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The Promise
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m-rave- don’t think we’re perverted but that was the wake up call my sis would give me when i first came home form college…she would sing that song and jump on my bed, leaving her ***** children for me to babysit at the butt-crack of dawn!
bvhalll- girl you have no idea! they are infor it…i’m gonna make them work to be happy!
maybeyes – they’re not so blind they just are self involved and only care about themselves and each other
Nix – you’re so sweet…I will try to write tomorrow, but I don’t know there is a premiere of the s2 first episode tomorrow that i want to go to.
JanetM _ from the dead!!!!!!!! oh if its who I think it is girl I am sending you a giant High five from jerz to maine!
Seven- long enough? trust me..i can go on for days! i just have to figure out where to end. Hence 26 chapter spanning less than a week in real time :(
Shy – I’d def. like to see that booty shake! as for SHane being blind…i meant it as Ironic, she can mack anyone and read their signs but is completely oblivious to the one person she lets in intimately.
confussed – thanks for the stars luv, I’m glad you liked it..how are things going?
Jesebel- welcome aboard …so I’vew got you hooked aye? now where will i lead you?
Lwordjunkie – those aren’t morsels I left behing, they’re clues for the future…never forget, never forget, never forget….
Chapter 26
The gaping hole you left in my chest still hurts when the wind blows. – JLO
Alice parked her Mini Cooper on the street and sat behind the wheel trying to gather her thoughts before she went into the Planet.
Alice: I know Shane is capable of sleeping with a married woman…and shes capable of being involved with two women at the same time but…sleeping with two women who are friends and one of them is married and knows about the other? And to do that when all four are good friends?…I know what I heard last night, but maybe Im taking it out of context…but I cant imagine what else that phone call could have possibly been….and she was relieved we didnt have *****? Then why the whole I cant keep my hands off you act?
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I love this story so much, it’s my favorite. I can’t function right cause I’m always checking for updates. I can’t wait to see where you take this. I love the Shane & Bette duo. Also, anticipating where you take the Dash storyline. Can’t wait for the next update.
Wow Al and Tina are really mad at Shane and Bette. I can’t wait to see how they will react to the truth. need a new fix soon.
This is too funny. I am so loving this.
Your story keeps getting better and better. I’m thoroughly addicted…there I’ve said it. And admitting it is the first step.
Woah…girl.. there are two really angry women here.. look out…nothing worse than a woman scorned.. but two.. OUCH.. can’t wait to see where you are going to take us next.. oh..even better crumbs here!!! “wink”
Amazing writing J! I loved this chapter and loved the line that Dana gave Shane to respond to Cherie with! Can’t wait for the next update..~winks and tries to wait patiently for the next part~
aww the webs u weave!! is Bette so blind she cant see that Tina is pissed off?? Saturday had better be good to win these two back!!
Excellent chapter again luv! and as for “how r things?” all I can say is same shit different day, u know? I did tell someone though, it was intese but I feel so much better and I can just be myself! WooHoo!
You should see the stupid smile on my face every time I’m reading one of your stories. Hell girl – you’re just brilliant.
Excellent, just excellent: length, content, humor, et al. I sure hope Tina and Alice’s regard for Bette and Shane’s friendship softens after they realize all the work the two have done together to help each other out in their respective intimate relationships. I guess we shall see what transpires eventually, since you did note that the next three days will be drawn out painfully slow. ;-)
Sorry, another long comment for a story I love so much.
It’s a thing to prepare a lovely and sincere surprise for her woman and it’s another to be almost indifferent with her : Bette don’t try touch, don’t smile and don’t talk to Tina. Why ? Doesn’t she see what Tina feel ? Doesn’t she see Tina take off her ring ? She doesn’t see Tina at all. A few minutes ago, she was affectionate with Shane. That’s Tina miss from Bette : loving. With Bette, it’s full or nothing, no ?
OK Shane try it and Alice don’t want. It’s normal, when Shane talk to Alice, she says… so she say. God, it’s complicated for these girls.
I love this little drama and dialogues are also funny.
It will be interesting to know what Alice and Tina think and what they’re doing to do thinking Bette and Shane are lovers.
Please update soon and thanks for this very good story.
LMAO, the last part is brilliant, okay the whole story is but the last part… I laughed so hard. I cant believe you once said you thought you couldn’t do funny..5stars girl!
Love Shane and Bette together, i hope Alice and Tina will wait for them untill saturday.
Ha ha ha, I love the Pussy Willow flower, that’s funny! Can’t wait to see what the girls have in store, hopefully Al and Tina will wait till after Bette’s plan has run it’s course before they kill em! :)
I can’t wait to see how this gets resolved! Very good!! I can’t wait for the next update!!
We have to angry,pissed off ladies and two that are so wraped up in what they are doing that they dont see what is going on. Danais the quite one,but some times so alert and smart. Hope the two angry one will wait for a few days before they kill Bette and Shane. thanks so much.
This is wonderful….and funny….keep going….another chap soon?
i really like this story.
I have been following this story and I am not sure if I have ever left a comment before, but I guess I will now. Thanks for this story. It has made the wait for the much anticipated second season bright. I really enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing with us.
Ok this is good and keep coming, post soon. Thank you!
OMFG! This is so great… It’s hilarious! “God, I think Dane would shit tennis balls if you just sat down at the piano and started playing.”