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The Roommates – Pride & Prejudice
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Tracy tossed her husband a look dripping with incredulity. “Yeah, right.”
“I don’t know, Trace. Let’s give her a little time to relax.”
“I used to be so close to her. So close. And now I feel like she’s a stranger. This tight-lipped, secretive, stranger. Is this how it’s going to be from now on? I thought that’s what the early teen years were about. Not now.”
Steven looked over at his wife. “Maybe I’ll try to talk to her.”
His words didn’t seem to register with Tracy. “You know, she comes home for Thanksgiving thinking she’s pregnant. She split her time on Christmas break between here and Bette’s house. She took her spring break with Bette. We get her for a few hours and she acts like she’s so damned depressed. What’s that about?”
Steven sighed. It was going to be a long night.
A sleepy Bette Porter walked side-by-side with her blonde-haired mother. They were a sight to see. Long legs, matching strides, and a subtle aura of class that couldn’t be bought or learned. As the weary duo descended the escalator to the baggage claim, a crisply suited young man stood at the bottom of the moving staircase, smiling warmly at Janice Porter. He was clean shaven with icy blue eyes, tanned olive skin, and neatly trimmed brown hair.
As they neared he flashed a winning smile and said, “Ms. Porter, good evening to you.”
Janice gave a small smile. “Good evening, Richard. Meet my daughter, Bette.”
Bette shook his extended hand. “Nice to meet you,” she said.
“She’s as beautiful as her charming mother,” he replied.
“You really do lay it on thick,” Janice said. “But I like it thick, so don’t go changing on me.”
Richard smiled. “Never fear. Let me escort you ladies to the car and I’ll be back to grab your bags.”
The mother and daughter followed him to a waiting black limousine. Richard opened the door for them and they slid into the soft, black, leather interior.
“I’ll be right back, Ms. Porter. Your glass of wine is waiting for you. I’ve poured chilled cranberry juice for your daughter,” said the young man before departing.
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What a wonderful suprise!!! SO GLAD to see this post. My Abolute Favorite fan fic. Wonderful as always!!! Looking forward to the post ONCE A WEEK!!!! U have been missed!!!
I was so excited to see your post. I miss your stories.
Welcome back MTS!! I was so glad to see your post! thanks for continuing the story. pps
OMG, i’m soooo happy to see you’re back!!! i loved this chapter!! uh-oh, trouble at the Kennard casa? Please let B&T be ok!! post soon, plz!
Oh, so good to see your posting. Welcome back!
Hello MTS, I have just finished consuming your latest adorable adventure. I feel like an addict ready for my next fix. Your words haunt me as the bonds between mother and child are examined. Janice is only now starting to appreciate the joy that her daugther can bring to her life. While Tracy knows that something is different about her child. Tina isn’t helping matters with her secrecy and odd behavior. The mirroring of these events is awesome. As always, MTS, you provoke and makes us all think. Brilliant. Just loving it all. many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Hello Miss MTS… so glad to see you back on the road with this story… Looking forward to the rollercoaster you’ll be creating with this FF.
It’s fantastic. Really great. I hope they arent actually apart for 3 months. That would be terrible. pps.
Tina’s mom is so close to guessing what is going on with Tina. It is nice to see that Bette is getting the royal treatment. Before Bette was all stressed but now she is more relaxed and now it is Tina’s turn to stress out.
well for people who really dont even know that lezzies exist, there minds cant even go there. its funny when they figure it out tho. thx, glad your back.
I’m so glad to see you post! You have no idea how much I love the two other stories that preceded this one. Thanks for taking the time to continue with this series. ;D
U have been MISSED!!!!
I smell trouble in the form of Tracy Kennard. How cute is “Tiny Tina and Baby Bette” huh. I’m so glad you’re giving this a 3rd dimension. Lookin forward for more!
I was only thinking yesterday how much I missed this story, was even going to PM but then thought ‘no pressure’ and here u r. That was ssssoooooooo intense & I hate them being apart as much as they do. I wanna say PPS but no pressure. Thx.
I’m happy you see you back. I loved the others two stories of Roommate. Which way you may go with B&T. I hope without much drama and a happy end for this two as a happy married couple.
Hey MTS, It is so wonderful and a real treat to have you back on the site and posting more of this magnificent melodrama. I just adore everything you have wriiten. Can’t wait to immerse myself in your delicious drama. I’ll be back when I’ve read this new chapter. SO excited that I can hardly make sense of the words. Yippee!!! Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Such a amazing suprise to see you posted again! Great chapter. I think it’s safe to say that a lot of us have been in this situation with their mother much like Tina is right now. I can only wish her the best. Please post again soon.
yeah your back!! been waiting for this story….will tina tell her mom? i think her mom will figure it out soon enough… mom always seem to know these things..:)
I am glad you brought us the next phase of the story. I am liking that Bette and Janice have this time to bond and get to know one another. Tracy is being a rude unsupportive bitch to Tina and then wonders why Tina won’t talk to her. Maybe if she treated her with a little respect Tina wouldn’t feel so terrified of being herself. Fantastic writing!
Hey, u r back wt another “season”. This is great!! Thanks for coming back n pls keep posting as best u can.
Glad to see this story back! Thanks!
wow, you’re back!!!!! i’m so excited about this next part…i hope tina’s parents will understand when the truth will come out
welcome back ! its nice to read your story again i missed this one thanks for posting and taking the time to write again
That was great and love it!