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The Promise
Tina: Just go, itll be done by then and Im going to get home anyway.
Shane looked over at Alice. Alice stared blankly at her and then turned her attention back to the stage.
Shane: Uhh…Al? I guess Ill see you later…
Alice: If you can manage to fit me into your schedule.
Shane looked at Tina who mouthed Ouch! Shane crept out the theater and waited on the curb. While outside Shanes phone went off again.
Shane: Hey Bee…
Bette: Hey…
Shane: You dont sound too good….whats wrong?
Bette: I havent come up with anything yet…like I have a bunch of things I want to do but I want this to be big you know?
Shane: Are we talking about Mission Impossible?
Bette let out a sigh.
Shane: Hey Bee Im sorry …really I didnt mean that I just dont like the other name you came up with….Im down for this really whatever you need.
Bette: Really?!?!? Cause the first thing Im gonna need from you is the truck. I think I will have everything go down on Saturday…and Im still gonna need Dashs help…hmmm I would say Alices too, but I think she would spill to Tee.
Shane: Your gonna need to use Rocky?
Bette: Rocky?
Shane: Hey Im still testing names…but dont sweat it Bee…whats mine is yours.
Bette smiled into the phone
Bette: I know…I still like to ask though…alright I have to get back to work. Bye…love you
Shane: I know…Ill talk to you later and call me the second you think of something..
Bette: Shane…one of these days youre going to fight the four lettered monster!
Shane laughed and hung up.
@}~~~~~
Alice grew restless in her seat while listening to a young college man discuss his masturbation rituals.
Alice: Tee, I have to run to the bathroom, Ill be right back.
Alice snuck out of the theater and headed to the bathroom. She passed through the lobby and when she walked past a row of glass doors, she saw Shane walk up to a black pick-up truck that pulled in. She saw a teenager hop out and run over to Shane. The girl was the perfect image of what she would imagine Shanes own kid would look like. They both stood with their lanky yet relaxed stance. Both oozed confidence and complete control. Alice moved to the doors and as she pushed them open she stopped with what she heard.
Dash: Shane your truck ***** rocks!
Shane: Thanks man…I guess Cheris good for something other than a Fatal Attraction.
Dash: Alright let me hear the new names.
Shane: Okay Ive got Bugsy…Capone, Don Juan, and Ringo…
Dash rolls her eyes..
Dash: Ill go with Ringo…***** Ill go with anything if you swear you wont name it..Thelonious…that was the worst one yet….
Shane: Yeah, Yeah…so hows pops doing?
Dash: Not so good, I had to wheel him to the truck and help him in.
Shane: Alright lets get him back to the rectory.
Dash hopped in the passenger seat as Shane ran around the car and shoved Father Joe into the middle seat. Alice returned to the lobby of the theater and resumes her seat, where she spent the next twenty minutes fighting back tears.
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(13 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
You’re damn right I stopped…I’m falling asleep while typing I’ve been up sinve 430 and i went to bed at 1…a certain someone left dirty thoughts in my head that kept me up all night….~winks to the culprit~ alright I have to drive up to my BF’s wrestling match tomorrow with his whole fam arg! see you in a few
Awe… I can hear Alice’s little heart breaking.. Shane needs to come clean.. as for you my dear.. I am glad you are doing better without that other job..you deserve to be treated with respect…no matter what job you have!!! Good for you.. keep up the great work with this story I am sooo hooked.. and waiting for more.
Hey! well being sick.. drinking too much… then walking home; sounds very familiar lol!
As for the G/Friend, like everything else it is loong and complicated, but the simplest way to explain wots happening is “kind of”… i know i know vauge, but wot can u do, sometimes u just dont know…
EXCELLENT chapter! each one just gets better than the last, thanks for sharing ur amazing talent xx
Bette had better spend more time with Tina,she is feeling so alone right now. Shane needs to Just tell Alice that she loves her, Dash is cute. Shane needs to come clean to Al about Cherie. Thanks so much. Yes S2 is to short to not have good writer write. we all love your stories,so dont quit. just keep on.
ahhh dont leave me hanging i want more lol, great chapter. you’ve introduced Dash very well so no reason to be nervous ;) hope you write soon and i really need to write soon to. 5*stars for u!
Well, I hate ending like that. Damw cliffhanger. And I’m going to kick Shane ass if she don’t come clean to Alice fast. I know she love her but Alice is not sure of Shane feeling at all. Do something girl. Now I waiting for my next fix. Soon please.
Oh man this is crazy, Shane and Alice need to talk and can’t wait to see what happen next, post soon. Thank you!