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The quicker, the better Chapter4part2
“That’s a new experience isn’t it, we could do all kinds of stuff together, it would be nice to try new things out with you.” Dana carried on.
“Dana, you are sooo sweet, how could I ever disagree?
“See, I know we know each other inside out, but I am sure being with you asa girlfriend” Dana went really red at saying this but she had to continue ” I will live every day as I have never before.”
‘*****’ Alice thought ‘how could I have met this wonderful women and for years hide my true feelings from her she is a dream come true, and how on god’s earth could she have fallen for me, she’s simply taking my breathe away.’
“Dana, your so cute right now”
“*****” they both screamed out
“I think he may be jealous Dane”
“Mr P, do one, I’m busy here” Dana scowled at her cat.
“Damn Dana, look at the time I really need to go I have to be at work for seven”
Dana looked over, ‘great’ she thought ‘all this time I have waited to feel Alice’s lips upon mine and Mr P spoils it, then she realises she has to go.’
“Don’t look so disappointed, we can take this up tomorrow I mean later today, I promise. I would rather not go but I have a meeting and it’s really important”
“It’s ok, I am sure I can wait another few hours for you, after all I’ve waited years so I am sure I can wait a bit longer.” Dana lied, how was she going to sleep now, how was she going to concentrate on anything else but the thought of
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(33 votes, average: 4.03 out of 5)
enjoying your story very much
This one is even better than the first part. I loved it! The kiss was absolutely wonderful and you put the french line so well. They’re soooo cute.
Ps I love the Dana’s shirt (I’m with stupid)
Soooo….CUTE!…I luv this story..And the french, very sexy..please Post Soon!.. Like real soon. Thnx 4 writing…
Hi laughsalot. Ive just caught up with your last couple of chapters and i love it soo much. Alice and Dana are my favorite couple and you write them so well. I love how you kept both a mix of humour and tension in the lead up to the 4am kiss. Thank you and i cant wait to next post.
So sweet and cute! Yeah, it’ll always be 4am for me. We’re such hopeless romantics.
as soon at she said it was 3:58a i smiled. danish are such hopeless romantics.