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The Perfect Getaway – Chapter 7 ((Final Chapter))
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“Hey, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean-”
In a flash, Brian whipped around sporting his own super soaker and shot Bette in the same way she had shot him moments earlier. The only difference was that he didn’t scream, Bette did.
The brunette squealed as the cold water soaked into her t-shirt and she rolled off to dodge the merciless five year old. Where she had only sprayed him once for a short amount of time, Brian wasn’t as lenient. Bette took cover behind the rock and shot back at her opponent, laughing when she heard Brian scream. She had hit her target.
Brian fell to his knees and quickly crawled over to the other side of the rock, hiding behind it as he thought of a way to shoot Bette back.
Every so often, Bette and Brian would poke out of their hiding spots aimed and ready to shoot. Sometimes, they missed and sometimes they didn’t. Either way, they screamed with laughter as they ducked back into hiding.
It was hard to believe the hard ass gallery owner was on her hands and knees playing water games with a five year old but there she was, laughing through her deep breaths as she hid behind the rock. Bette pumped her gun to so that the next time she shot her gun, the water would travel further and that was when she realized how quiet it had gotten between them. She glanced down at her outfit and saw that she was completely drenched from head to toe. Brian wasn’t as wet as she was which meant that Bette was losing, with a smirk she crawled around the side of the rock. She wasn’t about to lose yet another game to the pipsqueak she had somehow grew fond of.
Bette held her gun in one hand as she used the other the stealthily crawl around to where Brian was hiding. She brought up her gun ready to shoot but was met with surprise when Brian wasn’t where he had been.
Before her confusion could even fully register, Bette was hit with a cold burst of water to her back. She gasped and kneeled upright, placing her hand over the cold spot on her back as Brian laughed behind her.
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✊😄 yay! Thank you Miss Liah. Have fun on your break. 😘
Thank you for this amazing story.Happy holidays and please continue writing.
a seven day trip in paradise with the love of my life. What’s the worst that could happen?” … a lot, we hope :)
Great story – great ending! Brava!
nicely wrapped! thanks for the ride. next story please :)
Liah x Doll – I just caught up with this story from the beginning. Not sure how I missed it, but glad I took the time read. Very enjoyable Bette and Tina antics. Loved how Brian and Bette interacted. Thank you.
Great ending to a fantastic story! Thanks so much for taking the time to share it with us.
Beautiful story.
I liked Tina dousing Bette with the super soaker as a way to announce her presence. The honest talk was nice as well. Thanks for the story! :)
Thank you for a wonderful story. Loved every word of it ;)
This is why you earned yourself a place in my fav list! Thank you Liah! xxK
Thanks for this fantastic ending. I can’t wait to read your next story.
Wonderful story, thanks so much
Thank you for this amazing story. Enjoyed every bit of it. I loved the super soakers part especially with Tina getting Bette quite well. Wonderful ending to this chapter in their lives. thanks for getting them over the hurdles.
Hello there Liah!! :) thanks for the story! :) so glad to be able to catch up (finally!!) and so happy to read this! Such a lovely story! Thank you!! ^^,
Great story… I can’t wait to read about what happens in Mexico… I hope you write that one too!!
Liked this story alot!!! Well written and funny, charming, sexy dialogue! Really enjoyed it! Look forward to reading more from this author! Am a true Tibette fan!
What a lovely story, full of humor and emotions – such a great, endearing mix !
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us :-)
I’m currently savouring your very moving and wonderful When You Least Expect It, truly magnificent… Talk with you soon !