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The quicker, the better Chapter4part2
“Shane twigged me too, how does that woman do that?”
“Shane is definitely unique. She would always tell me to go for it that she could see the same look in your eyes, but I could never see it so I just thought she was winding me up as usual. I think she also just wanted me to stop wining on about you as well, she said I was a pain in the arse.”
Both girls began laughing
“Did she ever give you that line, the quicker the better”
“Yeah she did, the little *****, just wait till I see her.”
“Well by the sounds of it she did try telling us, but she also took great pleasure no doubt in playing with us.”
The room filled with laughter for a minute or so then
“Dana I am so glad we have let this all out in the open, I feel like I am free. Do you know what I mean?”
“I do”
“But what do we do now? Do we try and give it a go or just stay the way we are, I mean it could still all go wrong, and I really don’t want to lose you”
“I know, but I can’t shake these feelings Al, it’s not just a crush, I have never felt this way before.”
“I feel the same, but we are already like an old married couple, we know all that needs to be known about each other. We won’t experience those first dates talking about what we are like, what we do for a living, our likes and dislikes, yada yada yada, we already know all that”
“You don’t know I can salsa dance” Dana stated
“Oh my god Dana, I have seen you dance and you definitely can NOT salsa dance!”
“Ok you got me, I can’t. But Al, I could learn, I mean we could learn together”
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(33 votes, average: 4.03 out of 5)
enjoying your story very much
This one is even better than the first part. I loved it! The kiss was absolutely wonderful and you put the french line so well. They’re soooo cute.
Ps I love the Dana’s shirt (I’m with stupid)
Soooo….CUTE!…I luv this story..And the french, very sexy..please Post Soon!.. Like real soon. Thnx 4 writing…
Hi laughsalot. Ive just caught up with your last couple of chapters and i love it soo much. Alice and Dana are my favorite couple and you write them so well. I love how you kept both a mix of humour and tension in the lead up to the 4am kiss. Thank you and i cant wait to next post.
So sweet and cute! Yeah, it’ll always be 4am for me. We’re such hopeless romantics.
as soon at she said it was 3:58a i smiled. danish are such hopeless romantics.