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The Roommates – Pride & Prejudice
Janice leaned in a little, her eyes open and inviting.
“Those little bastards are so spoiled. I don’t really want to see them. They’re very selfish. Very rude. I love having grandchildren, but I really don’t want to be around them.”
“Really?”
“Oh yes. You know…. I blame my children. They don’t take the time to spend time with them. To nurture them. Grow with them. Teach them. They give them candy and sit them up in front of the television with video games. That’s not the way they were raised. But it’s easier to hop them up on sugar and stick them in front of the TV than to really spend time with them. It’s important to do bond with the children.
“My husband and I didn’t have a lot of money. He worked long hours and we both scrimped and saved to make sure our children had what they needed. But we never neglected them, you know?”
Janice nodded, the heavy weight of the word “neglect” bearing down on her. She had neglected Bette and in spite of her absence, the young woman to her right had become a wonderful young adult.
The stranger continued on. “Truth be told I’ve been watching you with your daughter. She’s so pleasant and polite. Very mannerable and respectful. It’s nice to see.”
Janice smiled and said, “Thank you.”
“I’m Abigail by the way,” said the stranger.
“Nice to meet you Abigail. I’m Janice. And this is Bette.”
Their conversation continued on and long after Abigail drifted off to sleep, Janice’s thoughts kept looping around what she would do to make up for her absence in her daughter’s life.
In San Francisco, the road-weary Kennards had finally made it home. The three of them shuffled into the house and with a limp “I’ll be in my room”, Tina trudged up the steps and headed for the room she’d grown up in.
She flipped on the light, closed the door behind her, and stood staring around the room and voyaging into her past. Her hazel eyes were drawn to the four, framed, 8×10’s standing proudly on her dresser. All four of them complete with her smiling face and her ex-boyfriend’s arms around her waist. Tina walked right over to those pictures and stared at them for a moment. Remembering a time when Eric was the highlight of her existence. The reason she squealed and giggled and felt like a million bucks. She let her eyes play tricks and moved Bette’s face over Eric’s. Imagined the feel of Bette’s arms around her waist. Her dark-haired lover’s scent tickling her sense.
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What a wonderful suprise!!! SO GLAD to see this post. My Abolute Favorite fan fic. Wonderful as always!!! Looking forward to the post ONCE A WEEK!!!! U have been missed!!!
I was so excited to see your post. I miss your stories.
Welcome back MTS!! I was so glad to see your post! thanks for continuing the story. pps
OMG, i’m soooo happy to see you’re back!!! i loved this chapter!! uh-oh, trouble at the Kennard casa? Please let B&T be ok!! post soon, plz!
Oh, so good to see your posting. Welcome back!
Hello MTS, I have just finished consuming your latest adorable adventure. I feel like an addict ready for my next fix. Your words haunt me as the bonds between mother and child are examined. Janice is only now starting to appreciate the joy that her daugther can bring to her life. While Tracy knows that something is different about her child. Tina isn’t helping matters with her secrecy and odd behavior. The mirroring of these events is awesome. As always, MTS, you provoke and makes us all think. Brilliant. Just loving it all. many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Hello Miss MTS… so glad to see you back on the road with this story… Looking forward to the rollercoaster you’ll be creating with this FF.
It’s fantastic. Really great. I hope they arent actually apart for 3 months. That would be terrible. pps.
Tina’s mom is so close to guessing what is going on with Tina. It is nice to see that Bette is getting the royal treatment. Before Bette was all stressed but now she is more relaxed and now it is Tina’s turn to stress out.
well for people who really dont even know that lezzies exist, there minds cant even go there. its funny when they figure it out tho. thx, glad your back.
I’m so glad to see you post! You have no idea how much I love the two other stories that preceded this one. Thanks for taking the time to continue with this series. ;D
U have been MISSED!!!!
I smell trouble in the form of Tracy Kennard. How cute is “Tiny Tina and Baby Bette” huh. I’m so glad you’re giving this a 3rd dimension. Lookin forward for more!
I was only thinking yesterday how much I missed this story, was even going to PM but then thought ‘no pressure’ and here u r. That was ssssoooooooo intense & I hate them being apart as much as they do. I wanna say PPS but no pressure. Thx.
I’m happy you see you back. I loved the others two stories of Roommate. Which way you may go with B&T. I hope without much drama and a happy end for this two as a happy married couple.
Hey MTS, It is so wonderful and a real treat to have you back on the site and posting more of this magnificent melodrama. I just adore everything you have wriiten. Can’t wait to immerse myself in your delicious drama. I’ll be back when I’ve read this new chapter. SO excited that I can hardly make sense of the words. Yippee!!! Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Such a amazing suprise to see you posted again! Great chapter. I think it’s safe to say that a lot of us have been in this situation with their mother much like Tina is right now. I can only wish her the best. Please post again soon.
yeah your back!! been waiting for this story….will tina tell her mom? i think her mom will figure it out soon enough… mom always seem to know these things..:)
I am glad you brought us the next phase of the story. I am liking that Bette and Janice have this time to bond and get to know one another. Tracy is being a rude unsupportive bitch to Tina and then wonders why Tina won’t talk to her. Maybe if she treated her with a little respect Tina wouldn’t feel so terrified of being herself. Fantastic writing!
Hey, u r back wt another “season”. This is great!! Thanks for coming back n pls keep posting as best u can.
Glad to see this story back! Thanks!
wow, you’re back!!!!! i’m so excited about this next part…i hope tina’s parents will understand when the truth will come out
welcome back ! its nice to read your story again i missed this one thanks for posting and taking the time to write again
That was great and love it!