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The Roommates – Pride & Prejudice
A soft pink hue settled in the young woman’s cheeks and she looked away.
“I know I can’t make up for the last few years in 3 months. But I am so excited about you coming to New York. This is like a dream for me. Before Dad passed away, the idea that we would be living together would never have crossed my mind. And now, I get to have you for the whole summer.”
Janice saw the subtle smile that graced her daughter’s lips. The warmth swimming around those dark brown eyes. And she knew that even though Bette didn’t speak praises about their summer cohabitation, she knew that the young woman she’d given birth to was happy to finally be in her mother’s presence.
The blonde placed a warm hand on her daughter’s arm. “I love you, Bette.”
Bette shyly met her mother’s gaze and whispered, “Love you, too.”
Janice studied her daughter a little more and she said softly, “You miss her already, don’t you?”
Bette’s sore spirit was both comforted and embarrassed at the transparency of her emotions. She didn’t want her longing to be so obvious, but she was also grateful that her mother understood Tina’s importance. Grateful that someone understood Tina’s importance. Bette’s dark brown eyes looked away and her vision grew blurry behind a wall of unshed tears.
She nodded in response to her mother’s question.
Janice’s hand found itself making gentle circles against her daughter’s back. “It’s okay to miss someone you love, Bette. I’m sure she already misses you, too.”
Bette nodded.
“You know, I used to feel that way about your father.”
Bette gave her mother a curious look. “Really? About Daddy?”
Janice smiled and nodded. “Yeah. I did. He used to be so caring. I used to feel like the center of his world. When he gives you all of his attention, you feel so special. So privileged.”
“Yeah? Can’t really see that about Daddy.”
The blonde shrugged her shoulders. “Well, a lot has changed since then. Somewhere along the way, his insatiable drive took over. He always needed more than he had. Always lusted for things. People. Attention. Status. Power. When he’d conquered me, he moved on to the next conquest. I felt used and abused and discarded. But believe me, there was a time when I walked in your shoes. When all I could think about was the phone ringing and my life revolved around him calling me.”
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ninety9percentsure says
What a wonderful suprise!!! SO GLAD to see this post. My Abolute Favorite fan fic. Wonderful as always!!! Looking forward to the post ONCE A WEEK!!!! U have been missed!!!
mbe says
I was so excited to see your post. I miss your stories.
ayesha23 says
Welcome back MTS!! I was so glad to see your post! thanks for continuing the story. pps
Lgirl87 says
OMG, i’m soooo happy to see you’re back!!! i loved this chapter!! uh-oh, trouble at the Kennard casa? Please let B&T be ok!! post soon, plz!
Janbear says
Oh, so good to see your posting. Welcome back!
robbeedee says
Hello MTS, I have just finished consuming your latest adorable adventure. I feel like an addict ready for my next fix. Your words haunt me as the bonds between mother and child are examined. Janice is only now starting to appreciate the joy that her daugther can bring to her life. While Tracy knows that something is different about her child. Tina isn’t helping matters with her secrecy and odd behavior. The mirroring of these events is awesome. As always, MTS, you provoke and makes us all think. Brilliant. Just loving it all. many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Skyblades says
Hello Miss MTS… so glad to see you back on the road with this story… Looking forward to the rollercoaster you’ll be creating with this FF.
amyfdx says
It’s fantastic. Really great. I hope they arent actually apart for 3 months. That would be terrible. pps.
pattifloatn says
Tina’s mom is so close to guessing what is going on with Tina. It is nice to see that Bette is getting the royal treatment. Before Bette was all stressed but now she is more relaxed and now it is Tina’s turn to stress out.
albeez says
well for people who really dont even know that lezzies exist, there minds cant even go there. its funny when they figure it out tho. thx, glad your back.
2bU says
I’m so glad to see you post! You have no idea how much I love the two other stories that preceded this one. Thanks for taking the time to continue with this series. ;D
trecelovinit says
U have been MISSED!!!!
m_s_gypsy says
I smell trouble in the form of Tracy Kennard. How cute is “Tiny Tina and Baby Bette” huh. I’m so glad you’re giving this a 3rd dimension. Lookin forward for more!
Rau says
I was only thinking yesterday how much I missed this story, was even going to PM but then thought ‘no pressure’ and here u r. That was ssssoooooooo intense & I hate them being apart as much as they do. I wanna say PPS but no pressure. Thx.
Eddy says
I’m happy you see you back. I loved the others two stories of Roommate. Which way you may go with B&T. I hope without much drama and a happy end for this two as a happy married couple.
robbeedee says
Hey MTS, It is so wonderful and a real treat to have you back on the site and posting more of this magnificent melodrama. I just adore everything you have wriiten. Can’t wait to immerse myself in your delicious drama. I’ll be back when I’ve read this new chapter. SO excited that I can hardly make sense of the words. Yippee!!! Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
SydneyWade says
Such a amazing suprise to see you posted again! Great chapter. I think it’s safe to say that a lot of us have been in this situation with their mother much like Tina is right now. I can only wish her the best. Please post again soon.
beachlife says
yeah your back!! been waiting for this story….will tina tell her mom? i think her mom will figure it out soon enough… mom always seem to know these things..:)
hawkchic says
I am glad you brought us the next phase of the story. I am liking that Bette and Janice have this time to bond and get to know one another. Tracy is being a rude unsupportive bitch to Tina and then wonders why Tina won’t talk to her. Maybe if she treated her with a little respect Tina wouldn’t feel so terrified of being herself. Fantastic writing!
blase says
Hey, u r back wt another “season”. This is great!! Thanks for coming back n pls keep posting as best u can.
ld18 says
Glad to see this story back! Thanks!
BetteAndTinaForever says
wow, you’re back!!!!! i’m so excited about this next part…i hope tina’s parents will understand when the truth will come out
desiredhott says
welcome back ! its nice to read your story again i missed this one thanks for posting and taking the time to write again
ut says
That was great and love it!