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    The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 18

    Story written on May 10, 2005 by MoreThanSatisfied.
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    For one night…
    (B&T Beginning Set on College Campus – SEQUEL to THE ROOMMATES)

    Alice looked up with tears in her eyes. What?

    Yes, sick to my stomach. I just dont want you to ***** her over like you did with Bette., said Tina.

    I made a mistake, okay? People make mistakes. Its not the end of the world. Im sorry. Ive been sorry. Ive been apologizing. What am I supposed to do? I cant erase the past, Tina., said Alice, wiping away the tears that slowly made their way down her flushed cheeks.

    Tina was taken aback at Alices display of emotion. When she spoke, her voice came out a little softer. No, you cant erase the past. But you can repeat it. And I just dont want to see Dana get hurt.

    I wouldnt do that., said Alice.

    How would I know?, asked Tina.

    I guess you wouldnt. But you should knowI never intended for all that stuff to happen with the article. I knew that Bette was having a hard time dealing with things. I thought it would help her out.

    Help her out or help you out? I saw how you were looking at her that day in the student center., Tina challenged.

    Help her out. Look, I have no intentions of hurting anyone. As a matter of fact, I think Im just gonna head home., said Alice.

    She turned to leave and Tina grabbed her arm. Wait.

    What?, asked Alice, tears streaming down her face, the loneliness in her eyes begging to be alleviated.

    Tina sighed. This protectiveness of hers was both a blessing and a curse. Shed hated Alice for violating Bette, but now, Tinas protective nature wouldnt let this wounded young woman simply just walk away.

    I justI didnt mean to upset you. I just dont want anyone else to get hurt here., said Tina.

    I get it. I totally get it., said Alice with a sniffle.

    I think they could really use your help in there. They need all the help they can get., said Tina.

    You think so?, asked Alice, grateful for the appearance of this small olive branch.

    Yeah., said Tina.

    They stood in silence for a moment as Alice wiped at her wet cheeks.

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    7. so happy to see you post again. and wonderful to see tina protectivce of dana! gosh, can i just gush enough how much i love this story and how it’s paced and how you highlight their emotions and make it so real. and the way tina feels, so real MTS, so real. it’s wonderful :) i await the next chapter :)

    8. the sun rises and sets on this story, because it is all of my fanfic world! I adore the conversation between Alice and Tina, Tina’s all MamaBear kicking a$$ and taking names! that’s great. Love this, please keep going!

    9. This is a great story. I just get worried sometimes, since they have gotten together so young. I just don’t want them to break up. I’m just so happy for the progress they’ve made. It’s great how you’ve worked Alice in. I’m anxiously awaiting to see how you’ll weave Shane, into this group. It could be years down the road. But, I’ll still be reading. Thanks for sharing.

    10. I love this story! I’m so happy you’ve taken it to the 2nd dimension! I think we might have to start a collection to pay you so you can keept the updates coming!! :)

    13. What time zone are you? It is great that you are posting before 8am here in Europe. It makes my morning shine. Thanks and please keep them coming…

    14. I too like the idea of one great night… but of course that other side of my brain is kicking in with “that means that the next day or very soon B&T are going to get a call from AngryHomophobicKennards! or CrazyProtectiveMelvin. lol anyway, I’m sure the characters will do what they can to get through these situations. Keep up the great work and please post more soon!!!

    15. Woo…Tina sure laid it out on Alice, I guess she deserved every bit of Tina’s anger…but of course, Tina’s gentle side overcame her bitterness towards Alice and accepted her as a friend, which I think is pretty awesome of her=D ““Mmmhmmm.”, said Tina, her eyes still closed. She was watching something much more important. Behind her closed lids, she was watching their commitment ceremony, Bette’s first pregnancy, the birth of their first child, their home life together, evenings wrapped in each other’s arms, soft candle light, decades of loving memories, and growing old together.”…WHOA, Bette’s the pregnant one in the future, that’s a cool change=P…Either way, both LH&JB are two very FINE HOT MAMAs!! All who agree say HELL YEAH!!…Heartfelt chapter MTS…thanks so much for posting…it’s 816pm here in Hawaii so you just made my night=D Much mahalos!

    20. The way you write these chapters makes me feel like I know these people! I love the way you can turn this fanfic into something that could be so real. Thanks for yet another great chapter.

    24. Thank you for giving us that closure. You landed that ending just like a skilled pilot lands a Boeing 747.
      I’m encouraged that B&T have added another friend to their circle. They need and deserve support. And love.

    25. This chapter was beautifully written. Just one request MTS, if a shoe’s gonna drop, can ya wait till after the trip? Pretty please :)
      Looking forward to an update soon!

    28. Hey MTS thank you what really matter is Bette and Tina together again I love it Whoa! I’m so really excited to read this their really sweet and so cute each other I’m really happy to reading it’s time that you posted again like this you put the Smile on my Face Thank you MTS you are Amazing Writer.

    29. Perfect!! Hope one night melts into two, three….But, I know that once the reality of everyday life settles in, there will be more drama. I hope not before their week together. Thanks again for this beautiful story.

    33. Finally, some happiness here! Haha, but I have a feeling becasue of the way you ended it the drama’s gonna rear it’s ugly head soon. Hahah, either way I still love your story! Please post again soon!

    36. MTS, great chapter. I enjoyed it immensely. I am so happy to see the gang forming and being themselves. Hopefully, Cancun will be good to B&T and there won’t be another dip in this rollercoaster ride until they get to Mexico!

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