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The Promise
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Alice: Okay, good to know we have at least one thing in common… so youve gone through a lot fo trouble for tonight huh?
Shane: It was no biggie…anyway, put on the earring…
Alice put the earring in her ear.
Shane: It looks perfect on you..
Alice ran over and opened the closet.
Shane: Im not in there…
She crouched down on all fours.
Shane: And Im not under there either
Alice looked around the room confused.
Shane: Okay stop trying to find out where I am before you pull a Tina and lose that earring.
Alice: you can always make me another one.
Shane: Yeah but the new one wouldnt be THE earing from the movie.
Alice: What!!!!
Shane: Remember when I did Sheila Es hair?
Alice: Shane I swear to God if you are joking about this I will kill you.
Shane: Love…open the top drawer.
Alice opened the top drawer that was lined with black and purple silk.
Laying on top was a guitar pick with a sheet of paper under it. She opened it to find an authentification certificate.
Shane: I ended up doing her hair for the grammys and afterwards she invited me to go out with them that night and she told me about their charity auction. So I got you one of his picks from the Musicology tour, and she gave me that…said shes got three more form years ago, turns out they had like twenty they used in the movie.
Alice: Ahhhhhhhh!
Alice jumped on the bed and kicked her legs like a maniac.
Shane: So you like it?
Alice: I love both of them…Shane you didnt have to do all this for Val….
Shane: Were NOT celebrating Valentines day.
Alice heard a knock at the door.
Alice: Theres more?
Shane: Just go get the door.
Alice went to the door and opened it to find the mannequin holding a box. She laughed and took the box.
Alice: you know my nosey neighbor is gonna call the cops and say youre trying to break in again.
Shane: Ehh ***** her.
Alice opened the box to find a red gown and a pair of white linen gloves.
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That was great..so romantic, sexy and funny. Wonderful writing!!!!
I laughed so hard I think I tore my Pu*** muscle..hee hee.. that was simply genius.. thank for the tiny crumbs.. looking for more.
Yes, Shane is so… ? Romantic ? Yes (à sa façon). Love Alice and Shane.
Oh, does Bette says to tina about Mission Impossible 1 & 2 ? Happy to seee them like this.. lovers.
Another great chapter.
WOW! I found myself laughing out loud several times, which doesn’t happen too often when I’m reading. So well done..absolutley one of my favorites so far!
Hey! waking up to these fics is one of my fave parts of the day, especially if ur chapters are up there! this one was soo funny and romantic, i love how u have potrayed James that is too funny!!
Loved each word thanks
This was pure genius! I absolutely loved every moment of it, especially: “James stood on the roof tugging at his ski mask as he turned on the lights and lit the candles. He then sat on the floor and cried as he started what should have been his easiest task…blowing up the raft.” I let out the biggest guffaw and almost cried myself…too funny. Man, this chapter cracked me my ass up, but also appealed to my sensi side. Thanks!
‘army issued thermal wear’ That was just too funny as I imagined the “mission”. Bette can be so evil!!!! Great story. I’m still waiting for Saturday?!?
What a Valentine’s Day!!!
Wow, that was an awesome chapter and thank you so much…. had an awful ballet class this morning at your story made my day so much better. I laughed out loud and also shed a few tears… I’m the soppy kind! ha ha Thanks again! :)
Alice: I thought you don’t celebrate Valentine’s day?
Shane: I don’t….I’m celebrating you.
f*cking brilliant! you write shane and al so well. thanks so much for this story!
That was awsome. Great valentin story with lost of funny thing. Totally loved it.
That hot and so romantic, post soon. Thank you!