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    The Promise

    Story written on February 15, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Mission Impossible 3 – Future script

    Alice: Shane….I …this is getting to be too much…I …

    Shane: Nothings too much for you…now go put that on….tonight, youre my Pretty Woman…

    Alice: You hated that one didnt you?

    Shane: Absolutely…no one looks like that when theyre walking the strip…anyway, get dressed.

    Alice, pulled off her robe and began to dress. Shane stood on the ledge watching her change and did everything in her power not to crash through the window and take her right there.

    @}~~~~~

    Dash walked over to the apartment door using the wall for support. She was breathing heavy and turned the ***** as quietly as possible dragging the mannequin in behind her.

    James stood on the roof tugging at his ski mask as he turned on the lights and lit the candles. He then sat on the floor and cried as he started what should have been his easiest task…blowing up the raft.

    @}~~~~

    Alice picked up the phone after zipping up her dress.

    Alice: Okay Im dressed, but let me guess, you knew that?

    Shane: Yes…unfortunately you are dress. Okay theres something waiting for you in the living room.

    Alice slipped on her heels and walked out into the living room to find the mannequin standing in the middle of the room.

    Shane slid in the window and sprawled out on the floor gasping for air. She tried to slip off her mask but got it caught halfway. She was panicking to get it off when Dash came in through the other window. Dash put her feet on Shanes shoulders and pulled with all her might, finally freeing Shane from the mask.

    Shane: *****…Im dying!

    Dash held her finger to her mouth and pointed to her head. Shane helped her out of her mask and they started changing out of their soaking clothes that clung to them. James crept in from the bathroom window and sat on the edge of the bed, while the two helped him get the mask off.

    James: What the ***** did Bette get us?

    @}~~~~~

    Tina: Baby, thats just mean…

    Bette: Serves them right for giving me the stupid meaningless task…and I started the first mission..

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    3. Yes, Shane is so… ? Romantic ? Yes (à sa façon). Love Alice and Shane.
      Oh, does Bette says to tina about Mission Impossible 1 & 2 ? Happy to seee them like this.. lovers.
      Another great chapter.

    5. Hey! waking up to these fics is one of my fave parts of the day, especially if ur chapters are up there! this one was soo funny and romantic, i love how u have potrayed James that is too funny!!

    7. This was pure genius! I absolutely loved every moment of it, especially: “James stood on the roof tugging at his ski mask as he turned on the lights and lit the candles. He then sat on the floor and cried as he started what should have been his easiest task…blowing up the raft.” I let out the biggest guffaw and almost cried myself…too funny. Man, this chapter cracked me my ass up, but also appealed to my sensi side. Thanks!

    8. ‘army issued thermal wear’ That was just too funny as I imagined the “mission”. Bette can be so evil!!!! Great story. I’m still waiting for Saturday?!?

    10. Wow, that was an awesome chapter and thank you so much…. had an awful ballet class this morning at your story made my day so much better. I laughed out loud and also shed a few tears… I’m the soppy kind! ha ha Thanks again! :)

    11. Alice: I thought you don’t celebrate Valentine’s day?

      Shane: I don’t….I’m celebrating you.
      f*cking brilliant! you write shane and al so well. thanks so much for this story!

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