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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 39
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Bette exhaled deeply in her restless slumber, her sleep-deprived body lying nearly motionless on top of Tina’s bed, the dorm room’s shadows growing taller as afternoon passed into evening. Suddenly, there was a loud pounding on the door and the dark-haired beauty sat up with a start, her sleepy eyes darting around the room as she tried to get her bearings. The pounding on the door came once more and Bette remembered where she was. She ran her hand through her curly locks and tried to shake the remaining cobwebs from her mind as she pushed off the bed and walked to the door in her sock-clad feet.
Bette cleared her throat and opened the door. When she saw the tall man with the warm, chestnut brown eyes, the young woman gasped sharply, her mouth hanging open in surprise.
“Hey there, Tinkerbell. You mind if I come in?”, he asked.
Bette couldn’t yet find her voice and she merely nodded and stepped aside to allow the guest entry.
Her dark eyes followed the dark-fabric of his suit as he glided across the room and sat down on her bed, smiling as he did so. She was still holding onto the door *****, her mouth still agape when he said, “Aren’t you going to sit down and join me?”
Bette closed the door and leaned back against it, the shock and surprise still shining in her eyes.
Her early evening visitor held up his hand and said, “I know you’re a little taken aback. But don’t be afraid of me. I only came because I wanted to talk to you about some things. We never got to have this conversation and I want to get this off my chest.”
Bette took a deep breath, her eyes drawn to his red silk tie as she slowly stepped away from the door and took a seat at the end of Tina’s bed.
“Grandpa? What are you doing here?”, she asked. Her dark brown pools roaming over the outfit he’d been buried in. She couldn’t help but notice how well he looked. How the color had returned to his cheeks, how his eyes were vibrant and full of life, how his gentle scent floated up and over to her, how at ease he seemed.
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Beautiful chapter. That was so sweet. Glad Tina got over her worries. Love this.
Damn this is so emotion and sweet and we will see alot of drama coming next for the couple. Ok post soon please, thanks!
It looks lile Ms Tina is out of the closet. Nice to see that she give Bette some affection and love in public. Tina will be there in Bettes time of need Thanks
“…the curious stares, hushed whispers, and pointed fingers that had been directed toward their affections… “
Ah, those people could bite me!! That was the sweetest thing I’ve ever read! Thanks MTS for the heart felt chapter!
MTS,
That was elegant and beautiful; your story eludes tenderness, love and affection.
The way that Tina put Bette’s need before her own hang-ups demonstrates the true power of love.
Love can move mountains when needed or just simply put a smile on your face and in your heart.
The genuine warmth that you have created in the this tale thaws all of the cold and heartlessness of the world and puts a rosy glow on my face.
I am sure that I wander around looking like a happy fool of hours after completing a chapter like this.
It is down to your wondrous talent that these words, sentences and paragraphs have such a deep and meanful effect on all of your readers.
Thank you for sharing it with me.
Please post soon as this week’s hit seems so long ago.
Your Loyal Fan.
Hey MTS! Sorry for showing up late to the party but I was away this week. Hehe I’m glad Tina was able to push her concerns aside in order to soothe Bette. Seems like trouble lies ahead for our girls, but as they said, it’ll always be the two of them. Thank you!
Nice chapter.Its good to see Tina not hiding her affection in front of her school mates.
Very nicely done lots of emotion please post soon!!!
Whew, I needed that chapter and it brought tears to my eyes. I believe that this may be the quiet before the storm. It is never that easy for PDA’s. I loved this chapter as well, thank you MTS!
I really do love this story so much. Its amazing the way you can draw out emotions from me when I read it. I can sense the impending drama from your last sentence and I can’t wait. Please post more and soon!
what a lovely treat to be treated to this fine sturday night. just want i needed before bed. that was delightful. your writing isso powerful. to be there are twits in the world who are so judgemental. greatful for the love they share will help get over this, right?
The strength one gets from love, is powerful. Hope they continue to hold onto that and that the strength from that love will continue to grow as well. It sounds like their bond is going to be tested, in the not too distant future.
This is my favorite story. You are my favorite author. I’m even rereading all the chapters of the roommates from the beginning and leaving comments ( because I didn’t before). It’s becuase of you that I now actually like to read. Thank you MTS.
Oh man…here are two ways to know that I’m obsessed with your story:
It’s 5:20 in the morning right now, and I’m dead tired, but I’m still reading your story!! What’s wrong with me?
The other day I was driving home and the person in front of me had a license plate that read “MTS” something. Then I was like “Hey…” then I started thinking about your story, then I was like “Aww…hee hee.”
So as you know, it’s a great chapter! I’m scared for what lies ahead of them though.
thank you MTS! :)
Great story MTS so emotional and inspiring. great writing post soon.
Dun,Dun,Dun, I think the shit is about to hit the fan. That is what grandpa was trying to warn Bette about. I will bet a million, no make that a billion dollars that someones parents are about to find out about their little girls sexuality in the next few chapters.
aawww, that was sweet. it reminded me of the season in the first part with sydney, bette and t. T is the only one who can soothe B. I love your story. pls post soon.
wow I sooo love your story MTS! Hard time for Bette ahead?? well i just hope Tina will be at her side when that time comes..they are so cute toguether. Post soon!.
It great to have you back! I thought you’d run away!
Loved the chapter, as always. Looking forward to the next one.
Post it soon. I’m impatient LOL.
i felt that they just jumped out of my computer screen. (smiling)
Very sweet update, but i see trouble coming Tinas’ way.. is it time for her to pay the price of coming out??
I’m very impressed by Tina’s actions. She must feel much more comfortable with showing public affection. Kiitos!
You have our hearts on a string. Lovely update.
Another beautiful chapter. Glad Tina is coming around with the public affection. Love the bond you have created between these two. They are amazing together.