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    The Promise

    Story written on June 4, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=54436
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    Chapter 54 – Kung Fu Hustle

    Shane:You don’t!

    Alice:Huh?

    Alice snapped out of her daze.

    Shane:You’ve got the hots for Van AND Dash…Eeeeew!

    Alice: I do not.

    Shane:Yeah you do!

    Alice: Shut up! I just had a weird dream…a cold left-over Thai food before bed dream…I even think LSD was involved.

    Shane poked and tickled Alice making her squirm uncontrollably.

    Shane: Come on Mrs. Robinson…you’ve got the hots for Dash! This is gonna make her day!

    Alice: You wouldn’t!?!

    Shane: I would!

    Alice: I’ll with hold *****.

    Shane: Eh…I’ll be okay.

    Alice: ***** you then!

    Shane: But you just said you wouldn’t….I’ll make you a deal…you give me a ride …with a quick stop for some shoes, and I won’t even tell her your cradle robbing fantasies.

    Alice: Deal, let’s go.

    Alice grabbed Shane’s hand and tugged her abruptly towards the door.

    Alice: What kind of shoes do you want?

    Shane: Same kind I always get.

    Alice:What’s that?

    Shane:Boots or Black All-stars.

    Alice: Why?

    Shane: Its just my style Al.

    Alice: Fine…but one day, when we’re out, I’m gonna get you to at least try something else on.

    Shane: Deal.

    Alice and Shane pulled up at the church and Shane stepped out wearing her new Chucks. She leaned in the door and kissed Alice goodbye.

    Alice: I’ll be done by like four…where do you want me to meet you?

    Shane: Why don’t you just meet me here?

    Alice: Okay that’ll work…I’ll be right here…Baby…

    Shane’s face lit up and she wiggled her eyebrows.

    Shane: Uh…Okay, if you get done early, you can just come in. Someone will know how to find me…okay?

    Alice was booming with a giant cheesy smile. Shane rolled her eyes, knowing damn well that Alice would beat a blind man with his own cane to come back early now that she had an invite. Shane slapped the roof of the mini, and went to jog off. She stopped halfway up the steps and turned around when she heard Alice yelling to her.

    Alice: What do you want to do about dinner? Should I pick something up?

    Shane: Nah…I’ll cook…

    Alice: Dear God, I don’t think I can take this open and honest Shane…I’ve never seen her make a sandwich before… “Uhm…Sure, okay…”

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    2. Yeh, that would have been cruel if you just left us hanging, especially your loyal fans. Good Chapter. Well if you do want to leave, you can a least end the story properly. Good Job.
      Oh yeah, is your computer problems worked out?

    3. Im glad you decided to stay and update your story. We don’t have many Shane’s fics and yours is so good that would be a shame if didnt continue..it would be sad especially for your loyal fans and Shane’s fans. Great chapter! and please continue :)

    7. I really hope your gonna finish your story cuz their still a lot I wanna know about Shane past. Great update as usual. I really loved it. Can’t wait for my next fix.

    10. i read all the story in the last two days and it is all fucking awsome. i love it, some writers just don’t go into enough detail, others just go on and on about things that mean nothing, you’ve got the perfect balance. the whle story is well thought out. i think alice and shane are great together, i love the interaction between dash and shane. i like the way you have went with all the characters through i wasn’t too sure about the dana/lara scence in the club, it seemed too bold for dana.
      i really hope you continue.

    13. At first i had to confess never read any fanfic before. But than someone mentioned this story on the discussion board and i decided to read your story. What can i tell? fascinated, gripped, thrilled!!! I read it three times running. Your story is just amazing. Thank you very, very much!!!!
      And pleaseeeeeeee continue soon. Can´t wait for another chapter. Love this story.

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