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The Promise
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Bette: Look, we dont mind catching you up…but your continued shock and questioning of everything is driving me crazy. You missed ALOT…get over it and just listen while we catch you up.
Dana: Will you two just kiss and make up …God!
Dana stormed off to the front counter and fished through the large bowl of hand fruit. Jenny sat back and stared back and forth between Bette and Alice. Neither was willing to budge as they sat in a deadlocked stare down.
Jenny imagined a small tumbleweed blowing through The Planet and laughed internally as she thought of the four women in their own version of The Good the Bad and the *****. Jenny let out the infamous whistle that made the original movie famous and Bettes lip twitched slightly. It was almost unnoticeable to the untrained eye, but Alice was a seasoned veteran when it came to a showdown with Bette Porter. She opened her eyes wide and leaned in. Bette, knowing she had faltered, clenched her jaw and looked deep into Alices eyes, cocking an eyebrow simultaneously. The eyebrow …..it was a tell tale sign that Bette wasnt bluffing. She brought her A Game and was ready to battle till the end. When the smoke would clear, Alice would be a goner.
Alice: ALRIGHT FINE! I wont say anything else. You win Porter!
Bette gave a victorious grin and pumped her fist in the air to mock Alice.
Bette: Its not your fault young one….with age comes strong will.
Alice: And deep frown lines…..
Alice pointed at Bettes brow line with a look of shock.
Bette: What? Where?
Bette frantically searched her face with her fingers. She pulled off her sunglasses and looked in their reflection for the hideous monstrosity. Tina covered her mouth when she saw Alice was laughing. Bette stopped her search and turned her head around slowly like she was Linda Blair herself, and gave Tina an appalled look. Jenny and Alice couldnt resist giving each other Hi-5′s.
Bette: ***** You! That was a low blow!
Alice: Hey I had to get one in somewhere.
Bette: Yeah, yeah…Ill let it slide…this time.
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Another great chapter… Thanks
ooohhh so happy to see you posted…. can’t wait to see what happens next with shane and alice…. this was amazing as always, I really love your story and can’t seen to get enough!! ;)
What a great story before going to bed. love it as always!
I glad that Alice and Bette are through Bashing each other for a while. Also glad that Bette didnt have my ear, It was funny that Bette said that she expected Dash to be the adult. They all can get in a mess.. Thanks
yes been eagerly waiting for you to post.
Great chapter as always!!!! I’m glad Alice Is finally starting to see thelight and the consequences of her actions. Shane needs to have her but kicked for cutting off her cast and I bet Van will do it. She can’t be that worried about playing the piano again. Thanks for posting.
It is good that Alice is beginning to understand the relationship that Bette and Shane has going on and maybe she can comprehend more about what is going on between the two.
GREAT CHAPTER , PLEASE POST SOON
Great chapter. Glad to see you back, this chapter is good, a little funny between Bette and Alice and at time is have emotion, sad, hurt, and happy. Alice and Shane need a talk and let see what happen next. Post soon, thank you!
So GREAT, So GOOD, So FUNNY. I can’t wait for my next fix.
LMFAO>>>>>>> man woman this chap was sooo awesome..I am very lucky to be part of this joruney..that you have give us…WOW..and “BLACK DON’T CRACK..LMAO” haven’t heard that in a while…your just too much..lol
take care and hope you have time to post again soon..take care girlie..