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The Roommates – Pride & Prejudice
They’d invited Tina to their brunch, but she knew her family would be fast approaching and at least with some distance from Bette, the sad blonde would be able to transform her sorrowful self into a somewhat presentable state before they arrived. She’d helped the Bette Porter Caravan load Bette’s things and she’d stood on the curb and watched their SUV, long after the vehicle had disappeared from sight.
That was the last image of Tina in Bette’s mind.
And it was that image she tried to shake from her thoughts as she slumped down in her seat next to Janice Porter. It was just the two of them now. Karen and Grandma Deborah had dropped the mother and daughter off at LAX in preparation for their flight to New York. They’d had a long day of sightseeing and touring and Bette was going on no sleep. She was beyond exhausted, but her fatigue could not dull the discomfort she now felt being alone in her mother’s presence.
This was a new experience for her and there was no buffer to ease the awkwardness between them. At her grandfather’s funeral and all day long there had been someone else to talk to. Someone else to laugh with. And now, there was just the two of them. They’d checked their bags and made it all the way to their gate. With nearly an hour before they were to board, mother and daughter had a nice bit of uncomfortable time to spend together.
Janice cleared her throat and asked, “Are you – – are you hungry?”
Bette gave a weak smile and replied, “Not really. You?”
Janice shook her head. “No. Me either. Can’t wait for this flight to board so we can just pass out.”
“I second that. I’m exhausted.”
The forty-eight year old mother of one looked at her only child and sighed. “I’m so proud of you, you know?”
Bette grinned shyly. “I know.”
“You’re such a lovely young woman. And I was worried sick about leaving you with your father. It kept me up at night. And to know that you’re so headstrong and together at your age, God it’s just such a blessing.”
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ninety9percentsure says
What a wonderful suprise!!! SO GLAD to see this post. My Abolute Favorite fan fic. Wonderful as always!!! Looking forward to the post ONCE A WEEK!!!! U have been missed!!!
mbe says
I was so excited to see your post. I miss your stories.
ayesha23 says
Welcome back MTS!! I was so glad to see your post! thanks for continuing the story. pps
Lgirl87 says
OMG, i’m soooo happy to see you’re back!!! i loved this chapter!! uh-oh, trouble at the Kennard casa? Please let B&T be ok!! post soon, plz!
Janbear says
Oh, so good to see your posting. Welcome back!
robbeedee says
Hello MTS, I have just finished consuming your latest adorable adventure. I feel like an addict ready for my next fix. Your words haunt me as the bonds between mother and child are examined. Janice is only now starting to appreciate the joy that her daugther can bring to her life. While Tracy knows that something is different about her child. Tina isn’t helping matters with her secrecy and odd behavior. The mirroring of these events is awesome. As always, MTS, you provoke and makes us all think. Brilliant. Just loving it all. many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Skyblades says
Hello Miss MTS… so glad to see you back on the road with this story… Looking forward to the rollercoaster you’ll be creating with this FF.
amyfdx says
It’s fantastic. Really great. I hope they arent actually apart for 3 months. That would be terrible. pps.
pattifloatn says
Tina’s mom is so close to guessing what is going on with Tina. It is nice to see that Bette is getting the royal treatment. Before Bette was all stressed but now she is more relaxed and now it is Tina’s turn to stress out.
albeez says
well for people who really dont even know that lezzies exist, there minds cant even go there. its funny when they figure it out tho. thx, glad your back.
2bU says
I’m so glad to see you post! You have no idea how much I love the two other stories that preceded this one. Thanks for taking the time to continue with this series. ;D
trecelovinit says
U have been MISSED!!!!
m_s_gypsy says
I smell trouble in the form of Tracy Kennard. How cute is “Tiny Tina and Baby Bette” huh. I’m so glad you’re giving this a 3rd dimension. Lookin forward for more!
Rau says
I was only thinking yesterday how much I missed this story, was even going to PM but then thought ‘no pressure’ and here u r. That was ssssoooooooo intense & I hate them being apart as much as they do. I wanna say PPS but no pressure. Thx.
Eddy says
I’m happy you see you back. I loved the others two stories of Roommate. Which way you may go with B&T. I hope without much drama and a happy end for this two as a happy married couple.
robbeedee says
Hey MTS, It is so wonderful and a real treat to have you back on the site and posting more of this magnificent melodrama. I just adore everything you have wriiten. Can’t wait to immerse myself in your delicious drama. I’ll be back when I’ve read this new chapter. SO excited that I can hardly make sense of the words. Yippee!!! Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
SydneyWade says
Such a amazing suprise to see you posted again! Great chapter. I think it’s safe to say that a lot of us have been in this situation with their mother much like Tina is right now. I can only wish her the best. Please post again soon.
beachlife says
yeah your back!! been waiting for this story….will tina tell her mom? i think her mom will figure it out soon enough… mom always seem to know these things..:)
hawkchic says
I am glad you brought us the next phase of the story. I am liking that Bette and Janice have this time to bond and get to know one another. Tracy is being a rude unsupportive bitch to Tina and then wonders why Tina won’t talk to her. Maybe if she treated her with a little respect Tina wouldn’t feel so terrified of being herself. Fantastic writing!
blase says
Hey, u r back wt another “season”. This is great!! Thanks for coming back n pls keep posting as best u can.
ld18 says
Glad to see this story back! Thanks!
BetteAndTinaForever says
wow, you’re back!!!!! i’m so excited about this next part…i hope tina’s parents will understand when the truth will come out
desiredhott says
welcome back ! its nice to read your story again i missed this one thanks for posting and taking the time to write again
ut says
That was great and love it!