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The Onyx
“I’ll take you to your favorite place… a least the one you liked”
“Right… how is it called?”
“The planet” haha man I guess its not that different after all
“Who owns the place?”
“Oh I forgot that part… Kid is the owner she is also Beth sister but they dont really talk… well they hate each other”
“Oh… man at least I can have my coffee the right way here” We get there and there is a few people eating and stuff. Kid sees us motion to a table for us
“Hey girl!”
“Hey”
“What are you doing here at 5pm? You always here for the party not the food”
“Yea well… I’m here”
We eat and talk some more. She tell me I’ve had the Onyx since she remembered. An hour go’s by and Jenny’s phone rigs
“Hello how can Miss Shane help you”…. Ok I guess its mine “It’s Helena”
“Hello”
“Hey dear how are you feeling?”
“Better thank you”
“Listen, Dana told me the thing with Beth…and I understand perfectly”
“I don’t think you do”
“Look we are going to pick you and your little slave at 9pm. We’re going out so we can talk about things”
“Ok”
“Well talk to you later then. Take care. Bye”
“Bye” I give Jenny the phone “… we are going out tonight Jenny” all of a sudden I’m in a limo. Its 9pm .. Helena, Dana , Alice, Jenny and me. What the fuck is going on… things are already weird… now time skips? …. Then I remember what Cliff told me “……. There are no rules in time… or not time at all.” Shit. I look at the Onyx and its black…. I don’t know what that means… I don’t know what the fuck is going on. Maybe I can control time…. Lets see… think about Jenny crying hitting her self… think about it…
“Are you ok honey?… you look like you need to go to the bathroom” Alice says… ok maybe I can’t control time. We don’t talk much on the way to this place called ‘Monster house’ Helena wanted to go there. I’ve never been there… so I’m told. We get there and its full of woman. Music its really loud almost to loud for me. We see naked woman on stage as we past by looking for our seats everywoman looking at me trying to seduce me with there eyes. We get to the VIP area…. I guess I’m very popular. The VIP area has a stage for its own. We order some drinks. We talk As we see beautiful woman dance for us. Helena said she didn’t want to talk about the Beth problem that she just wanted to have fun. So we do.
“So Shane I have a surprise for you”
“For me, why?”
“Well you got bloody shot?… I thank god it was you and not me” she laugh like it was a joke but I can see thru her… she’s so not lying. “Well I bough you a privet lap dance”
“haha you don’t have to Helena don’t worry”
“I already have” then a blond woman comes towards me
“Look I cant im still hurt and if she touches me it will hurt”
“Come on Shane!! Who declines a lap dance to this beautiful woman? You don’t mind Alice right?”
“No I don’t”
“Come on Shy I will make it worth it”
“I-Im Shane not Shay and Dana you go for it”
“Shane!!!”
“Go”
“Fine” And Dana goes with the girl. We talk some more but then the music stops and the lights go off.
“Ok so know we have The senter of our show. This is the sexiest woman alive in all LA… Hear we have…. CAT!!!!” the lights and the music are on and I see her….. Carmen…..
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i sooooo wanna see Carmen dance for Shane… hehehe
Wow~ totally different! But you’re gettig enemies for killing Tina. haha~ Lap Dance and Carmen! hmmmmmmm so perfect! pps!!!