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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 49
If you looked harder, you could see that the laughter went dead in Tina’s amber orbs. The humor barely scratched her surface and it most definitely did not stir her young soul. If you got close up and squinted tightly, you might see the faint worry lines in Dana’s forehead and the dark circles under her eyes. Under close observation, you’d notice that it didn’t take long for their laughter to fade and the tension to set in to the posture of these two friends. You’d notice that once the jovialness floated away, a dark cloud seemed to move through Tina and settle on her spirit.
The friends sighed in union and Dana reached for her drink.
“Dana?”, asked Tina.
“Hmmm?”
“You think Bette’s okay?”
Dana smiled softly at her friend before returning her gaze to the crowd around them. “Bette is super strong. I’m sure she’s fine. She’s a fighter.”
“Yeah, that’s true. She’s definitely a fighter. I don’t know….I just have this feeling that something’s wrong. I’m kinda worried about her.”
“Don’t worry. This is Bette Porter we’re talking about.”
Tina shrugged off her fears and smiled. “I’m sure you’re right.”
A feeling of gratitude rolled through the young blonde. She’d accompanied Dana to the mall at the tennis player’s insistence. Her original plan was to hang around the dorm room and sulk about her dismissal from the tutoring program until Bette returned from Melvin’s impromptu dinner invitation. Though they hadn’t discussed it, Tina knew that Dana was looking out for her; preventing her from wallowing in the depression of her current circumstances. She was grateful for the distraction and despite the worries about Bette and her dinner date with Damon & Melvin, she was actually enjoying herself.
“Tina?” asked Dana.
Both women were focused on the crowd, absently watching other shoppers come and go as they nibbled at their pizza slices.
“Yeah?”, Tina replied.
“Do you think you and Bette will stay together?”, asked Dana.
Tina stared curiously at her friend until their eyes met. “What do you mean?”
“I mean, do you see yourself living your life with her. Are you guys gonna get married and have kids and all that?”.
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natasha maccrimmon says
thanks for posting, i have been looking forawrd to this day for a long time
downlow95 says
Well, well, well, it’s really great to see you posting!
lovelyangel says
OMG! I was so excited when I saw you had posted. Great update. Please don’t make us wait so long next time. LOL. Can’t wait for more.
bettefortina says
Well,well, well, loomwho is finally back in the world of fan fic. You’ve been missed morethansatisfied! I’m so happy that you’ve picked up this great story once again. Unfortunately for Bette she has Melvin’s stubborn streak and i don’t think either of them are at a point where they are going to change the others mind. I know Bette was getting annoyed at the way her father was treating Damon but she really needed to think this one through better. i mean she is completely dependent (financially anyway) on Melvin so ticking him off in this manner is going to have some serious repercussions for Ms. Porter. i just hope she doesn’t have to leave school, Tina and all her friends. Thansk for the great chapter.
phantomframe says
Yay! You’re back! What a great chapter!
missyang says
hmmm… 6 months. You’re almost as lazy as I am. =P I think Bette is doing the right thing. If she wants to do it after everyone’s cooled down, maybe Melvin would choose to ignore it and pretend nothing happened. Bette’s so alike him. Their confrontation must be very violent, but may reach an amazing end. I think Melvin really likes Bette could be as tough as him somehow, hoho. That’s my theory. Fingers crossed for our young girls.
special_ed1845 says
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!You posted and your’e working on a novel. I luv u. I’m so excited. K now that I’ve got that out of my system I can go read .
special_ed1845 says
Great chapter. Why do I feel like something bad is getting ready to happen? Keep Bette safe.
Barrie says
MTS – I am so happy that you’re back. The site’s been lacking high quality writers such as yourself. Please, no more 6-month breaks in the near future! Loved the chapter!
pattifloatn says
I had read your story before but was just in the reading mode and not commenting. This is a heart breaking story that happens too many times every day. I hope that Bette will begin to understand that we can not always make others believe that it is okay to love another woman. Both Bette and Tina have a lot of work ahead of them but they can overcome together. I hope that you get to post soon.
munkies_2005 says
OMG FINALLY, I thought u’d forgotton about us! :D SOOO glad u’ve posted, finally :p heres hoping you can find the time to make another post, sooner than this one, :D heehee, glad to hear ur workin on ur novel :D hope we all get to proof read for u :p :D hehe glad uve found the time to post for us, thank you :)
Ira says
Can’t believe you’re back MTS! YAY! Great post and your story is still one off my favourites, can’t wait for your next chapter.
phyl says
It’s so good to have you back. You’ve been missed!
nzgrl says
Welcome back =)
skyblue says
Yay! You are back! *doing little happy dance* LOL… Great update, please don’t leave us hanging for so long next time. More please :)
km_new says
Welcome Back! I am going to go read now.
lostinside says
Nice to see you back :D At the end they will have a happy ending right?? lol Still loving your story.
techgal says
Vis-Ã -vis Melvin’s anger, I was reminded of an old folks’ saying: “I brought you into this world, and I can take you out!”…I’m worried about Bette! Thanks!
Amos says
you’re back (and bring the bomb with)….i’ve been waited so long…thank you for the story..please don’t make me wait this time….
albeez says
havent been able to comment for almost as long as you havent posted. but i get on tonight and here you are. OMG is right. did the coming out thing last year to my family and for some its not been pretty. but ya gotta do what ya gotta do. this was great. keep it coming. thanks
Lamentamini says
Well look what the wind blew in! I had to go back and read my previous comment because I had no clue what you were commenting on to me. lol And on techgal’s comment, I remember Bill Cosby saying that. xD
smiley says
Well Well, look who decided to grace us with her presence! It’s so good to see you back!!! Loving the drama!
DoubleL says
Yes, please keep posting. Can’t wait…
ut says
Damn drama on the way and this is getting bad!!!!!!!!!!!!
ChakaSB says
I’m really glad you came back to finish the story, it’s been a great series.
BetteAndTinaForever says
oh i’ve been waiting for this story to continue, thanks for finding time to post…can’t wait to see how it will turn out…melvin such an ass
fergz1 says
great to see you post. thanks for the chapter
trecelovinit says
FINALLY!!!! Welcome back, girl! I’ve missed you and your story. I hope things work out for Bette and she gets to stay in school and with Tina.
Clarity says
Amen! Now I can smile as I embark on another hellish day of painting my sister’s new house. Please post soon.
Tatiana says
it’s great you’re back :-) I have missed your story.
emerson says
Hey so glad to see you post MTS great job on this chapter as always!!!
obzidian says
*Doing happy dance* So glad to see that you’ve posted! Hope Kit will make Bette see that her hard headness will not work this time. I’m worried about B&T! Please post again soon.
tylo says
your back whooooooooooooooooo 5 pages longer lol bette is melvin’s daughter both have to have the last word…. OMG yuu have let us know when the book is done