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The Perfect Getaway – Chapter 7 ((Final Chapter))
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It was as if she had gotten the final laugh: Take that mom, I did it without you.
As if she was hit with some kind of all powerful piece of wisdom, Bette knew in her heart that she would never be like her mother. It was an initial fear of Bette’s that considering her mother’s track record, that just maybe Maxine Porter’s parenting skills were somehow genetic. After being there with Brian, Bette knew it was impossible to turn out like her mother. If anything Bette would be the best mother she could be, doing everything her own mother didn’t.
Now looking into Brian’s teary eyes, Bette would never tell him what her own mother did or even fill him with such negative thoughts of how some parents change after a divorce. In reality, not all parents were like that and Bette was certain Brian’s weren’t like that either.
“Oh sweetie, your mommy and daddy love you. They love you so much and no matter what happens, that’s never gonna change okay?”
Brian nodded slowly and sniffed, wiping his eyes with the sleeves of his shirt.
“Mommy’s and daddy’s . . they fight, it happens. Sometimes they don’t stay together as much as we want them to but that doesn’t mean they’ll love you any less”
Brian nodded again and contemplated something. Then just like any five year old, he looked into Bette’s eyes with such innocence and asked a question only a five year old would ask.
“Does that mean I get to have two birthday cakes? My friend Sarah said she gets a cake from her mommy and one from her daddy”
Bette couldn’t help but laugh and nod her head, “Yeah, I guess it does”
Brian pumped his small fist with excitement, his sadness momentarily forgotten. Bette couldn’t help but laugh again as silence enveloped them for a second, both of them just staring out at a group of kids playing football on the beach.
“You know . . you’re a really cool kid. I hope mine turns out to be half as cool as you”
Brian turned his head and beamed at Bette before his expression turned to one of confusion. He looked down at her slim stomach and angled his head with curiosity.
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✊😄 yay! Thank you Miss Liah. Have fun on your break. 😘
Thank you for this amazing story.Happy holidays and please continue writing.
a seven day trip in paradise with the love of my life. What’s the worst that could happen?” … a lot, we hope :)
Great story – great ending! Brava!
nicely wrapped! thanks for the ride. next story please :)
Liah x Doll – I just caught up with this story from the beginning. Not sure how I missed it, but glad I took the time read. Very enjoyable Bette and Tina antics. Loved how Brian and Bette interacted. Thank you.
Great ending to a fantastic story! Thanks so much for taking the time to share it with us.
Beautiful story.
I liked Tina dousing Bette with the super soaker as a way to announce her presence. The honest talk was nice as well. Thanks for the story! :)
Thank you for a wonderful story. Loved every word of it ;)
This is why you earned yourself a place in my fav list! Thank you Liah! xxK
Thanks for this fantastic ending. I can’t wait to read your next story.
Wonderful story, thanks so much
Thank you for this amazing story. Enjoyed every bit of it. I loved the super soakers part especially with Tina getting Bette quite well. Wonderful ending to this chapter in their lives. thanks for getting them over the hurdles.
Hello there Liah!! :) thanks for the story! :) so glad to be able to catch up (finally!!) and so happy to read this! Such a lovely story! Thank you!! ^^,
Great story… I can’t wait to read about what happens in Mexico… I hope you write that one too!!
Liked this story alot!!! Well written and funny, charming, sexy dialogue! Really enjoyed it! Look forward to reading more from this author! Am a true Tibette fan!
What a lovely story, full of humor and emotions – such a great, endearing mix !
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us :-)
I’m currently savouring your very moving and wonderful When You Least Expect It, truly magnificent… Talk with you soon !