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The Promise
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Dana: Are you going to open the ***** thing or are we all just gonna sit here with this kid waiting for your response.
Lara elbowed Dana in the ribs.
Dana: Ohw…What the *****?
Shane opened the box to find a small blue and green orb. She picked up the silver chain that was inside and held it up. Hanging from a platinum chain was a globe the size of a fist. Shane held it in the air, and it spun slowly from its own momentum. Soft beams of blue and green light were cast on the table and the girls form the reflected white light of the windows.
Shane: Uhm…what the ***** am I supposed to do with this….Its not supposed to go around my neck is it?
Bette took the orb from her hands and looked at it.
Bette: This is Tiffanys crystal…its hand made, you hang it in the window and the light bounces everywhere. But look.
Bette pointed around and everyone who had blue and green light on them.
Bette: I guess this one isnt random colors, it has a design so you guys have the continents on you.
Shane shrugged. She could see Alice was visibly upset.
Shane: Okay Bryan what exactly did you tell her last night?
Bryan: I gave her the empty box you gave me and I said Shane said this is all she will ever have to offer you.
Bette slapped her hand to her head. Shane lowered her head to the table and covered it with her hands. Bette rubbed the back of her head as she laughed.
Bryan: I dont get it whats funny.
Shane: The way you said it….I didnt realize the way it sounded until someone else said it back to me.
Ivan: So are you trying to keep this woman or let her go? Because she really seems to want you…Im guessing that thing is really expensive Bette?
Bette nodded.
Bette: Its rare, there arent a lot of people who work with glass anymore…well not this detailed, you have to do each layer from the inside out.
Bette sat starring at the glass.
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I love this story so much, it’s my favorite. I can’t function right cause I’m always checking for updates. I can’t wait to see where you take this. I love the Shane & Bette duo. Also, anticipating where you take the Dash storyline. Can’t wait for the next update.
Wow Al and Tina are really mad at Shane and Bette. I can’t wait to see how they will react to the truth. need a new fix soon.
This is too funny. I am so loving this.
Your story keeps getting better and better. I’m thoroughly addicted…there I’ve said it. And admitting it is the first step.
Woah…girl.. there are two really angry women here.. look out…nothing worse than a woman scorned.. but two.. OUCH.. can’t wait to see where you are going to take us next.. oh..even better crumbs here!!! “wink”
Amazing writing J! I loved this chapter and loved the line that Dana gave Shane to respond to Cherie with! Can’t wait for the next update..~winks and tries to wait patiently for the next part~
aww the webs u weave!! is Bette so blind she cant see that Tina is pissed off?? Saturday had better be good to win these two back!!
Excellent chapter again luv! and as for “how r things?” all I can say is same shit different day, u know? I did tell someone though, it was intese but I feel so much better and I can just be myself! WooHoo!
You should see the stupid smile on my face every time I’m reading one of your stories. Hell girl – you’re just brilliant.
Excellent, just excellent: length, content, humor, et al. I sure hope Tina and Alice’s regard for Bette and Shane’s friendship softens after they realize all the work the two have done together to help each other out in their respective intimate relationships. I guess we shall see what transpires eventually, since you did note that the next three days will be drawn out painfully slow. ;-)
Sorry, another long comment for a story I love so much.
It’s a thing to prepare a lovely and sincere surprise for her woman and it’s another to be almost indifferent with her : Bette don’t try touch, don’t smile and don’t talk to Tina. Why ? Doesn’t she see what Tina feel ? Doesn’t she see Tina take off her ring ? She doesn’t see Tina at all. A few minutes ago, she was affectionate with Shane. That’s Tina miss from Bette : loving. With Bette, it’s full or nothing, no ?
OK Shane try it and Alice don’t want. It’s normal, when Shane talk to Alice, she says… so she say. God, it’s complicated for these girls.
I love this little drama and dialogues are also funny.
It will be interesting to know what Alice and Tina think and what they’re doing to do thinking Bette and Shane are lovers.
Please update soon and thanks for this very good story.
LMAO, the last part is brilliant, okay the whole story is but the last part… I laughed so hard. I cant believe you once said you thought you couldn’t do funny..5stars girl!
Love Shane and Bette together, i hope Alice and Tina will wait for them untill saturday.
Ha ha ha, I love the Pussy Willow flower, that’s funny! Can’t wait to see what the girls have in store, hopefully Al and Tina will wait till after Bette’s plan has run it’s course before they kill em! :)
I can’t wait to see how this gets resolved! Very good!! I can’t wait for the next update!!
We have to angry,pissed off ladies and two that are so wraped up in what they are doing that they dont see what is going on. Danais the quite one,but some times so alert and smart. Hope the two angry one will wait for a few days before they kill Bette and Shane. thanks so much.
This is wonderful….and funny….keep going….another chap soon?
i really like this story.
I have been following this story and I am not sure if I have ever left a comment before, but I guess I will now. Thanks for this story. It has made the wait for the much anticipated second season bright. I really enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing with us.
Ok this is good and keep coming, post soon. Thank you!
OMFG! This is so great… It’s hilarious! “God, I think Dane would shit tennis balls if you just sat down at the piano and started playing.”