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The Promise
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Tina: And that was?
Bette: UhmFake it till you make it
Tina: Hmmgood mottobaby whats the matter?
Bette: UhmIm not sure, but I think Shane and I got into a fight this morning after you left.
Tina: What? Why you and Shane dont
Bette: This would be our first one.
Tina: Oh babycome here!
Bette climbed over the stick shift, and into Tinas lap. Tina wrapped her arms around Bette and they sat in each others arms with the top down, in the warm breezy night.
Tina: Lets go inside it will cheer you up.
Bette: No I dont want to Shes pissed cause I made Van take her to the gynecologist.
Tina: Wellfake it till you make it!
Bette pulled away and gave her an indignant look.
Tina: What? I like itbesides, baby she knows we love her and care for her like shes our own childshell get over it.
Bette: Yeah I guessI justIm kinda pissed all this time and shes never had a single STD test.shes putting us all at riskI mean how many times in the past few months have I patched up bruises and cuts?
Tina put her hand over Bettes mouth and placed a kiss on top.
Tina: Some people would rather not knownow, how long will she have to wait for the results?
Bette: Everything should be done in about two weeks I suppose.
Tina: Then how about for two weeks we show her how much we love her and keep her busy so she knows shes not alone if things turn out for the worse.
Bette nodded her head and gave Tina a quick kiss.
Tina: Alrightget off your ***** and lets get inside before Happy Hours over.
Bette rolled her eyes and climbed out of Tinas lap. The two made their way to the front entrance of the Planet, where they bypassed the line and walked into the front entrance without bothering to pay cover.
When the door opened, the beat was pounding and they felt it to their cores. Bette signaled to Tina that she was going to get drinks, while Tina went to their usual table in the corner. Tina slowed her pace when she saw Alice sulking into her drink. She placed a hand on her shoulder and sat next to the pixie- haired investigator, while watching her body language for a clue as to what was going on.
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i don’t get it, does shane even want to get back with alice because it doesn’t seem so. great update!
patient i am.
long you make us wait…
Sorry I’ve been MIA but I’ve caught up on your story and thank god i did, it’s amazing as always and even though i’m a cripple today i did a little dance of happiness coz i saw your post!! lol Can’t wait for more and thank you!!!! =0)
Brilliant as always. Oh yeah and Laissez les bons temps rouler means let the good times roll.
hey there, new reader. i love this story, its great, im and huge Alice/Shane fan. its kinda weird i guess because they wernt/arnt together on the show. anyhow, i love your story, but i was also wondering how much you know about HIV/AIDS. if shane had it.. shes not really putting anyone at risk unless they have a huge cut and like.. mash it in with her cuts, it has to go into the blood. Alice.. i guess could have gotten it, but only if she had cuts, or cuts/sores in her mouth. maybe HIV/AIDS wasnt the way you were headed with this, but its just something to think about, also lol i dont want shane to have a disease, or give it to anyone else. anyhow, awesome story, i hope alice and shane get back together.
I love very much this chapter but if I was Alice, I didn’t know what to do about Shane but I suppose, no I believe you know what.
Great one again. I just wondering if by the end of your story we will know what happen to Shane in the past to have such a big medical file. Cuz I still asking myself “What the hell did happen to Shane?” But I’m trusting you that you gonna tell us ~wink and go get beer~ Need a fix soon.
GREAT CHAPTER…YOUR A GREAT WRITER
FINALLY BEEN WAITING SO LONG MY COMPUTER COLLECTED DUST. HA HA JUST KIDDING IT WAS GREAT TO SEE YOUR BACK AND WRITING OF COURSE.
Lol really great dialogues, very dinamics..and really funny: Great the kid’s gone crazy too…..got my share of dash and dana…now i’m really looking forward for shane and alice!!!! thanks…adios y besos
I don’t think I have heard the remix with JT I will have to look for that. I was thinking maybe some Kiesha cole you know the one where AK did the beat for her, that would be hot
I see Raven translated the phrase for you. Do you really think I would insult you and expect another chapter ?! ;-) Keep it coming!
lol i sure did read everything in one night…next day i was a zombie…but a happy one though :P. Ok you are making us suffer!! poor Alice…camon Shane needs to get back to Al…they need eachother…they are so great toguether ;D. This chapter was great but so short *sniff* and i hope you get your computer fixed very fast!. I can’t wait for next chapter!!.
This is absolutely my favorite story cause it makes me happy to see that you have posted. Best wishes your computer. Good Job.
Good chapter. Well I hope that Shane and Alice could have a talk and see how is turn out, I just wan’t they happy and be with each other. Post soon, thank you!
Funny as always!!! I’m still around and I’m getting to furry Dana again… so far I’ve only written the recap but I’ll get there LOL…
Loved this chapter!!! You just get better and better. Your story is the first one I look for. I’m glad Bette @ Shane Settled their argument. Ihope Shane @ Alice talk so they can work At getting back together. I hope your computer gets fixed soon because your story is just too good to be without. Thank you for going to so much effort to post this chapter it was worth the wait.