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The Promise
Shane: Its not as cold as it used to be…
Dr. Solano: What was that?
Shane: The other guy….the doctor I used to have…he had cold hands and the metal was really cold and the room was bright and cold…and smelled sterile….
Dr. Solano: All the things we hate about the doctor……we have heated trays so the equipment is warm and we keep the temperature up…
Shane: Thanks Doctor Solano…
Dr. Solano: Its Mari…..and what for?
Shane: For not making me finish that file….
Dr. Solano: No problem Shane…..but you will have to finish it…whether its with me or yourself…..Im done down here…..but I need to take some blood to finish the tests.
Mari took what seemed like a healthy milk jug of blood from Shane and tagged it all for the lab. Shane sat on the table with her legs into her chest and watched as the doctor discarded her gloves and tossed them in the bio-hazard bin. She moved over to the lounge chair in the corner and motioned for Shane to join her. Shane reluctantly climbed down and balled herself up on the couch next to the good doctor, avoiding her eye contact.
Dr. Solano: We need to talk about your ***** life….past present and future……
Shane looked over at the doctor like she had just asked her for her first born child.
Dr. Solano: Im going to run up an extensive STD test and I am also going to check the samples and tissue cells I took…But we did a lot of stuff here today and I want to know everything Shane… Its completely confidential, and I just want a heads up on things to look for okay.
Shane nodded and went into details about her life on the streets and her current situations. In the end it seemed like nothing she told the doctor could shock her. Shane noticed she wrote nothing down, and barely interjected unless she wanted dates. When they wrapped up, Mari went over Shanes options as far as safe *****, and realized she had a thing or two to learn from Shane, who seemed to have an extensive knowledge in all things protective as far as homo and heterosexual intercourse was concerned.
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(16 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5)
Okay, as requested, comments come now…please keep it up and don’t take so long between posts. Laissez les bon temps rouler!
So glad you got back to this. I am am waiting patiently for some answers and you keep writing more laden with question.
Excellent job!
i am loveing your work. hope things work out for shane and alice.
I Also think Dash is such a great cartor. Post soon
2 things. What the hell did they drag Dash into and What had happen to Shane in tha past, why her body was so messed up. You better give me a fix soon hun cuz their a lotta thing I wanna know. It’s a so damn good story.
WOW it took me all night to read all your chapters..so i could catch up with this last one. You got me hooked! I love it :D. Now i wonder what happened to Shane in the past..she was raped? I wanna know about Alice too…will Shane forgive her? I hope so!. I can’t wait for next chapter. Excellent job! ;D
hmmmm the price we must all pay for not getting testesed, wrap it up all of you : )
Always impressing me with your talent. Oh and…what makes you think that I wouldn’t make someone else my bitch in prison. You forget how I am at work..~winks~
Great chapter. Hope everything will be ok and work out for Shane and Alice. Post soon, thank you!
WOW!!!! Heartwrenching , Heartwarming ,Funny @ Sad . This was a Wonderful posting Writen by a truly gifted Storyteller.Ilook forward to reading how the mysteries raised in these chapters come to light. AS always thank you for the privelege of reading your story.
Thanks for the 3 chaps today. Loved them all. Btw the docs sounded nice.
OK – i have spent the bette part of a rainy NY saturday reading this entore sotry and all I can saw is wow – i laughed out loud and shed a tear – amazing job!
So much secrecy… I’m dying of curiosity here!!! More please…
lovin it!!!!!!!!!! i think you’re doing great…just waitin’ to see shane and alice together again!!! and dash and dana together…they’re hilarious