and read with great satisfaction when the pieces fell into place. Your ending was a perfect one for our beloved Tibette. It is how it should be, Bette as the mayor, Tina by her side as her wife, raising their children together.
I look forward to reading your next story. I love Tibette stories and you write them so well.
Hi CJ!
Congratulations on finishing your story and thank you again for sharing it with us. I agree your writing is at times a bit unorthodox but you do write beautifully. You are an amazing writer and storyteller. Thank you for bringing this story to a close and happy ending for our favorite couple. I’m planning on reading this story again, because I enjoyed it so thoroughly. It’s just such a beautiful love story…. they lost each other several times but finally got together at the end. Loved the poem to end it. Thank you so much and please keep writing! I look forward to seeing a new story from you.
Thank you for finishing this story and for the way you finished it.
I look forward to a new Story and will look forward to reading it so long as it features TiBette!
SG
Hi CJ,
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I am a silent reader, had been following this story when you first post a year ago. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I love reading this story. You are really amazing in your writing. Feel happy that it’s a good ending for our favourite couple. I hope you will come back soon for another great story.
Merry Christmas and have a great festive season!