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The Promise
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Shane: God…youre getting heavy
Alice: You smoke too much.
Shane: Let it go Al.
Alice: Just saying…dont expect me to rotate your oxygen tanks when you turn thiry.
Shane: No you better rotate something else!
Shane crawled on top of her kissing up her stomach and in between her *****. She licked along her collar bone and nibbled along Alices neck line. Shane pulled Alices shirt over her head to reveal her beautiful mounds of milk and honey. She ran the backs of her fingers over Alices nipples and her breath caught in her throat.
Shane: How do you want it?
Alice arched her back driving her hips into Shane. The cup she wore added an extra pleasure to Alices sensitive area.
Alice: I want you in me right now.
Shane: My hands?
Shane squeezed her *****.
Shane: My mouth?
She nibbled on her earlobe.
Shane: Or should I bring out The Boss?
Shane pressed her cup further into Alice.
Alice: Mmmm….your hands.
Shane: And why is that?
Shane licked along her chin.
Alice: I want to feel you and see you at the same time…but I want to come form you.
Shane unbuttoned Alices Jeans while parting her legs with her thigh. She reached in and found Alices core. The two fingers she held out darted in like a car through a carwash. Alices hips rose to meet her thrusts. She looked Shane in the eyes as she let her fingers walk down her chest, across her stomach and stopped on the zipper of her jeans.
Shane nodded and Alice unzipped her pants. She reached in and pulled out Shanes cup, then flung it across the room.
Shane: On second thought…lets make tonight about you.
Alice: Ahh…No…mmm…I want to…
Shane: Shhh…just enjoy the rise…
Shane put her knee behind her hand and began rocking back and forth against her. Alice drove her hips up to match Shanes steady rhythm. She grabbed her ankles and held them in the air by Shanes head.
Shane: ***** Yeah!
Alice threw her head back and laughed as Shane thrusted harder. She placed her hand on the bed next to head and locked her arm in place. Alice began to tremble as Shane curled her fingers inside of her, tapping into her most sensitive regions. She quickened her rhythm while circling Alices *****, coaxing her hot flesh to pull back ans release what was engulfed withing. The pearl slid from its membrane cell and Shane probed it with her anxious thumb.
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That was great..so romantic, sexy and funny. Wonderful writing!!!!
I laughed so hard I think I tore my Pu*** muscle..hee hee.. that was simply genius.. thank for the tiny crumbs.. looking for more.
Yes, Shane is so… ? Romantic ? Yes (à sa façon). Love Alice and Shane.
Oh, does Bette says to tina about Mission Impossible 1 & 2 ? Happy to seee them like this.. lovers.
Another great chapter.
WOW! I found myself laughing out loud several times, which doesn’t happen too often when I’m reading. So well done..absolutley one of my favorites so far!
Hey! waking up to these fics is one of my fave parts of the day, especially if ur chapters are up there! this one was soo funny and romantic, i love how u have potrayed James that is too funny!!
Loved each word thanks
This was pure genius! I absolutely loved every moment of it, especially: “James stood on the roof tugging at his ski mask as he turned on the lights and lit the candles. He then sat on the floor and cried as he started what should have been his easiest task…blowing up the raft.” I let out the biggest guffaw and almost cried myself…too funny. Man, this chapter cracked me my ass up, but also appealed to my sensi side. Thanks!
‘army issued thermal wear’ That was just too funny as I imagined the “mission”. Bette can be so evil!!!! Great story. I’m still waiting for Saturday?!?
What a Valentine’s Day!!!
Wow, that was an awesome chapter and thank you so much…. had an awful ballet class this morning at your story made my day so much better. I laughed out loud and also shed a few tears… I’m the soppy kind! ha ha Thanks again! :)
Alice: I thought you don’t celebrate Valentine’s day?
Shane: I don’t….I’m celebrating you.
f*cking brilliant! you write shane and al so well. thanks so much for this story!
That was awsome. Great valentin story with lost of funny thing. Totally loved it.
That hot and so romantic, post soon. Thank you!