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The Shipwreck
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“Go home? Do I have to go away?”
“No, I go home”
“Oh” she wanted to go home. “Where do you live?”
She got up, ignoring the pain. She started walking, turning around to see if I was following her. And follow I did. We walked and she would stumble once in a while, and I was there to support her. “Easy”
“Easy?” she raised an eyebrow.
“No, I mean” I laughed. She thought that maybe I was telling her all this was easy, and it surely wasn’t. “Go slow… easy”
She looked at me, pensive, then looked up as if she was thinking something. But as I noticed from the first time we had been together, she would do that when she was memorizing the new word she had just learned.
Bette invited me into a cave, pointing and saying “Home”
It was the first time in months. I wasn’t expecting anything but a few rocks scattered here and there, instead, that actually looked like a place where I would live in, it was even better than my tent. There was a bed and furniture on which I noticed there were placed some photographs. On the other side, on a little table there was a tape recorder. I was too caught up in the moment that I totally forgot the hurting woman. Her growl pushed me back to reality. Looking back at her I saw she diving into bed, going limp. I took a moment to look at her. She was so beautiful and at the same time so fragile. I was battling with all the feelings I had at that moment. How could I possibly fall for a woman like that? Was it even possible to fall for a woman? All my life, I lived it with my parents and friends telling me that once I grew up I would have found a handsome man, married him and gave him a beautiful family. But looking at her, all those thoughts seemed so wrong.
I wend beside the bed and studied her body. She wore a top and a skirt, both made out of animal skin, lynx maybe. The flesh visible between the two pieces of clothing totally left me breathless. She was so toned; the stomach raising made her muscles dance and I felt going weak by the thought of caressing them. And her legs, oh those legs. So long and toned as well, I pictured them winded around my waist. “Good Lord” I breathed out as I spoke.
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Thank you for the new part!
Tina, you are not lost – you always can return to Bette in her cave and stay with her. I think she wouldn’t mind)
Hi Bette0Porter,
You are spoiling us with those chapters in short time! Keep them coming.
Tina lost, no please turn straight back to Bette!!!
So they are already a few months on the island and Tina was able to hold Bette a secret all those months. But she will leave soon now the ship is repaired and leave Bette behind 😟 What will happen?
I still wonder about Bette and how she seems to be the only one living on the island? How did she get the furniture,? Is it washed up on the beach?
I hope you will explain soon what Bette’s story is!
So many questions to answer my dear Bette0Porter! Maybe a new chapter tomorrow?
Thank you so much for the regularly post!
Hey Bette0Porter:
Great chapter, so, Bette has the commodities of the civilized world; and she knows how to use them, I see several possibilities, but I rather wait till you tell us what happened with her.
I think it’s unanimous, we all want Tina passes the night in Bette’s cave, I think even Bette wants that.
But, my concern is the bunch of losers, they will come looking for her and may discover Bette.
Thanks for this wonderful chapter, and pps.
P
I think Bette not telling the truth – what she’s doing on the tree? And she can’t just lie unconscious for two days until Tina found her. So what she’s doing?
Thank you and waiting for update!
P.S I also think that Tina could spend the night with Bette.
Great Story!
So many questions!
So looking forward to your answers!
Coping with the short Chapters while you post daily:-)
Thanks for posting
SG
hola me encanta esta historia y ya me tienes entretenida esperando que subas el otro gracias
Tina is obviously not thinking or very young and immature. She finds Bette unconscienous from a fall from a tree. She has been on the ground for two days? I think the story said a week? She appears to be able to walk, but if she has been out for any period of time, she needs water immediately. A splash on the face to revitize her is insufficent, after all they are in a tropical climate exposed to the changing temperatures of the day and night, lying on the ground for many hours.. She proabobly needs water and food. Tina should at least stay with her until she is certain that there are no residual serious injuries – head trama or internal injuries. Since Bette is living alone, Tina is the only candidate to provide her care until she is certain Bette can provide for herself. Is there water and food in the cave? How does Bette provide herself with food? Tina realizing that night has come, is far more anixious to keep her secret friendship and adventures, than Bette’s well being. Yes, she has treated the superfiscal flesh wounds but she has given no consideration to whether Bette is in a position to take care of her own needs once she leaves the cave. If Tina’s motivation is to keep Bette safe, then she has missed the potential problems that Bette’s situation may have. I was surprised that Tina considered leaving the cave at all until she was satisfied that Bette has what she needs to recover from this fall.
This is an excellent story and I am enjoying it immensely. I see many possiblities for the continuation of this story but I will let the author determine that path. Keep up the good work…hope to see another chapter soon.