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Angelica bit her lower lip as she ran up to the house – impatient and excited. She waited on the porch for her mother, who brought her purse high up onto her shoulder. Tina sighed quite heavily.
“Angie, are you sure you didn’t leave anything in there? I thought you had leftovers?”
“No, Mom! Come on.”
“I’m coming,” Tina chuckled, finally stepping up the steps with her keys just as flustering as they always were. Why did she have so many keys? “Where is your key, hunny?”
“I left it in my room,” Angelica lied, smiling as she stepped aside to make way for her oblivious mother. She sucked in a deep breath as her mother unlocked the door. “Love you Mom!” She hadn’t meant it to be so loud.
Tina let out a slanted smile, tilting her head along with it. “I love you too, hunny.”
Angelica clapped her hands. “Okay. Just … open the door.” She was quick on her feet. “Come on, Mom. I have to go to the bathroom!”
Tina chuckled once more, and pushed the door open, half-stumbling inside the dimly lit living area – quickly looking out to the romantic atmosphere with a stint of confusion. What … is going on? Romantic setting? Am I missing something? Anniversary? No … what the hell … And then she saw Bette move in from the kitchen, holding nothing in her hands. Not even the usual glass of water that seemed commonplace in her grasp. Bette simply had her hands folded together, twisting them even.
“T.”
“What’s … going on?” Tina asked as calmly as she could, glancing back to see Angelica grinning up at her. And when she realized the mischievous look, Tina looked back to Bette. “What are you two up to?”
Bette stood rather nervously, with her arms at her sides, her palms sweaty and her smile turning up when she saw Tina’s smile. She waited for the strength to speak.
“And why is it so dark in here?” Tina chuckled, hearing that Angelica had closed the door behind them. And slowly, her little girl pushed her closer, the hands leaving her back as she stood before Bette. She spoke a little softer, seeing something special in Bette’s eyes. A glow. Her second question was more intimate. “What’s going on?”
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Thanks for updating, loved it
You have excellent taste in story soundtacks. Awesome update 😉 you just continue to rock my world. Thanks GR 👍
Woo great! I love this
Thanks so much! Love seeing new updates :)
Aw man love this story GR!! Thanks GR!! :D
to say it in Bette’s words:”All you readres, thank GR for this wonderful and heartmelting strory!”Thanks GR!BTW: where’s is the link to the song?
Still making it real.
Okay sorry I found the Link to the song.It’s a beautiful song.Thanks!PPS
Thank you GR for another amazing chapter!! :-) so beautiful and lovely proposal! Reading about their reaction after that is so heart warming! Sweet and lovely tender moments! And how cute they are as a family!! ;-) ha3… I can picture such a wedding cake with 2 brides on top and one child climbing there :-D lol PPVS! I hope you’ll have time for posting more updates… Thanks again GR :-)
Such a sweet chapter.Thank you very much.PPS
I love this story so much! I really hope it doesn’t just end after the wedding. The characters are so complex and I feel like we’ve gotten see their personalities revealed in such detail that it would be great to see some their adventures as a new family.
Ditto to all of the above comments. You are a gifted writer and we all appreciate your hard work and effort to create wonderful stories. This story is so incredible with how you’ve written it with details and their personalities. Thank you.
Ditto to all of the above comments. You are a gifted writer and we all appreciate your hard work and effort to create wonderful stories. This story is so incredible with how you’ve written it with details and their personalities. Thank you.
Ditto to all of the above comments. You are a gifted writer and we all appreciate your hard work and effort to create wonderful stories. This story is so incredible with how you’ve written it with details and their personalities. Thank you.