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    The Promise

    Story written on June 4, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=54436
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    Chapter 54 – Kung Fu Hustle

    Shane: Well…when I cleaned up, it was the deal…kinda do the crime, pay the time.

    Alice: Shane, I thought you didn’t make it to high school?

    Shane: I didn’t, Father Joe home schooled Van and I…

    Alice: Van’s the hot guy at the church right?

    Shane: Van’s uhm…kinda, like my brother…sorta…

    Alice’s jaw dropped full of food. She quickly recovered and shook off her shock.

    Alice: Oh…Okay…how is he sorta your brother?

    Shane: Well, it’s a long story, but basically we were raised thinking were till Father Joe told us he wasn’t one hundred percent sure ….we, well…we never bothered with DNA…at the time we never needed it, and I mean we…

    Alice: Yeah you guys are creepy look a likes now that I think about it…it’s the crazy hair and jaw line but you’ve got freakishly translucent skin….its like…

    Shane gave Alice an indignant look as she finished her food. She looked down at her arms and back at Alice.

    Alice: Baby, I can see your heart beating through your chest at night cause your so skinny…I think Van stole all the vitamins and nutrients in the womb and left nothing behind for you… he is older?

    Shane looked down and shrugged.

    Shane: Not…well….Wait, did you call me baby?

    Alice:Yeah

    Shane: I like that….we’ve got to get going.

    Shane reached in her pocket and took out her medications. She hopped off the counter, leaving Alice to her own mental devices. Shane took her pills and grabbed a bottle of water before leaving the kitchen with her head down.

    Alice: The who now? How the ***** do you NOT know who’s older? Are they twins? Okay, focus on the important info here…Shane has a brother…This is like a Bi-sexual, too good to be true situation…he’s crazy hot, I wonder if Shane would want to…

    Shane: AL!…DON’T EVEN THINK ABOUT IT YOU ***** DEVIANT!

    Shane yelled from the other room in disgust. Alice smiled and shook her head, knowing someday she might break Shane down and convince her to…

    Shane: I Said NO!…Don’t even picture a sick and twisted threesome with Van…you’d have a better chance of getting me in bed with Dash.

    Alice’s face went pale as she thought back to her dream from the night before. Shane came walking into the room slowly, with her eyes bugged out of their sockets as she gave Alice a knowing look.

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    2. Yeh, that would have been cruel if you just left us hanging, especially your loyal fans. Good Chapter. Well if you do want to leave, you can a least end the story properly. Good Job.
      Oh yeah, is your computer problems worked out?

    3. Im glad you decided to stay and update your story. We don’t have many Shane’s fics and yours is so good that would be a shame if didnt continue..it would be sad especially for your loyal fans and Shane’s fans. Great chapter! and please continue :)

    7. I really hope your gonna finish your story cuz their still a lot I wanna know about Shane past. Great update as usual. I really loved it. Can’t wait for my next fix.

    10. i read all the story in the last two days and it is all fucking awsome. i love it, some writers just don’t go into enough detail, others just go on and on about things that mean nothing, you’ve got the perfect balance. the whle story is well thought out. i think alice and shane are great together, i love the interaction between dash and shane. i like the way you have went with all the characters through i wasn’t too sure about the dana/lara scence in the club, it seemed too bold for dana.
      i really hope you continue.

    13. At first i had to confess never read any fanfic before. But than someone mentioned this story on the discussion board and i decided to read your story. What can i tell? fascinated, gripped, thrilled!!! I read it three times running. Your story is just amazing. Thank you very, very much!!!!
      And pleaseeeeeeee continue soon. Can´t wait for another chapter. Love this story.

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