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The Promise
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Shane: Its yours…
Bette smiled and shook her head no.
Bette: its beautiful…but its not right.
Shane: Yeah but I dont want it.
Bette: So give it back….with the other stuff.
Shane: No…let the ***** pay for what she did with me. Im heart broken.
Shane held her hand to her chest and pretended to swoon. Ivan gave Kit a questioning look and her response was a whispered your guess is as good as mine
Kit: Ivan and I have to get going..well see you later…Bette let me know how it goes…and uhm Shane honey….its a thin line between love and hate, you better get that chick under control…
Ivan: Ladies.
Ivan did a slight bow before he and Kit walked out, whispering and looking back at Shane and Bette. Everyone sat in awkward silence as Bryan just stood by aimlessly.
Shane: Uhm is there anything else Bryan?
Bryan: Oh I was supposed to wait until you gave her an answer.
Shane: To what?
Bryan: The note.
Shane looked in the box and pulled out a sheet of paper. She could smell Cheris perfume and the scent sent chills down Alices spine. Shane unfolded it and read it to herself.
Tina: What did she say?
Shane: Uhm..
Shane looked over at Alice, who was looking through her with piercing eyes.
Shane: It says… Ill give the world to the woman who has nothing….
Jenny and Marina walked over to see what the group was discussing.
Jenny: Thats cute, I couldnt have written it better myself.
Marina: I dont know, Ive come up with better lines in my day.
Jenny nudged Marina with her hip. Shane leaned back in her chair. She reached back and placed her hand on the small of Alices back through the hole in the support of her chair. Alice leaned forward removing Shanes contact.
Shane: Guys…I dont know what to do…I dont want to talk to her…at all. I dont think she even deserves that….the ***** put a restraining order on me when I tried to talk to her.
Dana: She did what?
Dana quickly settled her enthusiasm.
Shane: Yeah and she let her husband and daughter spread a lot of ***** about me…I almost lost my job, but I begged to keep it and offered to take over all the managing duties and…..look what do I do? She thinks I have nothing money wise…not cause I have nothing to give her emotionally.
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I love this story so much, it’s my favorite. I can’t function right cause I’m always checking for updates. I can’t wait to see where you take this. I love the Shane & Bette duo. Also, anticipating where you take the Dash storyline. Can’t wait for the next update.
Wow Al and Tina are really mad at Shane and Bette. I can’t wait to see how they will react to the truth. need a new fix soon.
This is too funny. I am so loving this.
Your story keeps getting better and better. I’m thoroughly addicted…there I’ve said it. And admitting it is the first step.
Woah…girl.. there are two really angry women here.. look out…nothing worse than a woman scorned.. but two.. OUCH.. can’t wait to see where you are going to take us next.. oh..even better crumbs here!!! “wink”
Amazing writing J! I loved this chapter and loved the line that Dana gave Shane to respond to Cherie with! Can’t wait for the next update..~winks and tries to wait patiently for the next part~
aww the webs u weave!! is Bette so blind she cant see that Tina is pissed off?? Saturday had better be good to win these two back!!
Excellent chapter again luv! and as for “how r things?” all I can say is same shit different day, u know? I did tell someone though, it was intese but I feel so much better and I can just be myself! WooHoo!
You should see the stupid smile on my face every time I’m reading one of your stories. Hell girl – you’re just brilliant.
Excellent, just excellent: length, content, humor, et al. I sure hope Tina and Alice’s regard for Bette and Shane’s friendship softens after they realize all the work the two have done together to help each other out in their respective intimate relationships. I guess we shall see what transpires eventually, since you did note that the next three days will be drawn out painfully slow. ;-)
Sorry, another long comment for a story I love so much.
It’s a thing to prepare a lovely and sincere surprise for her woman and it’s another to be almost indifferent with her : Bette don’t try touch, don’t smile and don’t talk to Tina. Why ? Doesn’t she see what Tina feel ? Doesn’t she see Tina take off her ring ? She doesn’t see Tina at all. A few minutes ago, she was affectionate with Shane. That’s Tina miss from Bette : loving. With Bette, it’s full or nothing, no ?
OK Shane try it and Alice don’t want. It’s normal, when Shane talk to Alice, she says… so she say. God, it’s complicated for these girls.
I love this little drama and dialogues are also funny.
It will be interesting to know what Alice and Tina think and what they’re doing to do thinking Bette and Shane are lovers.
Please update soon and thanks for this very good story.
LMAO, the last part is brilliant, okay the whole story is but the last part… I laughed so hard. I cant believe you once said you thought you couldn’t do funny..5stars girl!
Love Shane and Bette together, i hope Alice and Tina will wait for them untill saturday.
Ha ha ha, I love the Pussy Willow flower, that’s funny! Can’t wait to see what the girls have in store, hopefully Al and Tina will wait till after Bette’s plan has run it’s course before they kill em! :)
I can’t wait to see how this gets resolved! Very good!! I can’t wait for the next update!!
We have to angry,pissed off ladies and two that are so wraped up in what they are doing that they dont see what is going on. Danais the quite one,but some times so alert and smart. Hope the two angry one will wait for a few days before they kill Bette and Shane. thanks so much.
This is wonderful….and funny….keep going….another chap soon?
i really like this story.
I have been following this story and I am not sure if I have ever left a comment before, but I guess I will now. Thanks for this story. It has made the wait for the much anticipated second season bright. I really enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing with us.
Ok this is good and keep coming, post soon. Thank you!
OMFG! This is so great… It’s hilarious! “God, I think Dane would shit tennis balls if you just sat down at the piano and started playing.”