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The Roommates – Pride & Prejudice
Bette smiled. “Once again, you travel in style.”
“He’s my personal boy-toy,” said Janice.
And eliciting the desired response of her daughter’s bugged eyes, she smiled softly and said, “Richard’s my personal chauffer. He’s great.”
Janice inhaled the heady scent of her Californian Pinot Noir before she took a sip and exhaled deeply. “That’s heavenly.”
Bette smiled and sipped her Cranberry juice. “My red is also heavenly.”
The mother and daughter chuckled and moments later their bags were in the trunk and Richard slipped into the driver’s seat.
It was after midnight, but both women remained bright eyed, sipping their reds and watching the lights and skyline of the city that never sleeps. Eventually they came to a stop at an apartment building on the Upper West Side of Manhattan.
Bette looked up at the building and over to the shiny doorman that had already come out to hold the door for them. How much money does she have?, Bette wondered.
The mother and daughter walked into the building, greeted by the friendly doorman. They walked across a brilliantly shining, russet colored tile floor, through the ornately decorated lobby and into a shining silver elevator. Bette’s dark eyes studied the delicate numbered lights at the top of the carriage that called out the passing floors. The elevator rested at the 22nd floor and dinged before Bette followed her mother down the hall to apartment 2288.
Inside the apartment, the young woman was greeted with the fresh scent of “cleaning product” lemon and a hint of sweet strawberries. A half-dozen freshly cut white roses sat in a crystal vase on a table in the front hall.
“Come on in. Let me show you your room,” said Janice.
The older woman chewed her lip, grateful that the Pinot Noir had helped calm her nerves.
Would Bette like the room? Would she feel comfortable?
They slipped down the hall to the young woman’s summer domicile. A bright smile lit up the young woman’s tired face. Her dark brown eyes traced a line from the shining wooden floors to the contemporary prints that adorned the walls. A full-sized bed with about a million pillows sat with its headboard against the western wall, its firm body draped in a dark-red, patterned bedset.
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What a wonderful suprise!!! SO GLAD to see this post. My Abolute Favorite fan fic. Wonderful as always!!! Looking forward to the post ONCE A WEEK!!!! U have been missed!!!
I was so excited to see your post. I miss your stories.
Welcome back MTS!! I was so glad to see your post! thanks for continuing the story. pps
OMG, i’m soooo happy to see you’re back!!! i loved this chapter!! uh-oh, trouble at the Kennard casa? Please let B&T be ok!! post soon, plz!
Oh, so good to see your posting. Welcome back!
Hello MTS, I have just finished consuming your latest adorable adventure. I feel like an addict ready for my next fix. Your words haunt me as the bonds between mother and child are examined. Janice is only now starting to appreciate the joy that her daugther can bring to her life. While Tracy knows that something is different about her child. Tina isn’t helping matters with her secrecy and odd behavior. The mirroring of these events is awesome. As always, MTS, you provoke and makes us all think. Brilliant. Just loving it all. many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Hello Miss MTS… so glad to see you back on the road with this story… Looking forward to the rollercoaster you’ll be creating with this FF.
It’s fantastic. Really great. I hope they arent actually apart for 3 months. That would be terrible. pps.
Tina’s mom is so close to guessing what is going on with Tina. It is nice to see that Bette is getting the royal treatment. Before Bette was all stressed but now she is more relaxed and now it is Tina’s turn to stress out.
well for people who really dont even know that lezzies exist, there minds cant even go there. its funny when they figure it out tho. thx, glad your back.
I’m so glad to see you post! You have no idea how much I love the two other stories that preceded this one. Thanks for taking the time to continue with this series. ;D
U have been MISSED!!!!
I smell trouble in the form of Tracy Kennard. How cute is “Tiny Tina and Baby Bette” huh. I’m so glad you’re giving this a 3rd dimension. Lookin forward for more!
I was only thinking yesterday how much I missed this story, was even going to PM but then thought ‘no pressure’ and here u r. That was ssssoooooooo intense & I hate them being apart as much as they do. I wanna say PPS but no pressure. Thx.
I’m happy you see you back. I loved the others two stories of Roommate. Which way you may go with B&T. I hope without much drama and a happy end for this two as a happy married couple.
Hey MTS, It is so wonderful and a real treat to have you back on the site and posting more of this magnificent melodrama. I just adore everything you have wriiten. Can’t wait to immerse myself in your delicious drama. I’ll be back when I’ve read this new chapter. SO excited that I can hardly make sense of the words. Yippee!!! Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Such a amazing suprise to see you posted again! Great chapter. I think it’s safe to say that a lot of us have been in this situation with their mother much like Tina is right now. I can only wish her the best. Please post again soon.
yeah your back!! been waiting for this story….will tina tell her mom? i think her mom will figure it out soon enough… mom always seem to know these things..:)
I am glad you brought us the next phase of the story. I am liking that Bette and Janice have this time to bond and get to know one another. Tracy is being a rude unsupportive bitch to Tina and then wonders why Tina won’t talk to her. Maybe if she treated her with a little respect Tina wouldn’t feel so terrified of being herself. Fantastic writing!
Hey, u r back wt another “season”. This is great!! Thanks for coming back n pls keep posting as best u can.
Glad to see this story back! Thanks!
wow, you’re back!!!!! i’m so excited about this next part…i hope tina’s parents will understand when the truth will come out
welcome back ! its nice to read your story again i missed this one thanks for posting and taking the time to write again
That was great and love it!