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The Promise
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Tina: I know…I heard Bette talking on the phone with her at three in the morning.
Alice closed her eyes to the lurch she felt in her stomach. The idea that both she and Tina sat back as the woman on the side, listening as the person they shared their bed with solicit someone else was too much.
Alice: Why am I trying so hard to maintain? Im desperately trying to give them both the benefit of the doubt…but theyre not even trying to hide.
Tina: You ready to go in?
Alice: Almost….when are you going to confront Bette?
Tina: I dont know. She said something about everything will be over Saturday so maybe Ill be coming forward on Saturday. I dont know…I think I just need to wrap my mind around this today, so tomorrow I can take care of business.
Alice: Lets go.
Alice and Tina got out of the Mini and crossed the street. Alice stopped short of the door, and motioned to the window when she got Tinas attention.
Alice: Look.
Inside, Bette and Shane sat together, rather close, at a small table in front of their laptops. Shane was leaning into Bette and reading from her laptop. Shanes hand laid gently on Bettes lower thigh and her fingers tapped lightly as if she were typing a story on her leg. She turned to Bette and smiled.
Bette spoke back to her and she nodded. They continued talking as Shane became nervous and insecure, until Bette grabbed her and held them together in a long embrace. She was whispering into Shanes ear with a look of pure joy on her face. Shane nodded and smiled.
Shane pulled out of the embrace and took a piece of paper out of her pocket. She held it up and Bette snatched it immediately before doing a silly dance in her seat. Shane leaned back in her chair and crossed her arms. She lowered her head as Bette began reading the sheet of paper. Bette covered her mouth with hand and Shane nervously played with her eyebrow.
Bettes eyes watered as she finished the note. She said something to Shane which caused her to blush. Bette tussled her hair and wiped away her tears. Bettes attitude dramatically changed to something you rarely saw form her. She appeared nervous as she asked Shane a question. Shane shrugged and whatever she said made Bette do a complete 180*. Bette was in a state of shock as Shane continued to talk. She grabbed Shane and kissed her on the cheek.
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I love this story so much, it’s my favorite. I can’t function right cause I’m always checking for updates. I can’t wait to see where you take this. I love the Shane & Bette duo. Also, anticipating where you take the Dash storyline. Can’t wait for the next update.
Wow Al and Tina are really mad at Shane and Bette. I can’t wait to see how they will react to the truth. need a new fix soon.
This is too funny. I am so loving this.
Your story keeps getting better and better. I’m thoroughly addicted…there I’ve said it. And admitting it is the first step.
Woah…girl.. there are two really angry women here.. look out…nothing worse than a woman scorned.. but two.. OUCH.. can’t wait to see where you are going to take us next.. oh..even better crumbs here!!! “wink”
Amazing writing J! I loved this chapter and loved the line that Dana gave Shane to respond to Cherie with! Can’t wait for the next update..~winks and tries to wait patiently for the next part~
aww the webs u weave!! is Bette so blind she cant see that Tina is pissed off?? Saturday had better be good to win these two back!!
Excellent chapter again luv! and as for “how r things?” all I can say is same shit different day, u know? I did tell someone though, it was intese but I feel so much better and I can just be myself! WooHoo!
You should see the stupid smile on my face every time I’m reading one of your stories. Hell girl – you’re just brilliant.
Excellent, just excellent: length, content, humor, et al. I sure hope Tina and Alice’s regard for Bette and Shane’s friendship softens after they realize all the work the two have done together to help each other out in their respective intimate relationships. I guess we shall see what transpires eventually, since you did note that the next three days will be drawn out painfully slow. ;-)
Sorry, another long comment for a story I love so much.
It’s a thing to prepare a lovely and sincere surprise for her woman and it’s another to be almost indifferent with her : Bette don’t try touch, don’t smile and don’t talk to Tina. Why ? Doesn’t she see what Tina feel ? Doesn’t she see Tina take off her ring ? She doesn’t see Tina at all. A few minutes ago, she was affectionate with Shane. That’s Tina miss from Bette : loving. With Bette, it’s full or nothing, no ?
OK Shane try it and Alice don’t want. It’s normal, when Shane talk to Alice, she says… so she say. God, it’s complicated for these girls.
I love this little drama and dialogues are also funny.
It will be interesting to know what Alice and Tina think and what they’re doing to do thinking Bette and Shane are lovers.
Please update soon and thanks for this very good story.
LMAO, the last part is brilliant, okay the whole story is but the last part… I laughed so hard. I cant believe you once said you thought you couldn’t do funny..5stars girl!
Love Shane and Bette together, i hope Alice and Tina will wait for them untill saturday.
Ha ha ha, I love the Pussy Willow flower, that’s funny! Can’t wait to see what the girls have in store, hopefully Al and Tina will wait till after Bette’s plan has run it’s course before they kill em! :)
I can’t wait to see how this gets resolved! Very good!! I can’t wait for the next update!!
We have to angry,pissed off ladies and two that are so wraped up in what they are doing that they dont see what is going on. Danais the quite one,but some times so alert and smart. Hope the two angry one will wait for a few days before they kill Bette and Shane. thanks so much.
This is wonderful….and funny….keep going….another chap soon?
i really like this story.
I have been following this story and I am not sure if I have ever left a comment before, but I guess I will now. Thanks for this story. It has made the wait for the much anticipated second season bright. I really enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing with us.
Ok this is good and keep coming, post soon. Thank you!
OMFG! This is so great… It’s hilarious! “God, I think Dane would shit tennis balls if you just sat down at the piano and started playing.”