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The Promise
Tina gave Alice a quick kiss on the lips.
Alice: Hey Tee…
Tina: I know…and yes youll be my first phone call when Im done.
Jenny linked arms with Tina and walked out the door, causing Tinas train to billow out the door like a retreating cloud of smoke. She handed Tina the rose and Tina couldnt help but smile. She always was a sucker for a rose, especially any color other than the typical red ones. She looked at the lavender piece of silk and noticed there was a white embroidering on it. Tina looked at it to see there was a message written .
~ Im sorry that from the moment I met you, I didnt tell you I love you…because I already knew.~
Tina got tears in her ears and became angry when she thought back to the photos that she and Alice looked at all night. They continued to go back and forth over possible scenarios. Tina and Jenny stepped out into the early morning sun to see James standing at the door of a white 1956 Rolls Royce. He wore a classic white tuxedo with tails and a top hat. James opened the rear door and stood in a half bow with one arm behind his back. Tina shook her head and climbed inside. She sat back to relax and looked around as Jenny sat beside her.
Tina: So where are we going?
Jenny: To the beginning.
Tina: Could be any more vague?!?
Jenny: Could you let me set the mood?
Tina sat back in a huff and played with the gadgets in the side panel.
Tina: Its a beautiful car James…I always wanted to ride in one like this…but we ended up taking a limo for our wedding…Ha! We got into a huge fight …
Jenny: James wont be speaking to you…hes not a guide.
Tina shook her head and rolled her eyes.
::AHEM::
Jenny looked up at James in the rearview mirror and mouthed a heated conversation back and forth with him.
Jenny: Oh!…Okay.
Jenny reached into the wall divider that had a compartment and pulled out another rose with a message. She handed it to Tina who read it hesitantly.
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(26 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Wow, this was so worth the torture, thanks so much! Ok so I can’t say you’re romantic but can I say that this story is romantic!? ~wink~ Please don’t let me go blue again from lack of oxygen as I’ll be waiting with baited breath for the next one! =0)
Awesome….again. Can anticipation kill a person? Please don’t keep us waiting too long!
omg..YIPPIE its finally here… horray!!!!! you are so awesome.. I love you…please post soon….
Wow this is awesome and beautiful chapter. Bette is surprise Tina the most beautiful thing in the world to her, I just can’t believe Bette have an awesome idea like this. Bette is super super sweetest lover ever. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen and most excited thing coming for Tina. Thank you very much, you are awesome and wonderful writer. 5 stars for you girl!
i was so awestruck by the creativity of this chapter. it made all the rest of them come together so well. thanks for your talent and time. please continue on, it’s great!!!!!
youb know of all the stories ihve read – this one touches me to the core because you capture the essence of true love – of how one feels being totally unselfishly loved and keeping the story as totally real. i can feel the emotions of tina, the pain of dash of not knowing who she is; of shane who feels sad that she is being misunderstood, of alice being so jealous out of her mind but most of all, of bette knowing that tina ia her all and beyond. tks JLo…eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I cried so much…that by far…is the sweetest thing…ive ever read…or seen…or heard of. I loved it…and PLEASE…post soon..
Just want to let you know after the 6 of Mar, I will be AWOL for about a month, Going to have a complete Knee replacement. so unless I can hook up my Laptop I’ll be out of touch, I’ll catch up after. thanks
Sadism: def’n – the pleasure derived from keeping us hangin’ (ergo, the torture). Ecrivez si’il vous plait bientot.
And so it begins, what a wonderful start to MI 1.5’s success. Loved it.
Beautiful. No other words, Just beautiful,, Thanks, Dash is going to be a heart breaker. thanks
I’m at a loss for words here. This is truly amazing. Words do not do it justice….I am ANXIOUSLY waiting for the continuance. THANK YOU!
I think you all ready know what I will say, but I won’t because I know it might just put some pressure on you. I’ll simply say, I completely loved this chapter, J. Expect that email. Oh and thanks for blaming me for the hold up on update…now I’ll get hate mail or something. ~winks and heads out~
I could swear I commented on this story yesterday but okay, i’ll do it again. I’m really sucked into this story and I love it, can’t think of other words to say, it’s brilliant. oh and is Dash gonna be okay?