LesFan

Lesbian Fan Social Network

    Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 9, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    The Promise

    Story written on February 7, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
     Login to add story to favorites
     Login to add author to favorites
    13 votes, average: 4.15 out of 513 votes, average: 4.15 out of 513 votes, average: 4.15 out of 513 votes, average: 4.15 out of 513 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5 (13 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
    You need to be a registered member to rate this post.     Loading ... Loading ...
    Genre(s):
    Rating:
    fanfiction(s):
    Character(s): N/A
    Number of Comments: 7
    Words: 3231
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=51982
    Author Notes:

    Chapter 23 – A woman who takes things from a man is a girlfriend, but a man who takes things from a woman is a gigalo.

    Dash: *****!

    Shane: What..

    Dash:Well the thing is, Prince is from the eighties…is she into eighties music?

    Shane: Yeah she said the eighties were the only time in history worth talking about.

    Dash: Hmmm…we have a bump in the road. I dont know if we should focus on the eighties or the music….I mean with all the ones from the eighties youll get music, but with the last one it focuses on the music.

    Shane: You know I hate you for opening this can of worms right…

    Dash: Hey Bette told me to explain it to you.

    Shanes phone began vibrating on the piano bench. She saw Alices number on the caller ID and smiled.

    Dash: Man youve got it bad!

    Shane: Hey you

    Alice: Hey, how was lunch with Bette?

    Shane: It was good….uhm…I was wondering….I know you wanted to go out tonight to that spoken word poetry thingy at six but….

    Alice sighed into the phone

    Alice: Whatever Shane, its fine that you cant go…its more Tinas style anyway I was gonna tell you I wanted to invite her with us. Look I have to go I just wanted to tell you that.

    Shane: Hey wait I…

    ::Click::

    Shane looked at her phone in shock.

    Shane: I know she didnt…but…Arg!

    Dash: Did she just hang up on you?

    Shane: Yeah…she got ticked before I could explain that I wanted to pick her up early tonight…I think she thought I wanted to cancel again….*****!

    Dash: Alright here

    Dash scribble something on a sheet of paper.

    Dash: Go and pick these up and try and catch her before she leaves…

    Shane: No Ill have to meet her afterwards at like eight…if I go now then Tina will have to go by herself…she invited her and Bette is at work til eight.

    Dash: Look its only four-fifteen now…just go and catch her and go with them….its not too late, stop being an *****.

    Shane: Im not an *****

    Dash: Yes you are, but for some reason we all put up with it.

    Shane messed up Dashs hair playfully.

    Shane: Alright but Ill stop by tomorrow, Im gonna check to see how this baby plays.

    Dash rolled her eyes, and Shane took off.

    Page 3 of 7‹ Previous12345Next ›Last »
    «
    FF Main Page
    »

    Comments

    1. You’re damn right I stopped…I’m falling asleep while typing I’ve been up sinve 430 and i went to bed at 1…a certain someone left dirty thoughts in my head that kept me up all night….~winks to the culprit~ alright I have to drive up to my BF’s wrestling match tomorrow with his whole fam arg! see you in a few

    2. Awe… I can hear Alice’s little heart breaking.. Shane needs to come clean.. as for you my dear.. I am glad you are doing better without that other job..you deserve to be treated with respect…no matter what job you have!!! Good for you.. keep up the great work with this story I am sooo hooked.. and waiting for more.

    3. Hey! well being sick.. drinking too much… then walking home; sounds very familiar lol!
      As for the G/Friend, like everything else it is loong and complicated, but the simplest way to explain wots happening is “kind of”… i know i know vauge, but wot can u do, sometimes u just dont know…
      EXCELLENT chapter! each one just gets better than the last, thanks for sharing ur amazing talent xx

    4. Bette had better spend more time with Tina,she is feeling so alone right now. Shane needs to Just tell Alice that she loves her, Dash is cute. Shane needs to come clean to Al about Cherie. Thanks so much. Yes S2 is to short to not have good writer write. we all love your stories,so dont quit. just keep on.

    5. ahhh dont leave me hanging i want more lol, great chapter. you’ve introduced Dash very well so no reason to be nervous ;) hope you write soon and i really need to write soon to. 5*stars for u!

    6. Well, I hate ending like that. Damw cliffhanger. And I’m going to kick Shane ass if she don’t come clean to Alice fast. I know she love her but Alice is not sure of Shane feeling at all. Do something girl. Now I waiting for my next fix. Soon please.

    Leave a Reply