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The Promise
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Bette looked over at Alice whose mouth was open with one finger in the air ready to attack.
Bette: One comment about my skin and Ill break your neck.
Alice quickly slumped back into her seat and sipped her fresh latte as she started typing on her laptop, playfully whistling the theme song to The Good the Bad and the Ugly. Dana laughed and rolled her eyes. The women froze as they heard a shrilling, gut-wrenching noise from outside. Dana covered her ears out of instinct and cringed. Bette and Tina looked at each other and rolled their eyes as the racket grew louder.
Jenny: Oh God not again….its too early!
Alice looked at Jenny as her eyes glazed over and her face paled. She looked as though she was ready to vomit.
Alice: What is that noise? It sounds like….
Dana: Shane!
Dana shouted as the music was blaring and their glasses and silverware shook to the cracked-out, helium inspired singing of Backstreets Back. Everyone in the Planet looked out the full length windows of the caf as Shanes giant truck came jerking down the street. The truck cut off in the middle of the street, and horns behind them were blasting. The truck started again and jerked forward several times. It tried to pull towards a parallel spot on the opposite side of the street.
Jenny: Shane has discovered both Limewire and boy bands….the route of all evil in the art world.
Dana: Well, it looks like shes at least getting off her ***** instead of blaming everything on her hand.
Alice: Her hand?
Dana: Yeah remember, she like shattered her right wrist and hand when she fell off the front steps.
Alices face paled and her eyes teared up. Bette turned with an angry look when she recalled her own dance with gravity.
Bette: Shes not the only one who fell.
Bette held up her skinned hands and Alice covered her mouth as a tear fell. Bette quickly melted, when she saw Alices face.
Bette: But…it was just an accident right?
Alice nodded and wiped her eyes. Alice and Bette held each others stare until Alice mouthed Im so sorry and Bette answered back with a silent I know….but tell her that
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Another great chapter… Thanks
ooohhh so happy to see you posted…. can’t wait to see what happens next with shane and alice…. this was amazing as always, I really love your story and can’t seen to get enough!! ;)
What a great story before going to bed. love it as always!
I glad that Alice and Bette are through Bashing each other for a while. Also glad that Bette didnt have my ear, It was funny that Bette said that she expected Dash to be the adult. They all can get in a mess.. Thanks
yes been eagerly waiting for you to post.
Great chapter as always!!!! I’m glad Alice Is finally starting to see thelight and the consequences of her actions. Shane needs to have her but kicked for cutting off her cast and I bet Van will do it. She can’t be that worried about playing the piano again. Thanks for posting.
It is good that Alice is beginning to understand the relationship that Bette and Shane has going on and maybe she can comprehend more about what is going on between the two.
GREAT CHAPTER , PLEASE POST SOON
Great chapter. Glad to see you back, this chapter is good, a little funny between Bette and Alice and at time is have emotion, sad, hurt, and happy. Alice and Shane need a talk and let see what happen next. Post soon, thank you!
So GREAT, So GOOD, So FUNNY. I can’t wait for my next fix.
LMFAO>>>>>>> man woman this chap was sooo awesome..I am very lucky to be part of this joruney..that you have give us…WOW..and “BLACK DON’T CRACK..LMAO” haven’t heard that in a while…your just too much..lol
take care and hope you have time to post again soon..take care girlie..