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The Promise
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Dana: Oh! I get it now…you have NOTHING…not you HAVE nothing
Everyone looked at Dana and shook their heads.
Shane turned over the piece of paper and waited.
Jenny: Tell her to kiss your *****!
Jenny goggled and Marina wrapped her arm around her shoulders.
Marina: Dont burn bridges Shane…you never know what could happen down the road.
Everyone nodded.
Lara: Just tell her that she mistook what you meant…You dont want her in your life..
Bette: Now step off *****!
Tina looked up at Bette.
Tina: I have to get to work.
Tina stood up and walked out ignoring Bette who was puckered up to kiss her good bye. Bette pouted but quickly turned back to the conversation.
Jenny: How about ….Keep your money honey!
Lara: Dont forget the bridge..
Jenny: Oh yeah!
Dana looked down at her drink and twisted her straw wrapper. She called for Shanes attention with a whisper that was barely heard.
Dana: Uhm…Youve changed and you dont see her in your new life, but you thank her because although you cant love her the way she wants you to, youve changed because of the time you had.
Marina looked at Dana.
Marina: Now that is an old fashioned classy girl.
Dana blushed.
Shane: Thanks Dane.
Shane and Dana locked eyes across the table. Dana smiled and nodded. She took a sip from her drink and sunk down in her seat. Lara brushed a hand along her cheek and kissed her. Shane wrote the message on the back of the note and gave it too Bryan.
Shane: If she asks what it means…Tell her I was really upset and explain to her that its over…Tell her Im with someone else, and they make me very happy…but that I said I never would have been able to do it without her help…..make its sound good like Shes the *****…and make sure she understands its over Bryan!
Bryan: Uhm Okay..I just..
Shane: What…
Bryan: I was kinda liking the money and the shopping..it was fun.
Jenny: She takes her delivery guy shopping?
Bryan: Im the Pool Boy! I feel kinda bad for her shes got no one else… and yeah she lets me buy stuff too…cause Shane wears a lot of mens clothes….I picked out those clothes all by myself.
Shane: The pink shirt too?
Bryan: God no everyone knows green is the new pink.
Shane pulled a wad of money out of her back pocket and peeled off two hundred dollar bills. Alice could see only hundreds sticking out of the wad. She handed the money to Bryan with the note.
Bryan: Woah thanks…pleasure doing business with you Shane…keep in touch.
Bryan scurried off leaving the women to themselves.
Marina: Shane what is that sticking out of your jacket?
Shane pulled out a twig that looked like it had been twirled around in a lint trap.
Shane: Oh this? I was gonna give it to my favorite girl, but I havent seen her this morning.
Bette: What is it?
Bette sat back and took a sip of her mocha.
Shane: A flower
Jenny: Thats not a flower
Shane: Technically it is…its a ***** Willow…here Al, Im sure you could use some…
Bette spit her mocha out onto the table. Al jumped up, flipping her chair back and stormed out of the planet. Jenny rubbed Bettes back as she coughed and laughed up the rest of her drink.
Dana: Same old Shane, ***** things up. Ive got a lift in thirty…see ya guys.
Dana got up and left leaving the rest of the girls to clean up Bettes mess.
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I love this story so much, it’s my favorite. I can’t function right cause I’m always checking for updates. I can’t wait to see where you take this. I love the Shane & Bette duo. Also, anticipating where you take the Dash storyline. Can’t wait for the next update.
Wow Al and Tina are really mad at Shane and Bette. I can’t wait to see how they will react to the truth. need a new fix soon.
This is too funny. I am so loving this.
Your story keeps getting better and better. I’m thoroughly addicted…there I’ve said it. And admitting it is the first step.
Woah…girl.. there are two really angry women here.. look out…nothing worse than a woman scorned.. but two.. OUCH.. can’t wait to see where you are going to take us next.. oh..even better crumbs here!!! “wink”
Amazing writing J! I loved this chapter and loved the line that Dana gave Shane to respond to Cherie with! Can’t wait for the next update..~winks and tries to wait patiently for the next part~
aww the webs u weave!! is Bette so blind she cant see that Tina is pissed off?? Saturday had better be good to win these two back!!
Excellent chapter again luv! and as for “how r things?” all I can say is same shit different day, u know? I did tell someone though, it was intese but I feel so much better and I can just be myself! WooHoo!
You should see the stupid smile on my face every time I’m reading one of your stories. Hell girl – you’re just brilliant.
Excellent, just excellent: length, content, humor, et al. I sure hope Tina and Alice’s regard for Bette and Shane’s friendship softens after they realize all the work the two have done together to help each other out in their respective intimate relationships. I guess we shall see what transpires eventually, since you did note that the next three days will be drawn out painfully slow. ;-)
Sorry, another long comment for a story I love so much.
It’s a thing to prepare a lovely and sincere surprise for her woman and it’s another to be almost indifferent with her : Bette don’t try touch, don’t smile and don’t talk to Tina. Why ? Doesn’t she see what Tina feel ? Doesn’t she see Tina take off her ring ? She doesn’t see Tina at all. A few minutes ago, she was affectionate with Shane. That’s Tina miss from Bette : loving. With Bette, it’s full or nothing, no ?
OK Shane try it and Alice don’t want. It’s normal, when Shane talk to Alice, she says… so she say. God, it’s complicated for these girls.
I love this little drama and dialogues are also funny.
It will be interesting to know what Alice and Tina think and what they’re doing to do thinking Bette and Shane are lovers.
Please update soon and thanks for this very good story.
LMAO, the last part is brilliant, okay the whole story is but the last part… I laughed so hard. I cant believe you once said you thought you couldn’t do funny..5stars girl!
Love Shane and Bette together, i hope Alice and Tina will wait for them untill saturday.
Ha ha ha, I love the Pussy Willow flower, that’s funny! Can’t wait to see what the girls have in store, hopefully Al and Tina will wait till after Bette’s plan has run it’s course before they kill em! :)
I can’t wait to see how this gets resolved! Very good!! I can’t wait for the next update!!
We have to angry,pissed off ladies and two that are so wraped up in what they are doing that they dont see what is going on. Danais the quite one,but some times so alert and smart. Hope the two angry one will wait for a few days before they kill Bette and Shane. thanks so much.
This is wonderful….and funny….keep going….another chap soon?
i really like this story.
I have been following this story and I am not sure if I have ever left a comment before, but I guess I will now. Thanks for this story. It has made the wait for the much anticipated second season bright. I really enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing with us.
Ok this is good and keep coming, post soon. Thank you!
OMFG! This is so great… It’s hilarious! “God, I think Dane would shit tennis balls if you just sat down at the piano and started playing.”