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    The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 28

    Story written on June 21, 2005 by MoreThanSatisfied.
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    Janice says hello. How will Bette react?
    (Sequel to the The Roommates)
    B&T Beginning Set on College Campus

     

    And I just pulled her out of the kitchen where she was slaving away on the dishes., said Karen.

     

    Janice smiled and extended her hand. Well, youre quite something Tina. And any friend of Bettes is a friend of mine.

     

    Tina gave a slight smile and shook the well-manicured hand. Thanks. Its nice to meet you., she replied, her mind on autopilot as she uttered this generic greeting.

     

    Likewise., said Janice, before looking around in confusion. And what happened to Bette?, she asked.

     

    She wasnt feeling too well. I think she went upstairs to lie down., said Deborah.

     

    Oh, well maybe I should go check on her., said Janice.

     

    You? Youre the last person she wants to see right now., thought Tina.

     

    You? You havent been that girls mother in three years! You want to check on her?, thought Karen.

     

    You? Bette isnt quite ready for you., thought Deborah.  

     

    Karen cleared her throat and spoke for the group. Well, Tina can do that. I think we uhwe need to talk.

     

    Oh, okay. So, tell me.hows Dad doing?, asked Janice.

     

    Deborah and Karen exchanged a look and Tina took this opportunity to remove herself from this situation. Im gonna go check on Bette., she mumbled, slipping up the steps.

     

    Sweetheart, lets go sit down and talk for a moment., said Deborah, motioning towards the living room.

     

    Janice swallowed the lump in her throat and replied Okay.

     

    The last thing Tina heard before she opened the door of the guest room was a loud, wrenching moan that seemed to tear itself from Janices lungs and float up the stairs.

     

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    When she entered the guest room, Bette was lying on her side on the left-side of the double-bed, her back to the door, her hands resting beneath her head, and her long legs bent at the knee. Tinas heart sank at this sight and she closed the door softly behind her and slid in bed beside her girlfriend, slipping her left arm around her lovers waist.

     

    Bette released a breath she hadnt realized she was holding and her rigid body relaxed slightly at her soulmates touch. Hey T, she whispered, her voice soft and wounded.

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    5. Well…just wrap me up, and tie me up with a bow, cause I’m all yours, MTS!!! There isn’t a word, or a phrase that you could have written to make this any better!!! Thank you!

    6. Megga- I really love this story, and I look for a posting every day! I’m so glad you’re back. It’s so nice to see Bette and Tina and their love together, in a different situation. Please post again soon.

    7. such a great chapter!!! I hope that everything goes well for Bette and that she won’t have to hide her and T’s relationship in front of Janice or her grandmother they should just be totally out and happy :o)

    9. That was wonderful. I’m actually crying right now , but don’t worry they are tears of joy. By the way the only other two chapters I’ve cried on were chapters 15 and 18 of this sequel. I love you work!!!

    17. MTS… you have been missed…welcome back.. love this story…and i am so glad tina is there for bette…. hopefully….and i know its a lot to ask for but maybe baeete and her mom could talk and bette learns why she left… from melvins track record i don’t trust him…. thanks for the long chapter and keep writing..

    22. SUPERB!! Tina…what a sweetheart!! Poor Bette=( Damn, doesn’t Janice realize what she’s done to her daughter? How much pain she’d put her daughter through by leaving? Wow, there must be a reason behind it all or she’s just really dense!! Loved it MTS! Congrats on the move by the way! Hope all is well in the new home! Take cares and please update soon!

    24. The first thing I do in the morning is to look for your new chapter. I missed reading your story for a few days, but I have to say it was worth the wait….although I would prefer not to wait so long. You’re really great writer.

    25. The first thing I do in the morning is to look for your new chapter. I missed reading your story for a few days, but I have to say it was worth the wait….although I would prefer not to wait so long. You’re really great writer.

    26. MTS,
      Have just caught up with reading all of this story. And ‘WOW!’ Sheer pleasure.
      The emotions are so honest and real. Your fantastic style and prose just envelops me. Even in this time of despair the love and adoration between Bette and Tina is astounding. This is due to your talent.
      Thank you for sharing it with me.
      It is a genuine masterpiece.
      I hope that Bette, with Tina’s assistance, finds some resolution with her mother. This is probably Bette’s biggest flaw; the inability to share her raw emotions with another. This is an abandonment issue but Tina will support her through hopefully to accept what and why her mother did this.
      Awaiting your next installment as each one puts a warm glow around by heart and a grin on my face.
      Your loyal fan.

    27. Fancey Bette’s mum walking in like that and acting like nothing ever happened, what’s with that?!?!?!?! Awww Bette and Tina are just so right for eachother they can both bring one another back up when they need it! Great story MTS PLEASE keep it up!!!!!!!!!!

    28. What a wonderful addition. Thanks for the telling and I’m glad for you that the move went safe and sound and you are getting settled. Wonderful chapter. Thanks

    30. I do miss the frequent postings but when you hit us with phrases like, “…but she’d seen the shattered remnants of her actions” I can well appreciate the time taken to carve out another chapter from that crafty mind of yours. I was never a big Tina fan but, after this chapter I am awed by her. Her ability to take Bette away from the pain, allbeit temporarily, was exactly what was required. The idea of them in the future as the distraction was excellent, as it gives Bette a feeling of belonging, acceptance and being cared for by another when those very things have been challenged by her mom’s sudden re-appearance. Post soon MTS!

    31. Great job…again. And, yes, I’ve printed out all of your chapters, so if you ever decide to get published let me know and you can have them! But I get the first autographed copy of the book! Keep up the good work.

    32. I just HAD to read this when I saw that you posted, MTS!! I love how they’re always able to comfort the other and to make each other feel better. Another wonderful chapter. :) Thank you! Now I’m gonna have to haul ass so I’m not late for class! LOL

    33. I’m so glad I didn’t go straight to sleep after work…my feet hurt…oww… Lovely story as usual, I agree with the other commenters! Yay, now I can go to sleep happy. :)

    35. Great it capture the emotions of all the people involed can’t wait to see what her mother is like and how they interact. Holding my next breath until the next post

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