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The Perfect Getaway – Chapter 7 ((Final Chapter))
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She inwardly smiled at the huge understatement of “like” but was filled with a sadness when she remembered that Tina wasn’t too fond of her at the moment.
“Actually, I’m not sure if she likes me right now” She admitted sadly and for reasons she didn’t understand.
Suddenly Brian was curious and the concern showed in his eyes, “Why not?”
“We had a fight” Bette shrugged. Was she really confiding in a five year old? Brian of all people?
“Where is she now?” When Bette said she didn’t know, she saw some misplaced fear in Brian’s eyes but Bette reasoned it was just because he was fond of her wife.
“Why are you here?” He asked frantically while trying to push her off the rock, “You have to to find her, Bette. She’s gonna get a divorce”
Bette wanted to laugh again at how extreme the boy thought the situation was and also at how he knew such a big word. She knew her problem with Tina was bad but Bette had faith in their love and the fact that they would work through this obstacle. Tina wouldn’t divorce her, Bette wouldn’t let it happen.
A second later, it hit her. Brian’s plea suddenly had a far deeper meaning and Bette realized exactly what had happened to the small boy still struggling to push her off the rock.
“Is that what you’re mommy is gonna do?”
Suddenly, Brian stopped pushing her but kept his small hands on her arm. Before Bette could even blink, he punched her on the same arm in his frustration. She flinched not out of pain but out of surprise. She had been right.
“Shut up. You don’t know anything!”
He threw blow after blow and for a moment  Bette watched in shock, heartbroken and speechless as her eyes welled up with tears. The scene before her was so much like her own so many painful years ago when she wasn’t much older than Brian was now.
The memory of punching and kicking Kit came to mind, crying and screaming at her to take it all back. Mommy wasn’t leaving, mommy wasn’t getting a divorce. They were a family, that couldn’t happen.
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✊😄 yay! Thank you Miss Liah. Have fun on your break. 😘
Thank you for this amazing story.Happy holidays and please continue writing.
a seven day trip in paradise with the love of my life. What’s the worst that could happen?” … a lot, we hope :)
Great story – great ending! Brava!
nicely wrapped! thanks for the ride. next story please :)
Liah x Doll – I just caught up with this story from the beginning. Not sure how I missed it, but glad I took the time read. Very enjoyable Bette and Tina antics. Loved how Brian and Bette interacted. Thank you.
Great ending to a fantastic story! Thanks so much for taking the time to share it with us.
Beautiful story.
I liked Tina dousing Bette with the super soaker as a way to announce her presence. The honest talk was nice as well. Thanks for the story! :)
Thank you for a wonderful story. Loved every word of it ;)
This is why you earned yourself a place in my fav list! Thank you Liah! xxK
Thanks for this fantastic ending. I can’t wait to read your next story.
Wonderful story, thanks so much
Thank you for this amazing story. Enjoyed every bit of it. I loved the super soakers part especially with Tina getting Bette quite well. Wonderful ending to this chapter in their lives. thanks for getting them over the hurdles.
Hello there Liah!! :) thanks for the story! :) so glad to be able to catch up (finally!!) and so happy to read this! Such a lovely story! Thank you!! ^^,
Great story… I can’t wait to read about what happens in Mexico… I hope you write that one too!!
Liked this story alot!!! Well written and funny, charming, sexy dialogue! Really enjoyed it! Look forward to reading more from this author! Am a true Tibette fan!
What a lovely story, full of humor and emotions – such a great, endearing mix !
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us :-)
I’m currently savouring your very moving and wonderful When You Least Expect It, truly magnificent… Talk with you soon !