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    The Promise

    Story written on April 30, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Chapter 51 – pink roses

    The two brooding heartthrobs made their way out of the elevator and down the corridor. Van opened the door to see a large island desk with a man and a woman sitting and answering phones with headsets on. The right side of the room was light pink and the left side was baby blue. The two receptionists looked at each other and then turned back to Van and Shane and asked at the same time How can we help you? Shane looked at Van and raised her eyebrow. She turned to dart back towards the elevator to escape the creepy uber chipper secretaries, but Van grabbed her arm and pulled her close.

    Woman: How can we help you and your husband maam?

    Shanes jaw dropped and she looked at Van in horror.

    Van: There should be an appointment set for my…uh…my….

    Shane: Im not his wife Im his…

    Van: OConnor….it should be set for Sam OConnor.

    Shane turned back to face Van and he whispered behind his teeth.

    Van: You have to take tests…dont forget results go in computers…for life….so just in case…

    Shane pulled free of Vans vise grip and crossed her arms.

    Man: And what about you sir …Mister?

    Van: Donny….McCutcheon and no I dont have an appointment with you.

    Man: Well if youre interested in seeing the Urologist in the future heres our card. Dont forget this is a Man Friendly Zone and we are here to make you comfortable.

    Van: Uhm..thanks but…

    Van took the light blue card from the man and flipped it around in his fingers.

    Shane: Hypocrite!

    Shane scoffed and took the pink card from the woman and moved towards the entrance on the pink side of the room.

    Van: See if one of the doctors can meet for a consultation.

    Man: A consultation?

    Van: Yes, Im a doctor, and my time is very limited, see if they can meet with me right now.

    Man: Well, yes doctor Borelli can take you..

    Van: Good Ill take it.

    Van turned to Shane, and looked her up and down.

    Van: Anymore excuses? Ill be here when you get done…

    Shane looked at the door before her. On the door was a design for the mens room, with a line drawn diagonally across it. Beneath it the sign read Woman Friendly Zone . She slowly went to open the door but found it locked. She turned back to the receptionist who was busy ogling Vans bulging pecks.

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    4. 2 things. What the hell did they drag Dash into and What had happen to Shane in tha past, why her body was so messed up. You better give me a fix soon hun cuz their a lotta thing I wanna know. It’s a so damn good story.

    5. WOW it took me all night to read all your chapters..so i could catch up with this last one. You got me hooked! I love it :D. Now i wonder what happened to Shane in the past..she was raped? I wanna know about Alice too…will Shane forgive her? I hope so!. I can’t wait for next chapter. Excellent job! ;D

    7. Always impressing me with your talent. Oh and…what makes you think that I wouldn’t make someone else my bitch in prison. You forget how I am at work..~winks~

    9. WOW!!!! Heartwrenching , Heartwarming ,Funny @ Sad . This was a Wonderful posting Writen by a truly gifted Storyteller.Ilook forward to reading how the mysteries raised in these chapters come to light. AS always thank you for the privelege of reading your story.

    11. OK – i have spent the bette part of a rainy NY saturday reading this entore sotry and all I can saw is wow – i laughed out loud and shed a tear – amazing job!

    13. lovin it!!!!!!!!!! i think you’re doing great…just waitin’ to see shane and alice together again!!! and dash and dana together…they’re hilarious

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