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The Promise
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Tina: But Bette come on…
Bette: Tina, they didnt even invite me…I mean I could have handled the roof instead of James climbing up and down all night.
Tina: Bette you are too old to be hanging from buildings…and I wouldnt have let you go.
Tina and Bette sat feeding each other over their candle lit dinner, while listening to a CD Shane and Alice made for them. Bette started laughing and then Tina soon followed.
Tina: You think theyll make it?
Bette: I doubt it…three chain smokers?…they would have been lucky to get though it without my added bonus!
Tina: I cant believe you gave them army issued thermal wear…its for extreme freezing conditions….theyre gonna die…
@}~~~~~
Shane, Dash and James were spread out entangled on the bed a sweaty mess after peeling off their gear.
James: You think Bette bought us the wrong gear?
Shane: Nah she never messes up, it must be hot out.
Alice stood starring at the mannequin that held a sign that read I know it seems
She tapped her hand on the phone waiting for Shane to explain what movie it was in reference to.
Shane, Dash and James finished getting dressed and fought over the mirror as quietly as possible. Shane tried to fix her hair that Dash had done earlier that day as James put on his makeup and Dash fixed her tie.
Shane: Alright..lets get up to the roof.
James: Please there has to be another way.
Shane: Were almost done.
The three climbed out the window and started climbing up to the roof. Alices phone rang as they approached the third flight.
Alice: Okay Im confused….
Shane: Why are you confused?
Alice: It says I know it seems…seems like what Shane…
Shane stopped dead in her tracks causing James head to go up her *****.
Shane: Youre still in the apartment?
Dash: Thank God we can slow down.
James: Yeah my make-up is running.
Alice: Yeah where am I supposed to be?
Shane: Uhm Al…didnt you notice that the mannequin is holding a thick stack of poster board?
Alice blushed and slapped her forehead.
Shane: Its okay love…dont hit yourself like that…and no Im not there, I could hear it….finish with the cards and then youll know what to do… I hope
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That was great..so romantic, sexy and funny. Wonderful writing!!!!
I laughed so hard I think I tore my Pu*** muscle..hee hee.. that was simply genius.. thank for the tiny crumbs.. looking for more.
Yes, Shane is so… ? Romantic ? Yes (à sa façon). Love Alice and Shane.
Oh, does Bette says to tina about Mission Impossible 1 & 2 ? Happy to seee them like this.. lovers.
Another great chapter.
WOW! I found myself laughing out loud several times, which doesn’t happen too often when I’m reading. So well done..absolutley one of my favorites so far!
Hey! waking up to these fics is one of my fave parts of the day, especially if ur chapters are up there! this one was soo funny and romantic, i love how u have potrayed James that is too funny!!
Loved each word thanks
This was pure genius! I absolutely loved every moment of it, especially: “James stood on the roof tugging at his ski mask as he turned on the lights and lit the candles. He then sat on the floor and cried as he started what should have been his easiest task…blowing up the raft.” I let out the biggest guffaw and almost cried myself…too funny. Man, this chapter cracked me my ass up, but also appealed to my sensi side. Thanks!
‘army issued thermal wear’ That was just too funny as I imagined the “mission”. Bette can be so evil!!!! Great story. I’m still waiting for Saturday?!?
What a Valentine’s Day!!!
Wow, that was an awesome chapter and thank you so much…. had an awful ballet class this morning at your story made my day so much better. I laughed out loud and also shed a few tears… I’m the soppy kind! ha ha Thanks again! :)
Alice: I thought you don’t celebrate Valentine’s day?
Shane: I don’t….I’m celebrating you.
f*cking brilliant! you write shane and al so well. thanks so much for this story!
That was awsome. Great valentin story with lost of funny thing. Totally loved it.
That hot and so romantic, post soon. Thank you!