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The Reluctant (chapter 6)
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“It’s okay, Dana. It doesn’t have to be done today. Just…soon. I mean, the longer we let this sit and fester the worse it’s going to get. Your wedding’s in less than 2 months, you know.”
“I know, I know” She sighed, dropping her head to her hands. “But what do I do about the whole business aspect of our relationship? I mean, she’s still my manager. What happens when we break it off? I have to find a new one? ‘Cause let me tell you, Al, it’s hard trying to find a decent manager these days.” I’d told her that was a bad idea.
“I told you that was a bad idea.” She glared at me.
“Shut up.”
“You tell me to shut up a lot. Is that all the sexual frustration pent up?” I smirked evilly.
“Alice!” She glanced around the room to make sure no on was listening.
“I thought so.”
“I didn’t say- would you stop it?” I held 2 fingers up to my mouth and stick my tongue in between them in the middle of her sentence. I burst out laughing at her horrified expression. “What are you, 4?!”
“Oh, come on, Dana. You know you want to laugh. I’m hilarious.”
“Oh yeah. A real riot. Gah!” She suddenly jumped up, almost knocking her chair over. I raised an amused eyebrow at her. “My pants are vibrating.” She explained, pulling her cell phone from the pocket of her jeans. Very tight, low cut jeans, may I add. Don’t stare, Alice.
“Well, I’ve been told I have that effect on people.” I joked. She rolled her eyes as she flipped the phone open.
“Hello? Oh! Hi, hun! No, I’m at the Planet. Um…just Alice.” She made a frightened face and mouthed ‘help me!’
“Do it! Do it now!” I whispered, shooing her with my hands.
“No way!” She whispered back, shaking her head furiously. I stood up, reaching for the phone.
“Okay, I’ll do it!” She turned around, her back to me, trying to keep the phone away. I attacked her, poking her side, and she spazed, jerking away. Trying to keep the phone out of my grasp, she held it over her head, and we both erupted in silent giggles when we realized we could still hear Tonya droning on endlessly. “God, does she do that all the time?” I asked. She nodded, then smirked.
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Great stuff! Keep it up, hope you can find the inspiration to keep going.
Well, things can’t stay happy forver, I guess, but I’ve got faith that they’ll get back together:) Anyways, I loved this update and I don’t think it sucked, so I wish you the best of luck and hope that you can get over the writer’s block, soon, or it might take some time. Okay, I’ll shut up now, but I just wanted to tell you that your doing an awsome job:) Keep it up!
Alice is taking Dana’s inability to tell Tonya very well so far. That can’t last… lol
awwww al and dane are soo cute. i hope dane tells her soon!!! im sure al wont understand for very long…
LMAO! You write Tonya brilliantly! She’s too much, wow. So anyways, great update. Looking forward to the next! Post soon.
Oh dork!..nice way to end this chappy, i loved the humor in this one. I was totally cracking up when dana said “GAH” lol, when her phone rang. That was so dana. Hehe, i am brillant! lol, ok maybe not brillant, but i notice the little details, like the whole watch. Well i really hope that was dana does isn’t too terrible, i dunno. We’ll see, it had to be bad for alice to feel the way she did. Btw, i also liked how in this chappy it seemed like alice was actually talking to us, which i don’t think you’ve done b4. hmm. Well post soon!
Great chapter. I was cracking up through the entire thing. You know, no one can write a Danish fic without mentioning Alice’s bed head at least once! It makes me laugh! Well, please update again soon! I can’t wait to read what you have coming next!!
This is wonderful, you had me laughing the entire time. Don’t know that I am looking forward to Day 5, I can see it’s going to make Alice feel bad. I don’t like seeing sweet Al upset… Nor do I like seeing Dana make dumb mistake after dumb mistake. But they usually figure it all out and I hope that is the case this time. Please post soon.
Another great chapter. “”Okay, pookie. Here, catch!” And she made a kissy sound into the phone” that whole bit made me laugh! keep up the amazing writing! Update soon!
Oh Dana *sigh of frustration* just tell Tonya already! ;) Loved the update! It was funny. Btw, I was reading Lost in you by Sammysgirl. And actually, it wasn’t the first time that I made that mistake(posting a commnt on the wrong story). So, who earns the title of dork of the year now? ;)