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‘Sure, go for it.’ She replied, trying to make her voice steady.
‘Two words, Body Shots.’ She grinned at Bette, enjoying the crimson that was slowly spreading up from Bette’s collar. ‘Ok, well I’ll sprinkle the salt… here…’ she used the shaker to place some salt on her collar bone ‘and the lemon here’ she took the lemon slice in her mouth so that she was holding the fruit towards Bette. ‘Dare you’ she mumbled. Her eyes were sparkling and her eyebrow twitched up.
Bette hesitated but then with a boldness she normally reserved for other women, she leaned in so that her body was pressed against Tina’s. She could take it no longer; this flirting was driving her insane. Bette had one arm around her waist as she leant down and put her lips to Tina’s ear. Bette’s breath caught and she almost couldn’t say anything. Being this close to Tina was more bewildering than she ever imagined. She swallowed hard, her confidence surging forward.
‘You do realise that this is considered flirting and with me you have to be very… very.. careful… I like it.’
Bette felt Tina’s side twitch and heard a gasp escape her mouth. That was all the encouragement she needed. Lingering for just a moment near her neck, Bette kept her hand on Tina’s hip and licked the salt ever so slowly from her collar bone. The salt mingled with the taste of her skin and it took all her effort to actually drink the shot she was holding in the other hand. She lingered around Tina’s neck before eventually pulling away. She tossed the drink back and slowly leaned in to take the lemon slice. She moved her hand from Tina’s waist to the back of her head and held it gently in the palm of her hand as she tilted her face. Their lips touched for the briefest moment as she sucked the lemon into her mouth. As Bette opened her eyes, she removed the rind from her mouth, moved back and looked at Tina. Her lips tingled, her breath came in short sharp bursts. She removed her hand from Tina’s neck, slowly and let it flit lightly across her shoulder. Tina’s eyes were still closed and she looked like she was holding her breath.
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Great start!! PPS
Oh – wow!!! Great start. Please post soon!!!
amazing please contined i like it thank you moooorrreeee please!!!
great one pps
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
you should definitely continue. don’t stop
Wow! I am impressed with setting and storyline… Tina being a bit more alpha. Liking your beginning and so hoping that you continue with a long, frequently posted story. Thank you!
Wonderful start. Thank you and waiting to read more.
The body is very well written. The subject, well I’m a skeptic when it comes to people in relationships who window shop. I hope Bette does the right thing and not let her other body parts think for her. Go easy on her, great start. Thank you 😘
Awesome start please keep it going!!!
Wow that was such an amazing start. Please keep going, I love it !
You got me really interested! Great start!
Great start :) PPS!!!
Please continue, you are a good writer
Great start.Bette is really in trouble.PPS
Good start, like it!
When I started my first fan fic in no way was ut written this good. So be proud of yourself for what you’ve accomplished. And just so you know I think your readers already want more. Including me.