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The Promise
Tina: Oh my God….I …are they all of me sleeping?
Dash: uhm…Yeah
Tina: Bette thinks EVERYTHING is art…. please tell me this is the worse one?
Dash: Well I could, but Id be lying.
Tina gasped and covered her mouth. She looked around the room and saw the different photos from a distance.
Tina: Oh my God.
Dash: Yeah, well it was supposed to be Shane with you so you wouldnt be embarrassed….
Tina: I dont know if Id want Shane to see me…actually Ive seen her naked so many times…
Dash: So why this picture?
Tina ran her fingers over the words on the sign.
::She loves me, She loves me not::
Tina: uhm…oh this was after she asked me to marry her…which was also the first time she told me she loved me…
Dash: And youre on the floor because?
Tina: Uhm…cause she got down on her knees and we never made it to the bedroom….uh…this is a little weird ….cause …..not that Im uncomfortable talking about it, but…
Dash: Yeah, yeah …Im jail-bait.
Tina laughed and pushed the girl playfully causing her to go green.
Tina: Oh my God Dash, I forgot….are you okay, you dont look so good.
Dash: Ill be fine.
Dash stood up straight and Tina caught the bead of sweat the trickled down her hair line. She felt the girls head and realized she was burning up from a fever.
Tina: Jesus…youre burning up….we have to get you….
Dash: I swear woman if you say to the hospital I am brining you straight to Bette and locking you two in your house….that woman tries to drag me off to the hospital for every paper cut.
Tina: Okay…sorry…but youre really sick.
Dash: Were almost done we only have a few more to go….
Tina: And then?
Dash: Then Ill go back home…errrr to Shane and Jennys and lay down for a bit.
Tina: Okay…but maybe Ill stop by to check on you later.
Tina gave the first honest smile Dash had seen from her since she had initially met her.
Dash: Youll be a great mom.
Dash closed her eyes and silently cursed herself.
Tina: Its okay….things happen in life….you cant dwell on them.
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(26 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Wow, this was so worth the torture, thanks so much! Ok so I can’t say you’re romantic but can I say that this story is romantic!? ~wink~ Please don’t let me go blue again from lack of oxygen as I’ll be waiting with baited breath for the next one! =0)
Awesome….again. Can anticipation kill a person? Please don’t keep us waiting too long!
omg..YIPPIE its finally here… horray!!!!! you are so awesome.. I love you…please post soon….
Wow this is awesome and beautiful chapter. Bette is surprise Tina the most beautiful thing in the world to her, I just can’t believe Bette have an awesome idea like this. Bette is super super sweetest lover ever. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen and most excited thing coming for Tina. Thank you very much, you are awesome and wonderful writer. 5 stars for you girl!
i was so awestruck by the creativity of this chapter. it made all the rest of them come together so well. thanks for your talent and time. please continue on, it’s great!!!!!
youb know of all the stories ihve read – this one touches me to the core because you capture the essence of true love – of how one feels being totally unselfishly loved and keeping the story as totally real. i can feel the emotions of tina, the pain of dash of not knowing who she is; of shane who feels sad that she is being misunderstood, of alice being so jealous out of her mind but most of all, of bette knowing that tina ia her all and beyond. tks JLo…eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I cried so much…that by far…is the sweetest thing…ive ever read…or seen…or heard of. I loved it…and PLEASE…post soon..
Just want to let you know after the 6 of Mar, I will be AWOL for about a month, Going to have a complete Knee replacement. so unless I can hook up my Laptop I’ll be out of touch, I’ll catch up after. thanks
Sadism: def’n – the pleasure derived from keeping us hangin’ (ergo, the torture). Ecrivez si’il vous plait bientot.
And so it begins, what a wonderful start to MI 1.5’s success. Loved it.
Beautiful. No other words, Just beautiful,, Thanks, Dash is going to be a heart breaker. thanks
I’m at a loss for words here. This is truly amazing. Words do not do it justice….I am ANXIOUSLY waiting for the continuance. THANK YOU!
I think you all ready know what I will say, but I won’t because I know it might just put some pressure on you. I’ll simply say, I completely loved this chapter, J. Expect that email. Oh and thanks for blaming me for the hold up on update…now I’ll get hate mail or something. ~winks and heads out~
I could swear I commented on this story yesterday but okay, i’ll do it again. I’m really sucked into this story and I love it, can’t think of other words to say, it’s brilliant. oh and is Dash gonna be okay?