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The Promise
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Adb – my head is swelling from all your complimentsI wont be able to fit out the door if you leep it up! And the privilege is mine
Pan – thanks for posting with me yeah the docs are supposed to be the peeps the hospitals would get rid of cause they are too soft.
Shy- I impress you with my talent? Which talents would those be cause I was hoping they were involving typing! And as for you laying it down cell-block D styleyeah you might ***** somebody out
ACE – wher eyou been luv? I want to find out about Dana the Furry!
M & Lyn- Ill bring ya more ~ slaps ya on the *****~ now.what will I do with Dash Shane, and Bette on the Dance floor?
Chapter 52
Tina pulled the Saab into the parking lot. Her hair settled as she turned off the ignition and turned to look at Bette. Bette sat sideways facing Tina and had a giant smile on her face.
Tina: I wish I could have been there babyit sounds like things went really well.
Bette threw both hands in the air and squealed. Tina was taken back by her behavior and for a moment thought shed been drinking.
Bette: Tee, it was greatI mean I was nervous as all ***** and most of them were completely bored to deathbut they didnt hate meand nobody died!
Tina: Died?
Bette: I had a dream last night that they all hated me and one of them accidentally died, and they burned me at the stake
Tina: God Complex much?
Bette: What do you mean?
Tina leaned over and kissed Bette as she wrapped her arms around the blonde beautys neck.
Tina: Joan of Arc was burned at the Stake.dont tell me you think St. Judes has made you a martyr?
Bette smiled against Tinas lips and rolled her eyes as she pulled away.
Tina: So what finally got you to calm down?
Tina: Something Shane said
Bettes face dampened as she thought back to the hurtful words Shane spit at her earlier that day. She played with the hem of her shirt and chewed on her bottom lip. Tina was baffled at what could instantly turn her Type A wife into a shy child in seconds.
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i don’t get it, does shane even want to get back with alice because it doesn’t seem so. great update!
patient i am.
long you make us wait…
Sorry I’ve been MIA but I’ve caught up on your story and thank god i did, it’s amazing as always and even though i’m a cripple today i did a little dance of happiness coz i saw your post!! lol Can’t wait for more and thank you!!!! =0)
Brilliant as always. Oh yeah and Laissez les bons temps rouler means let the good times roll.
hey there, new reader. i love this story, its great, im and huge Alice/Shane fan. its kinda weird i guess because they wernt/arnt together on the show. anyhow, i love your story, but i was also wondering how much you know about HIV/AIDS. if shane had it.. shes not really putting anyone at risk unless they have a huge cut and like.. mash it in with her cuts, it has to go into the blood. Alice.. i guess could have gotten it, but only if she had cuts, or cuts/sores in her mouth. maybe HIV/AIDS wasnt the way you were headed with this, but its just something to think about, also lol i dont want shane to have a disease, or give it to anyone else. anyhow, awesome story, i hope alice and shane get back together.
I love very much this chapter but if I was Alice, I didn’t know what to do about Shane but I suppose, no I believe you know what.
Great one again. I just wondering if by the end of your story we will know what happen to Shane in the past to have such a big medical file. Cuz I still asking myself “What the hell did happen to Shane?” But I’m trusting you that you gonna tell us ~wink and go get beer~ Need a fix soon.
GREAT CHAPTER…YOUR A GREAT WRITER
FINALLY BEEN WAITING SO LONG MY COMPUTER COLLECTED DUST. HA HA JUST KIDDING IT WAS GREAT TO SEE YOUR BACK AND WRITING OF COURSE.
Lol really great dialogues, very dinamics..and really funny: Great the kid’s gone crazy too…..got my share of dash and dana…now i’m really looking forward for shane and alice!!!! thanks…adios y besos
I don’t think I have heard the remix with JT I will have to look for that. I was thinking maybe some Kiesha cole you know the one where AK did the beat for her, that would be hot
I see Raven translated the phrase for you. Do you really think I would insult you and expect another chapter ?! ;-) Keep it coming!
lol i sure did read everything in one night…next day i was a zombie…but a happy one though :P. Ok you are making us suffer!! poor Alice…camon Shane needs to get back to Al…they need eachother…they are so great toguether ;D. This chapter was great but so short *sniff* and i hope you get your computer fixed very fast!. I can’t wait for next chapter!!.
This is absolutely my favorite story cause it makes me happy to see that you have posted. Best wishes your computer. Good Job.
Good chapter. Well I hope that Shane and Alice could have a talk and see how is turn out, I just wan’t they happy and be with each other. Post soon, thank you!
Funny as always!!! I’m still around and I’m getting to furry Dana again… so far I’ve only written the recap but I’ll get there LOL…
Loved this chapter!!! You just get better and better. Your story is the first one I look for. I’m glad Bette @ Shane Settled their argument. Ihope Shane @ Alice talk so they can work At getting back together. I hope your computer gets fixed soon because your story is just too good to be without. Thank you for going to so much effort to post this chapter it was worth the wait.