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The Promise
Dr. Solano: Youve never seen them before?
Shane shook her head slightly.
Dr. Solano: I know they are bad…but you should take a good look….see how much improvement youve made. …if you told me you were that…that person sitting right before me, Id say it was medically impossible…especially not with the medicine and procedures they had back them…..someone must have really gone all out for you….I mean youve had procedures done in every corner of the world.
Shane: Yeah…my….it was all taken care of for me…..
Dr. Solano: Okay….lets move on…I still want to know more about your history Shane, but I can see thats more than enough for you today.
Doctor Solano took the file and placed it on the counter, and tied her hair back. She drew the small table over to the bed and sat back down in her chair. She looked at Shane with sympathetic eyes and raised the second stirrup placing Shanes foot in it herself. She pulled out a sheet and covered Shanes lower body and noticed Shanes head was to the side and her face held no expression. She was slipping back into her former self. She had turned herself off and wouldnt be back until things were over with. Doctor Solano leaned over and placed a kiss on her forehead and went to work on the mysteries of Shanes body. Her heart nearly broke when she looked over to check on Shane and saw tears sliding from the corner of her eyes and collecting on the shoulder of her hospital scrubs.
The one thing she enjoyed about her new job was that she could get attached. She hated being so disconnected in the hospital, and when she and several other doctors in her class got together they finally decided on opening a place that could really help men and woman. They bought out the entire floor of the building and opened their own practice. Things had been going so well they recently bought out the rest of the building and were expanding into other branches of medicine. Doctor Solano was so busy unraveling the mysterious woman before her in her own head that she barely heard Shane speak up.
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(16 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5)
Okay, as requested, comments come now…please keep it up and don’t take so long between posts. Laissez les bon temps rouler!
So glad you got back to this. I am am waiting patiently for some answers and you keep writing more laden with question.
Excellent job!
i am loveing your work. hope things work out for shane and alice.
I Also think Dash is such a great cartor. Post soon
2 things. What the hell did they drag Dash into and What had happen to Shane in tha past, why her body was so messed up. You better give me a fix soon hun cuz their a lotta thing I wanna know. It’s a so damn good story.
WOW it took me all night to read all your chapters..so i could catch up with this last one. You got me hooked! I love it :D. Now i wonder what happened to Shane in the past..she was raped? I wanna know about Alice too…will Shane forgive her? I hope so!. I can’t wait for next chapter. Excellent job! ;D
hmmmm the price we must all pay for not getting testesed, wrap it up all of you : )
Always impressing me with your talent. Oh and…what makes you think that I wouldn’t make someone else my bitch in prison. You forget how I am at work..~winks~
Great chapter. Hope everything will be ok and work out for Shane and Alice. Post soon, thank you!
WOW!!!! Heartwrenching , Heartwarming ,Funny @ Sad . This was a Wonderful posting Writen by a truly gifted Storyteller.Ilook forward to reading how the mysteries raised in these chapters come to light. AS always thank you for the privelege of reading your story.
Thanks for the 3 chaps today. Loved them all. Btw the docs sounded nice.
OK – i have spent the bette part of a rainy NY saturday reading this entore sotry and all I can saw is wow – i laughed out loud and shed a tear – amazing job!
So much secrecy… I’m dying of curiosity here!!! More please…
lovin it!!!!!!!!!! i think you’re doing great…just waitin’ to see shane and alice together again!!! and dash and dana together…they’re hilarious