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The Promise
Shane: Yeah I know, but when I got off the streets, I really cleaned up and got into staying healthy…just incase anything was wrong with me……
Dr. Solano: Well, Im not supposed to say this, but based on your sexual habits now, I would say theres no way you would test positive….but your previous sexual exploits were extreme…and I would also let you know that by now I would expect something would have shown up….
Shane: Yeah but I havent had a blood test in years…
Dr. Solano: This is true…and it sounds like you really take care of yourself…when was the last time you were sick….like even a cold?
Shane: I honestly cant remember…I dont think Ive ever really had a cold.
Dr. Solano: Okay Shane, our times up and I have another patient, but I must say it was a pleasure to meet you .
Shane gave her a skeptical look.
Shane: And why is that Dr….Mari?
Dr. Solano: Its nice to meet someone who can take anything thats thrown at them…I think youre an amazing person……Im sure you get that a lot though…Im sure woman always try to get in your pants as good looking as you are….but if they really knew you…I mean you really have an amazing story to tell….
Shane was taken back by Maris blunt statement. It was probably the first time anyone had ever said something like that to her without trying to hit on her or bring her home for the night, and it was almost a bit much to handle. Mari said her goodbyes and left Shane with her card and home phone number…she offered to meet up with her and Bette to go to the gallery sometime. It turns out Bette had designed and decorated the office building herself. Shane never would have expect Bette to pull off pink, and there was no way she was going to let her live this one down. After Shane finished dressing she made her way to the waiting room and stopped a the desk. She pulled out her wallet and her insurance card, only for the woman to stop her.
Woman 2: Oh no Ms. OConnor….they called from the gentlemans side….your brother covered everything and he said ***** work it out later.
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(16 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5)
Okay, as requested, comments come now…please keep it up and don’t take so long between posts. Laissez les bon temps rouler!
So glad you got back to this. I am am waiting patiently for some answers and you keep writing more laden with question.
Excellent job!
i am loveing your work. hope things work out for shane and alice.
I Also think Dash is such a great cartor. Post soon
2 things. What the hell did they drag Dash into and What had happen to Shane in tha past, why her body was so messed up. You better give me a fix soon hun cuz their a lotta thing I wanna know. It’s a so damn good story.
WOW it took me all night to read all your chapters..so i could catch up with this last one. You got me hooked! I love it :D. Now i wonder what happened to Shane in the past..she was raped? I wanna know about Alice too…will Shane forgive her? I hope so!. I can’t wait for next chapter. Excellent job! ;D
hmmmm the price we must all pay for not getting testesed, wrap it up all of you : )
Always impressing me with your talent. Oh and…what makes you think that I wouldn’t make someone else my bitch in prison. You forget how I am at work..~winks~
Great chapter. Hope everything will be ok and work out for Shane and Alice. Post soon, thank you!
WOW!!!! Heartwrenching , Heartwarming ,Funny @ Sad . This was a Wonderful posting Writen by a truly gifted Storyteller.Ilook forward to reading how the mysteries raised in these chapters come to light. AS always thank you for the privelege of reading your story.
Thanks for the 3 chaps today. Loved them all. Btw the docs sounded nice.
OK – i have spent the bette part of a rainy NY saturday reading this entore sotry and all I can saw is wow – i laughed out loud and shed a tear – amazing job!
So much secrecy… I’m dying of curiosity here!!! More please…
lovin it!!!!!!!!!! i think you’re doing great…just waitin’ to see shane and alice together again!!! and dash and dana together…they’re hilarious