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The Promise
Alice: Shane…although I love this post coital monologue thing you always do…I swear to God if you dont let me put my legs down Ill tear a ***** muscle.
Shane burst out laughing and unwrapped Alices ankles from around her neck and laid down on top of her.
Alice brushed the hair from her face and placed soft gentle kisses all over her face. The salty taste of her skin sent heat through her body.
Shane: Youre too ***** good to me.
Alice: Dont you know it!
Shane nodded and bit her bottom lip.
Shane: That was so ***** hot what you did…I cant believe you did that…
Alice: Yeah well dont expect it for along time…I dont think Ill be able to move for a week.
Shane whimpered and pressed her groin against Alices
Shane: A whole week?
Alice laughed as she wrapped her arms around Shane. Shane kissed her neck and collapsed her full weight on her.
Alice: Youre gaining weight.
Shane: Sorry Ill…
Alice: No it feels good…better then the skin and bones the used to lay on me.
Shane: Shut up!
Alice: Just take off your jeans…their wet.
Alice scrunched up her face and kissed Shane on the nose. Alice started laughing as Shane struggled to get her pants off without getting off her.
Alice: *****..here…
Alice used her feet to pull off Shanes pants.
Shane: When did you become so limber?
Alice: *****, Im just trying to keep up with your bedroom acrobatics.
Shane rest her head on Alices chest and Alice played with her hair as they drifted off to sleep. The occasional twitch and pull of their tired muscles lured them back to consciousness.
Shane: Hey Al?
Alice: Yes Love.
Shane: Would it be alright if..
Alice: I said yes Shane.
Shane: But I didnt even ask…
Alice: We can keep the light on…you dont have to ask every time…
Shane: Yeah…but I dont ever want to take anything for granted.
Alice kissed heron the forehead and they fell asleep in their tangled embrace.
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Alice awoke to the hot breath in her ear. She felt the warm moisture caress her ear as the tongue of her lover lapped at her ear. She felt her tire muscles from the night before heat up as the tightening sensation rose in her stomach.
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(25 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5)
That was great..so romantic, sexy and funny. Wonderful writing!!!!
I laughed so hard I think I tore my Pu*** muscle..hee hee.. that was simply genius.. thank for the tiny crumbs.. looking for more.
Yes, Shane is so… ? Romantic ? Yes (à sa façon). Love Alice and Shane.
Oh, does Bette says to tina about Mission Impossible 1 & 2 ? Happy to seee them like this.. lovers.
Another great chapter.
WOW! I found myself laughing out loud several times, which doesn’t happen too often when I’m reading. So well done..absolutley one of my favorites so far!
Hey! waking up to these fics is one of my fave parts of the day, especially if ur chapters are up there! this one was soo funny and romantic, i love how u have potrayed James that is too funny!!
Loved each word thanks
This was pure genius! I absolutely loved every moment of it, especially: “James stood on the roof tugging at his ski mask as he turned on the lights and lit the candles. He then sat on the floor and cried as he started what should have been his easiest task…blowing up the raft.” I let out the biggest guffaw and almost cried myself…too funny. Man, this chapter cracked me my ass up, but also appealed to my sensi side. Thanks!
‘army issued thermal wear’ That was just too funny as I imagined the “mission”. Bette can be so evil!!!! Great story. I’m still waiting for Saturday?!?
What a Valentine’s Day!!!
Wow, that was an awesome chapter and thank you so much…. had an awful ballet class this morning at your story made my day so much better. I laughed out loud and also shed a few tears… I’m the soppy kind! ha ha Thanks again! :)
Alice: I thought you don’t celebrate Valentine’s day?
Shane: I don’t….I’m celebrating you.
f*cking brilliant! you write shane and al so well. thanks so much for this story!
That was awsome. Great valentin story with lost of funny thing. Totally loved it.
That hot and so romantic, post soon. Thank you!