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    The Promise

    Story written on February 12, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Chapter 26 – My White Chocolate Mocha

    The passenger door flew open and Tina jumped in all in one fluid motion. Alice literally jumped out of her seat and up against the glass window.

    Alice: ***** Tina! Oh My God! You scared the ***** out of me.

    Tina: Sorry…I saw you pull up and I waited across the street but you never came out. I walked right in front of your car waving to you but you were in a trance.

    Alice: Sorry I just have a lot of stuff on my mind.

    Tina: I can tell…you want to talk about it?

    Alice: No…besides, I think whats going on with you is enough for both of us right now….and a lot more important.

    Tina: Nothings too big and important if theres something wrong with you Al…especially if you need help with anything.

    Alice: No Im gonna be fine.

    Tina: You know Alice, as far as the whole Dana, Tonya, Lara fiasco goes, you can still talk about it…I can give advice without taking sides…you guys did when Bette and I first broke up.

    Alice: Its not Dana, but if it were that simple, Id definitely go to you.

    Tina sat back in the car seat pondering what could be bigger then Dana, but too big for her to tell her.

    Tina: You believe what I told you last night dont you?

    Tinas answer came with the single tear that fell from Alices right eye.

    Alice: No I just….I cant believe it…No, I refuse to believe it…its one thing to think Bette might cheat since shes done it before….but Shane?

    Tina: I know, but Ive come to believe when it comes to ripping ones heart out, it doesnt matter who does it, or why…youve still got a gaping hole in your chest.

    Alice nodded and reflected on the mental image Tina left her with. She could just see her and Tina walking into Milk with giant bleeding holes in their chest, to join up with the countless people in the club that Shane and Bette had castaway over the years.

    Alice: The master and the protege, together at last.

    Tina sighed.

    Tina: Im assuming theyre in there?

    Alice: Yeah, Shane said she had to meet up early with Bette.

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    1. I love this story so much, it’s my favorite. I can’t function right cause I’m always checking for updates. I can’t wait to see where you take this. I love the Shane & Bette duo. Also, anticipating where you take the Dash storyline. Can’t wait for the next update.

    5. Woah…girl.. there are two really angry women here.. look out…nothing worse than a woman scorned.. but two.. OUCH.. can’t wait to see where you are going to take us next.. oh..even better crumbs here!!! “wink”

    6. Amazing writing J! I loved this chapter and loved the line that Dana gave Shane to respond to Cherie with! Can’t wait for the next update..~winks and tries to wait patiently for the next part~

    7. aww the webs u weave!! is Bette so blind she cant see that Tina is pissed off?? Saturday had better be good to win these two back!!
      Excellent chapter again luv! and as for “how r things?” all I can say is same shit different day, u know? I did tell someone though, it was intese but I feel so much better and I can just be myself! WooHoo!

    9. Excellent, just excellent: length, content, humor, et al. I sure hope Tina and Alice’s regard for Bette and Shane’s friendship softens after they realize all the work the two have done together to help each other out in their respective intimate relationships. I guess we shall see what transpires eventually, since you did note that the next three days will be drawn out painfully slow. ;-)

    10. Sorry, another long comment for a story I love so much.
      It’s a thing to prepare a lovely and sincere surprise for her woman and it’s another to be almost indifferent with her : Bette don’t try touch, don’t smile and don’t talk to Tina. Why ? Doesn’t she see what Tina feel ? Doesn’t she see Tina take off her ring ? She doesn’t see Tina at all. A few minutes ago, she was affectionate with Shane. That’s Tina miss from Bette : loving. With Bette, it’s full or nothing, no ?
      OK Shane try it and Alice don’t want. It’s normal, when Shane talk to Alice, she says… so she say. God, it’s complicated for these girls.
      I love this little drama and dialogues are also funny.
      It will be interesting to know what Alice and Tina think and what they’re doing to do thinking Bette and Shane are lovers.
      Please update soon and thanks for this very good story.

    11. LMAO, the last part is brilliant, okay the whole story is but the last part… I laughed so hard. I cant believe you once said you thought you couldn’t do funny..5stars girl!

    13. Ha ha ha, I love the Pussy Willow flower, that’s funny! Can’t wait to see what the girls have in store, hopefully Al and Tina will wait till after Bette’s plan has run it’s course before they kill em! :)

    15. We have to angry,pissed off ladies and two that are so wraped up in what they are doing that they dont see what is going on. Danais the quite one,but some times so alert and smart. Hope the two angry one will wait for a few days before they kill Bette and Shane. thanks so much.

    18. I have been following this story and I am not sure if I have ever left a comment before, but I guess I will now. Thanks for this story. It has made the wait for the much anticipated second season bright. I really enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing with us.

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