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    The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 28

    Story written on June 21, 2005 by MoreThanSatisfied.
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    Janice says hello. How will Bette react?
    (Sequel to the The Roommates)
    B&T Beginning Set on College Campus

     

    Acceptance and contentment bubbled up in the pit of her soul and caressed her heart; the emotions sending a surge of warmth rushing through her. Youyou really think so?, she asked, moving a few stray locks behind her ear.

     

    I really do. I saw how much she needed you today. And as final as Dads death is.I think this ***** with Janice is going to be even harder for her., Karen replied, her voice hushed, her eyes darting out to make sure her words didnt travel far.

     

    Well, Ill be right by her side. Ill take care of her., said Tina.

     

    I know you will.

     

    Is she still out there?, asked Tina.

     

    Karen shook her head, I dont think so. I think she might have gone upstairs.

     

    Oh. Well, Ill go check on her., said Tina.

     

    Thatd be great. Ill introduce you to my sister before you head up., said Karen.

     

    Tina nodded, drying her hands on a dish towel. As she followed Karen out to the hallway, each step became heavier than the last. Shed never met Bettes mother and she didnt know her from Eve, but shed seen the shattered remnants of her actions. Shed watched her girlfriend become undone at merely the memory of this womans abandonment. Shed been there to see the pitted scars in her lovers soul and as the pretty face shed seen only in a picture frame came into focus, Tina found herself struggling to remain neutral and cordial.

     

    Yeah. My flight got in a little while ago and I rented a car. I didnt want to disturb you guys. I thought you might still be at the hospital. But, I saw the light on and figured I should ring the bell., Janice was explaining to Deborah, wiping at the remainder of her tears.

     

    Well Jan, heres someone Id like you to meet., Karen interrupted.

     

    Deborah smiled and clasped her hands together. Ah, yes. This is the newest edition to the family, she said, pulling Tina to her side and holding her at her waist.

     

    Tina is Bettes good friend from school. She and Tinker Bell were on Spring Break in Cancun and this little angel decided to come here and keep Bette company., said Deborah.

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    5. Well…just wrap me up, and tie me up with a bow, cause I’m all yours, MTS!!! There isn’t a word, or a phrase that you could have written to make this any better!!! Thank you!

    6. Megga- I really love this story, and I look for a posting every day! I’m so glad you’re back. It’s so nice to see Bette and Tina and their love together, in a different situation. Please post again soon.

    7. such a great chapter!!! I hope that everything goes well for Bette and that she won’t have to hide her and T’s relationship in front of Janice or her grandmother they should just be totally out and happy :o)

    9. That was wonderful. I’m actually crying right now , but don’t worry they are tears of joy. By the way the only other two chapters I’ve cried on were chapters 15 and 18 of this sequel. I love you work!!!

    17. MTS… you have been missed…welcome back.. love this story…and i am so glad tina is there for bette…. hopefully….and i know its a lot to ask for but maybe baeete and her mom could talk and bette learns why she left… from melvins track record i don’t trust him…. thanks for the long chapter and keep writing..

    22. SUPERB!! Tina…what a sweetheart!! Poor Bette=( Damn, doesn’t Janice realize what she’s done to her daughter? How much pain she’d put her daughter through by leaving? Wow, there must be a reason behind it all or she’s just really dense!! Loved it MTS! Congrats on the move by the way! Hope all is well in the new home! Take cares and please update soon!

    24. The first thing I do in the morning is to look for your new chapter. I missed reading your story for a few days, but I have to say it was worth the wait….although I would prefer not to wait so long. You’re really great writer.

    25. The first thing I do in the morning is to look for your new chapter. I missed reading your story for a few days, but I have to say it was worth the wait….although I would prefer not to wait so long. You’re really great writer.

    26. MTS,
      Have just caught up with reading all of this story. And ‘WOW!’ Sheer pleasure.
      The emotions are so honest and real. Your fantastic style and prose just envelops me. Even in this time of despair the love and adoration between Bette and Tina is astounding. This is due to your talent.
      Thank you for sharing it with me.
      It is a genuine masterpiece.
      I hope that Bette, with Tina’s assistance, finds some resolution with her mother. This is probably Bette’s biggest flaw; the inability to share her raw emotions with another. This is an abandonment issue but Tina will support her through hopefully to accept what and why her mother did this.
      Awaiting your next installment as each one puts a warm glow around by heart and a grin on my face.
      Your loyal fan.

    27. Fancey Bette’s mum walking in like that and acting like nothing ever happened, what’s with that?!?!?!?! Awww Bette and Tina are just so right for eachother they can both bring one another back up when they need it! Great story MTS PLEASE keep it up!!!!!!!!!!

    28. What a wonderful addition. Thanks for the telling and I’m glad for you that the move went safe and sound and you are getting settled. Wonderful chapter. Thanks

    30. I do miss the frequent postings but when you hit us with phrases like, “…but she’d seen the shattered remnants of her actions” I can well appreciate the time taken to carve out another chapter from that crafty mind of yours. I was never a big Tina fan but, after this chapter I am awed by her. Her ability to take Bette away from the pain, allbeit temporarily, was exactly what was required. The idea of them in the future as the distraction was excellent, as it gives Bette a feeling of belonging, acceptance and being cared for by another when those very things have been challenged by her mom’s sudden re-appearance. Post soon MTS!

    31. Great job…again. And, yes, I’ve printed out all of your chapters, so if you ever decide to get published let me know and you can have them! But I get the first autographed copy of the book! Keep up the good work.

    32. I just HAD to read this when I saw that you posted, MTS!! I love how they’re always able to comfort the other and to make each other feel better. Another wonderful chapter. :) Thank you! Now I’m gonna have to haul ass so I’m not late for class! LOL

    33. I’m so glad I didn’t go straight to sleep after work…my feet hurt…oww… Lovely story as usual, I agree with the other commenters! Yay, now I can go to sleep happy. :)

    35. Great it capture the emotions of all the people involed can’t wait to see what her mother is like and how they interact. Holding my next breath until the next post

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