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The Promise
Dash: Trust me….Ill explain on the way home.
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Shane felt her body falling and jumped in shock as the passenger door she leaned against swung open. She found herself in Vans arms before she hit the ground.
Shane: What the ***** man?
Van: Ive been trying to get your attention for like five minutes…you were in Samland again.
Van stopped when he realized what he said and they both stood looking at each other in an awkward silence.
Van: Come on Shane…lets just get it over with….you have to do this.
Shane slid from the seat and Van caught her before her full body weight hit the ground. It was an innocent gesture, but still they both knew, it was the closest theyd been in over a decade. They stopped to look deep into each others eyes and the emotions that hid behind them became too much. Van looked away and Shanes eyes grew cold. She continued to bore into him, but he turned to face the building they were parked in front of.
Van: When youre done, theyre going to give you something…so well know if you didnt go or not.
Shane: WHAT! So now youve been talking with the doctor and…
Van: Shane! Calm down…Bette said every patient gets one every visit and you dont expect it your first visit. Anyway, Ill come pick you up when youre done so…
Van looked over through is finely chopped bangs and saw Shane looking up at the building like a scared puppy. Shane was knocked out of her haze when she felt a heat spread over her body. She looked over to see Van had wrapped one of his tree trunk arms around her shoulder and was walking her into the building. It seemed like lately everyone had been touching her. Shane had never been one for physical contact and made it as limited as possible. Even when ***** another nameless, faceless beauty she touched only when she had to in order to get what she wanted. It was really easy when she first let Bette in. It was almost like they both needed it. Shane knew if she started to let people touch her she would crave it when it was never around….but lately, it was always around.
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(16 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5)
Okay, as requested, comments come now…please keep it up and don’t take so long between posts. Laissez les bon temps rouler!
So glad you got back to this. I am am waiting patiently for some answers and you keep writing more laden with question.
Excellent job!
i am loveing your work. hope things work out for shane and alice.
I Also think Dash is such a great cartor. Post soon
2 things. What the hell did they drag Dash into and What had happen to Shane in tha past, why her body was so messed up. You better give me a fix soon hun cuz their a lotta thing I wanna know. It’s a so damn good story.
WOW it took me all night to read all your chapters..so i could catch up with this last one. You got me hooked! I love it :D. Now i wonder what happened to Shane in the past..she was raped? I wanna know about Alice too…will Shane forgive her? I hope so!. I can’t wait for next chapter. Excellent job! ;D
hmmmm the price we must all pay for not getting testesed, wrap it up all of you : )
Always impressing me with your talent. Oh and…what makes you think that I wouldn’t make someone else my bitch in prison. You forget how I am at work..~winks~
Great chapter. Hope everything will be ok and work out for Shane and Alice. Post soon, thank you!
WOW!!!! Heartwrenching , Heartwarming ,Funny @ Sad . This was a Wonderful posting Writen by a truly gifted Storyteller.Ilook forward to reading how the mysteries raised in these chapters come to light. AS always thank you for the privelege of reading your story.
Thanks for the 3 chaps today. Loved them all. Btw the docs sounded nice.
OK – i have spent the bette part of a rainy NY saturday reading this entore sotry and all I can saw is wow – i laughed out loud and shed a tear – amazing job!
So much secrecy… I’m dying of curiosity here!!! More please…
lovin it!!!!!!!!!! i think you’re doing great…just waitin’ to see shane and alice together again!!! and dash and dana together…they’re hilarious