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‘Well anyway, I’m going to get a drink and try and find Alice’ She nodded her head and turned around. At the bar, she ordered another shot and a double drink, Jen wasn’t there and she was served by a unhappy looking man. She sat on a spare stool trying to centre her thoughts taking several deep breaths. This is just stupid she thought, there is nothing there I don’t think she even regards me as a friend, just a work colleague.
She downed her shot and asked for another. Bette couldn’t help glancing over in Tina’s direction but she had moved. Eric was still there, making inane chatter to the guy he was stood next to. She was about to get up and see if she could find Alice when she felt someone behind her.
‘Boo’ Tina said close to the brunettes ear. Bette’s neck tingled and she had shivers travel up and down her spine. It took all her control to speak.
‘Hi there’ She tried to control her breathing, she couldn’t handle Tina so close to her. As Bette sat there, Tina leaned over her and rested an arm on the bar. Bette tried to move out of the way but was being pressed by something behind her. She could smell her perfume. It was intoxicating. Her neck had to be a few inches from her lips and she had to swallow to stop herself doing anything else.
‘Just getting a drink, you want one?’ Tina asked. She glanced back at Bette and once again held her eye contact for longer than necessary.
‘Uh, yea, umm tequila please.’
‘On the hard stuff are you?’ She ordered turning away from her. Tina was still leaning over Bette and this view was no better in helping her regain control. She could see the nape of Tina’s neck and just longed to bring her lips to it.
Within seconds, it was gone. ‘Here you go.’ She handed Bette the shot. ‘Now, I have one as well but I have a more fun way to drink it if you’re up for it? Unless I’m going to make things awkward for you to find out about Jen.’ She shot Bette a look, a glint in her eye that made Bette’s knees tremble. Thank god for the stool.
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Great start!! PPS
Oh – wow!!! Great start. Please post soon!!!
amazing please contined i like it thank you moooorrreeee please!!!
great one pps
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
you should definitely continue. don’t stop
Wow! I am impressed with setting and storyline… Tina being a bit more alpha. Liking your beginning and so hoping that you continue with a long, frequently posted story. Thank you!
Wonderful start. Thank you and waiting to read more.
The body is very well written. The subject, well I’m a skeptic when it comes to people in relationships who window shop. I hope Bette does the right thing and not let her other body parts think for her. Go easy on her, great start. Thank you 😘
Awesome start please keep it going!!!
Wow that was such an amazing start. Please keep going, I love it !
You got me really interested! Great start!
Great start :) PPS!!!
Please continue, you are a good writer
Great start.Bette is really in trouble.PPS
Good start, like it!
When I started my first fan fic in no way was ut written this good. So be proud of yourself for what you’ve accomplished. And just so you know I think your readers already want more. Including me.